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Nelson Mandela was a violent person at first before he went to prison, But through his time being there he realizes that Violence wasn't the right way, Nelson Mandela was a strong man

Edit :Nelson Mandela was a violent person before he went to prison, through his physical and mental difficulties he realizes that violence wasn't the right way and encouraged all South Africans to be non violent 

 
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Nelson wanted peace instead of violence when he went to prison he learned that violence was not the right choice
^^^ does not answer the first part of the question!

Edit: Nelsons desire for a peaceful country came from his difficult experiences in jail, where he learned the importance of non violance

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Even though Nelson was faced with many trials and adversity when he was  in jail,  he became a better person and became a peaceful man and shared this with all South Africans.
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Nelson Mandela learned that peace is the way to go not violence 
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after facing many hardships in prison
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Nelson Mandela learned to use peace in prison. I believe this because Mandela used to use violence to solve his issues which got him 27 years in prison. In prison he was beaten, made fun of & treated poorly until he later on began to learn to use peace by compromising with the guards. That taught him that maybe peace gives power. The more respected you are, the more people you have on your side. This is how he became president
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Nelson Mandela's life in prison was very difficult because he couldn't see his wife or kids for a very long time. When he got out of jail, he realize that violence isn't the answer the only answer he realize is peace. Like when his kids or grandkids were teasing and making fun out of the men he told them to stop doing that and do better like they can be better than them.

^^^^ these are better examples of evidence 
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Nelson Mandela's perspectives changed through  the hardships he faced in prison, teaching him the importance of non violence for all of South Africa
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Nelson mandela's life in prison was difficult for him, he was not a

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Nelson Mandela was a violent person at first before he went to prison, But through his time being there he realizes that Violence wasn't the right way, Nelson Mandela was a strong man

Edit :Nelson Mandela was a violent person before he went to prison, through his physical and mental difficulties he realizes that violence wasn't the right way and encouraged all South Africans to be non violent 

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against the Europeans, he knew that it will only bring more chaos to the country.

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Although his wife wanted to fight against the Europeans, he knew that it will only bring more chaos to the country.

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Choice 1: What was Mandela's life like while he was in prison? How did this help change South Africa after he was released from Prison? (what did Nelson learn in prison)

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Choice 1: What was Mandela's life like while he was in prison? How did this help change South Africa after he was released from Prison? (what did Nelson learn in prison)

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Does your topic sentence make a claim about Nelson Mandela's impact on South Africa

Did you describe his life in prison?

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Choice 2:How does Nelson show strength in facing adversity (difficulties) throughout his life? Give three examples from the movie?

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Choice 2:How does Nelson show strength in facing adversity (difficulties) throughout his life? Give three examples from the movie?

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Pick a word to describe how he faced adversity (humility, respect, peacefully etc.)

You may need to acknowledge that it changes too

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Try not to use the words "I, me, my, you, we, us, your, mine

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Try not to use the words "I, me, my, you, we, us, your, mine

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Don't start a paragraph with: and, so, or but.

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Don't start a paragraph with: and, so, or but.

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Although Nelson Mandela ended his life being a peaceful man he did not always face his difficulties using non violence.

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Nelson Mandela is a strong man because he changed his ways and became a peaceful protestor instead of a violent one.

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Nelson Mandela was a Strong man because, He faces problems with strength and an open mind, He wants piece for his people.

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He wanted his people to have the right to vote, so he gave out his life in order to change things between the whites and the Africans.

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Nelson Mandela was in prison and very helpful to him because he learned that violence only led to more violence,however if you use love you get love back. he bettered himself and learned a peaceful way

Edit: Nelson Mandela's time in prison  was  very helpful to him because he learned that violence only led to more violence and that people use love they get love back and he shared this with others.

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Nelson Mandela beliefs and viewpoints changed while in prison that helped change South Africa's viewpoints on violence.

Evidence
While in prison, Mandela was beaten physically and mentally by the guards and thoughts of violence. He realised his mistakes and changed from a violent man to peaceful man with the help of his friends and family. This helped South Africa change its point of view by showing peace is the only solution. In conclusion, Mandela's change of viewpoints helped to show South Africa that peace is  very powerful than violence.

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Nelson Mandela was an educated man which helped him face adversity because the more he experienced, the more he truly learned more about the people of South Africa and how to bring peace to everyone.

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Nelson Mandelaś life in prison was hard for him they did a lot of labor work.He did not enjoy it he added pictures of his wife and kids in his cellar.They had to do their business in buckets and were treated poorly.
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Although Nelson Mandela ended his life believing in peace, in the past he had a different approach to fighting for justice.

Use this as transition sentence:  Mandela was a wise man because he has experience due to fight the same war two different ways, through peace and through violence. Mandela went from blowing up buildings to stopping people from killing each other.

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Nelson Mandela was a violent person at first before he went to prison, But through his time being there he realizes that Violence wasn't the right way, Nelson Mandela was a strong man

Edit :Nelson Mandela was a violent person before he went to prison, through his physical and mental difficulties he realizes that violence wasn't the right way and encouraged all South Africans to be non violent

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Nelson wanted peace instead of violence when he went to prison he learned that violence was not the right choice
^^^ does not answer the first part of the question!

