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ALIYAH RAZAK
1) Your topic was interesting. everything was good maybe next time you should present with a loud and clear voice :)

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FATIN HAMZAH
1. next time could you please include some more interesting activity? because I found its really enjoyed! well done (intan)
2. i like the way you present your topic. you have a loud and clear voice. tbh, nothing is wrong ! (ain)
3) Interesting topic and different from others! The hypnosis activity is fun and we really enjoyed it.
4) i have been hypnotized during you presentation, good job fatin. you did so well.

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AZREEN NAZRINA- interesting topic. well prepared.
INTERESTING TOPIC! WELL-DONE!
2) your presentation was great. improve your eye contact and need more body gestures.

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IZZATI AMIRAH
1) YOUR TOPIC WERE INTERESTING. BUT I GET BORED WHEN YOU TAKE A LONG TIME FOR PRESENT.
2) your voice loud and a lot of sharings. maybe you should control the time not too long and not too short. good luck.
3) You don't have to blame audience if they got passive, maybe your presentation makes them boring because it takes too much times and too much facts.

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NURUL FARHANIS
first of all your topic were really interesting. However, your video is too long and you should have enough explanation. but for overall, you did really well.keep up the good work
2) i love the part we were singing together, for me you are brave and have high confident to conduct your presentation. maybe this time you looked nervous. good luck

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1) Taufik presented interesting topic..nice PowerPoint but just need to improve vocabulary, grammar and English pronunciation .Good job Taufik! (azzah).
2) you have talent in entertaining your audience, reduce your terengganu accent, and speak more confident. i know you can do it!

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KU NUR ATIA
first of all i like to say thank you for your information about sleep deprivation. it is very informative but your voice must be more clear. however, your explanation is really good. keep it up. good work.
2) good topic, maybe you should speak more confident :)

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RAHIMAH GHANI
1) You did well, but you need to improve eye contact with audience and do present with confident.

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AZZAHRAWANI ALIAS
1) interesting topic and nice pronunciation but just need louder your voice and more ice contact with audience. Good job (taufik)
2)your voice is intoxicating (haha) and nice topic (ain)
3) nice presentation, just improve your pronunciation. else was good. :)

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SUHAIMI
emi nice topic about playing games but PowerPoint should be simple not to must word(taufik)
2) interesting topic but i think you need to be more clear in your explanation (ain)
3) silly jokes is your strenghts, audience are not sleepy and entertained during you presentations. be more confident. good job!

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NAZIHAH NAPHIA
1. it is interesting how you use our classmate as an example. keep it up (ain)
2. Nazihah can speak well in English. your accent was cool. keep it up

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NUR AMALINA AFIQAH
1) YOU ARE AMAZING! KEEP IT UP! I ADORE THE WAY YOU PRESENT SO MUCH. INTERESTING TOPIC AND GOOD EXPLAINATION!
2) interesting topic! the way you present was almost perfect. keep it up.

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NORAIMAH MANDA
1) YOU NEED TO FIX YOUR INTONATION WHEN YOU ARE PRESENTING BECAUSE SOMETIMES YOU SEEM LIKE SCREAMING AND YOUR VIDEO NEED TO MATCH WITH YOUR TOPIC. OTHER THAT THAT, OK
2. as usual, you present confidently. maybe need more elaborations. put smiles.

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SHAMSUL FAEEZ- Good job faeez and mr.pushi. Nice slide presentatation.Louder your voice. (Nurul Atiqah)
2. the pusheen idea is very interesting but your focus are on your topic not on that cat. nice idea btw (ain)

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AINAA AMANINA
1. you've a good presentation but need to louder your voice (intan)
2. speak more confident because you can do better if you do so.

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IDAWATI
1) your PowerPoint is too simple and short.(taufik
2. you took so much time, eye contact need to be improved. good luck :)

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NABILA AMIRA
1. you have a good voice but you need to have a focus in your topic

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ZULHUSMI
1) you had confident with your presentation but lack of content. (taufik)
2) OVERALL OK, NEXT TIME YOU NEED TO BE MORE SERIOUS

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INTAN AMANINA
1. you are doing very well if you can control your nervous. (ain)

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AIN MAHIRAH
i like the way how you present. Really did well, your the slide are very colorfull. keep up the good work
2) Nice topic and good explanation.
3) Your slides always the best, creative! good job ! maybe put more smiles on your face because you looked serious during presentation :) :)

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AMIRUL AZIZI
Lets sing married song again next time..haha
you have done well with your presentation. your content are easily to understand. Keep up the good work.
2. you are so convincing but i think you need to justify the music in your context because music is not always about singing or dancing
3) the way you present was really convincing. good job

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ZAHIDAH RAMAN
1. you have a good explanation and your voice are clear as well, but if you read  script, you will lose interaction with your audience

2) I really like the real story that you put in your presentation. Be more prepared next time so that you are not reading the script :)
3) ida need to put smile on your face, you looked nervous. i know you can do better.

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NURUL ATIQAH -
1.Good explanation with evidence. Good Job Atiqah
2. you've a potency to speak well in English. keep it up! (intan)
3. i had always admire your presentation but in this case, you seems to lose you focus.
4) Good explanation but try to add some creativity in your presentation :)

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NURUL AMANINA - Good point. I will pay attention to my future children education later
2) You are doing good but be more prepared next time :)
3) good presentation, please be prepared next time and don't be so nervous.

