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THE FITNESS GRAHAM PACER TEST

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-Oliver

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In my opinion, I think my evidence needs a bit of work, its weak and it may need improvement.

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1. My first page is good, the rest of them are bad.

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i need improvement in the paragraphs section not because of it not having enough details it because of its punication

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Some parts that i have done well are the intro. Some parts that i could have some help on is the rebuttal.

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i am not shour

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probably my intro or my third main reason . I would like feedback on the three main reasons of my papered things like or similar to that

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the quotes

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1. introduction
2. body

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my ideas are a bit weak and don't go in order from what happens from beginning to end.....

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I feel that part that I need to improve on is my transitions and my first paragraph's supporting reasons. So, I would like productive feedback on those parts.
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I need to improve my conclusion and I would like feedback for my introduction and conclusion.

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I think my evidence is good but maybe my reasoning and transitions could use some work. Also my honor section(first parish on the organizer). I would like feedback

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I need improving in the middle of my essay. I would like feed back on the ending because it really isn't strong enough. My body i need help on.🤔

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I feel strong about my reason on why i think Joel is not honorable but i think i could use improvement with like supportive evidence also i need to improve with the quotes.😉

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I think that how i start my sentences is something that i need help on i would like feed back on my conclusion and i also need help on that.

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I need to improve my rebuttal. It might be good, it might not, I'm not sure. I didn't state a very good reason that it is wrong, even though it is. I think my intro is very good and I would like feedback on it.
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I think I could improve on my my topic sentences on my body paragraph sentences, andI would like feedback on my body paragraphs.

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i think it all ends some improvement mainly my evidence and reasoning though
and i feel that he could look on my topic sentenceing

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Some areas that need improvement are not repeating things in my writing. Over all, I do think Idi

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I think that my rebuttal may need some improvement because I wasn't really sure about how to make it. And, I would like feedback on all parts of my paper.

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My conclusion
I can't firgerout how to start continue and end it.

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🔵 I think that it all needs improvement, but, I think my 2nd body area thingy needs the most improvement. 🔵 ★I would like feedback on all of my paper.☆

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I think th

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Some areas of improvement on my paper are all of them but the most one that needs  improvement is my addressing the counter claim because i did both so i don't know if i will get points taken off.
The paper that I would like feedback on is all because i want to know if I did decent.