Edit: Nelsons desire for a peaceful country came from his difficult experiences in jail, where he learned the importance of non violance

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Even though Nelson was faced with many trials and adversity when he was in jail, he became a better person and became a peaceful man and shared this with all South Africans.

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Nelson Mandela learned that peace is the way to go not violence
Edit add this at the end:
after facing many hardships in prison

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Nelson Mandela learned to use peace in prison. I believe this because Mandela used to use violence to solve his issues which got him 27 years in prison. In prison he was beaten, made fun of & treated poorly until he later on began to learn to use peace by compromising with the guards. That taught him that maybe peace gives power. The more respected you are, the more people you have on your side. This is how he became president

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Nelson Mandela's life in prison was very difficult because he couldn't see his wife or kids for a very long time. When he got out of jail, he realize that violence isn't the answer the only answer he realize is peace. Like when his kids or grandkids were teasing and making fun out of the men he told them to stop doing that and do better like they can be better than them.

^^^^ these are better examples of evidence

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Nelson Mandela's perspectives changed through  the hardships he faced in prison, teaching him the importance of non violence for all of South Africa

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Nelson mandela's life in prison was difficult for him, he was not able to see his wisdom wife or kids and while he was in there his wife was changing the ountry he tried so hard to make peace in she was starting a warm and killing all her people.
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Nelson's  life in prison was earning his respect from white cops and then changed south Africa to peace instead of violence but his life in prison was miserable for a long time

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Nelson's  life in prison was miserable, it taught him how to earn respect from a others, this changed South Africa to use  peace instead of violence

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Choice 1                                                       Nelson Mandela learned how to use peace over violence.

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Choice 1                                                       Nelson Mandela learned how to use peace over violence.

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This does not tell how prison was for him

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Nelson Mandela's was faced with adversity constantly he lost his wife due to what he was doing. His friends was beaten and killed. He was thrown in jail for a long time.
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Nelson Mandela was very unhappy in prison until he found peace.

This is not very specific and does not go into details.

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Nelsons life in prison was harsh,  he wanted the guards to respect him through peace. He showed South Africa how to find peace

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Nelson Mandela had a rough life going through prison. Not only that but a lot had been changing in Africa at the time. The violence got worse, people started killing own, and police/military got more aggressive

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Nelson Mandela suffered alot of hatred due to skin color but changed over time.

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These are good examples of his difficulties in prison.
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Nelson Mandela's life in prison was difficult for him because was not able to see his kids and wife for a long time. He was informed about his son's death in a note, and he was not able to see him. Throught his life in prison, he knew that the only way to be respected was to take baby steps. After he was released from prison, he became non-violent and wanted the people to be also non-vioent. Although his wife wanted to fight against the Europeans, he knew that it will only bring more chaos to the country.

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His life in prison was horrible. Just like anyone could expect it to be. he was angry, sad, stressed (etc) His life was rough there. He was worried about the life outside like what was going on in Africa. Going into prison he was all for violence, but coming out of prison made him change his mind about violence. I feel as though his prison life made him change his mind.

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Nelsons life in prison was hard. Overtime he reflected on actions that got him here and relised violence with violence wouldnt work and fought with peace. This helped southafrica because his talks with the white leaders got his people freedom

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Nelson Mandela's life in prison was hard because he was beaten physically and mentally,  it changed South Africa  because Nelson learned the importance of peace and encouraged others to be peaceful .

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respected more because he wanted only peace and no violence.
but he still managed to gain the Respect of the guards and got pants

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the things that he had to overcome. The white people putting him down. him going to prison. his wife choosing to attack white people. much more stuff and yeah.

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Nelson mandela is a strong man because he went through a lot of hardships in his life such as people that he loved dying, and spending most of his life in prison.

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Topic Sentence :Nelson Mandela's life in prison was difficult, this taught him the importance of nonviolence, which he shared with all South Africans

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When Mandela first arrived to prison he was miserable and weak. He felt like he had no more power left in him. Mandela felt lost and he believed that there was nothing more he could do. Nelson Mandela had a negative and violent mindset when he was put into prison. This negative mindset didn't get him anywhere which led to bigger issues. As a result, Nelson faced discrimination and he was treated as if he was nothing. Mandela learned from these brutal actions and he fought for peace and equality.

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Nelson Mandela changed his point of views in prison and changed South Africa for the better.

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Nelson Mandela physical and mental difficulties in prison helped changed his point of views on violence changed South Africa for the better.

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Nelson Mandela faces his problems first by violence as he first blew up a government building to fight for freedom. When he is caught he first is hostile, but over time builds relationships with the guards. Once he is out of jail he faces his problems with peace, and him showing peace ended up working and overcame inequality.

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While Mandela was in prison he learned that violence is not the answer. After he was released he help and thought South africa to forgive.Like when the little boys were teasing the guards and he told them to stop because they can be better then them.

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Nelson learned from his terrible experiences in prison, that people shouldn't judge people by their skin, this helped South African's find peace.

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Nelson Mandela became non violent by experiencing pain and hardship in prison ,  this helped South Africa because they became non violent too.