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NORSHARIKIN NADZIRAH BINTI MUSTAKIN -
1. Hi Pres! Interesting topic and you give good explanation there.  Keep it up.
2. Hai ikin! I like your presentation, its really clear but it will becomes sweeter if you put a little smile on your lips. peace! (intan)
3. you have a loud and clear voice, but you still need to know how to pronounce a word correctly.

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NUR BALQIS YUSRA - I like your presentation. You have a loud voice and you're not nervous when you presenting.
2. your point is interesting but you need to explain it critically
3) Nice presentation but give more explanation on the contents :)
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ZULAIHA KHAMIS -
1) Interesting topic  but your voice need to be louder and don't be nervous. Anyway your slide is interesting.
2)  i like your confidence level but make sure you know how to pronounce certain word. keep it up
3) Good presentation but try to control your nervous :)
4) I know you are little bit nervous but is okay. you doing good job :) (hanis)
5) zu always nervous, i know you can do better if you are not nervous. you have potential in presentation.

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Title : Negative Health Effects Of Mobile Phone Among College Students

One of the negative health effects of using mobile phone among college students is it increases sleep disturbance. Various aspects of mobile phone use such as problem mobile phone use, addictive text messaging, problematic texting, and pathological texting are related to sleep quality...
The increase in sleep disturbance by 30 % reported among college students according to Abbey, Walter and Frank (n.d).They found that  " college  students experience a variety of sleep difficulties ranging from lack of sleep to poor sleep quality" (p.5) (as cited in Brown, Buboltz, & Soper, 2002) . Abbey et al., (n.d) found that in addition to experiencing a decreased amount of sleep, research also reveals that college students  experience poor sleep quality (as cited in ?????? Therefore, increase in sleep disturbance is one of the negative health effects of using mobile phone. The use of mobile phone can also affect your musculoskeletal problem.

The other effect  m usculoskeletal discomfort could be happened and developed if students use mobile phone for a long period of time. According to Woo et al., (2016) "the most common occupational diseases worldwide is musculoskeletal disorder and it is a major cause of long-term pain and physical disabilities disorder. Ratni (2015) stated that there are many symptoms of musculoskeletal discomfort and some of the common symptoms are students who complained that their hands felt pain/ ache and their muscles may feel like they have been pulled or overwork. The musculoskeletal discomfort happened by responds to message at rapid speed and cause pain also inflammation of your joint from constant use of mobile phones. The discomfort may cause injuries or pain in joints, ligaments, muscles, nerves, tendons and structure hand that support our hands. Only certain of college students are having musculoskeletal discomfort if they over use the mobile phones.

Another effect of using the mobile phone among the college students is it can damage the brain nerve cell. Mobile phone emits low level of electromagnetic radiation. Meanwhile, mobile phone use electromagnetic radiation in microwave range between 450 to 2100 Mhz. In addition, the radiation produce by mobile phone can cause health injury by effecting the brain of human being. Furthermore, cellular phone radiation may increase the oxidative damage and NOx level during epileptic activity in brain. Moreover, the use of phone rise in temporal and frontal lobe brains tumors and the brain regions which are highly exposed to mobile phone. Velmurugan,M.S.,(2016).(pg 4) show that an in evidence rate of 5 per 100 000 people means about 2500 newly diagnosed malignant brain tumors a year in England.

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Abbey, G. W., Walter, B. & Frank, I. (n.d).  Mobile Phone Use and Sleep Quality and Length in College Students . Source ???? Retrieved on November 17, 2016, from http://www.ijhssnet.com/journals/Vol_1_No_18_Special_Issue/7.pdf

Lai, W.K,White, P, &Woo, H.C.(2016). Manual Therapy. Musculoskeletal Impact of the Use of Various Types of Electronic Devices on University Students in Hong Kong: An Evaluation by Means of Self-Reported Questionnaire, 26,47-53. Retrieved November 17, 2016, from http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1356689X1630683X

Velmurugan, M. S. (2016). Sustainable Perspectives on Energy Consumption, EMRF, Environment, Health and Accident Risk Associated with the Use of Mobile Phones. Retrieved November 17, 2016, from http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1364032116305056

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What Are The Effects Of Mobile Phone Among College Students ?

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What Are The Effects Of Mobile Phone Among College Students ?

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1.1  Lack of sleep quality
1.1.1  On the average students were sleeping approximately 7.5 hours a night, had moderate sleep quality (occasional sleep difficulties) and were spending over 5 hours a day using their mobile phones. (White, A. G., Buboltz, W. & Igou, F. (n.d)) http://www.ijhssnet.com/journals/Vol_1_No_18_Special_Issue/7.pdf

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3.1 Mobile phone emits low levels of electromagnetic radiation. Radiation from mobile phone constituted a possible human carcinogen.
3.1.1 From the evidence show that an incidence rate of 5 per 100 000 people means about 2500 newly diagnosed malignant brain tumors a year in England. (Velmurugan, M. S., 2016)

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2.0 Develop Musculoskeletal Discomfort (hands)

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2.0 Develop Musculoskeletal Discomfort (hands)

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2.1 Responding to message at rapid speed can cause pain and inflammation of your joint from constant use of handphone.
2.1.1 There is an evidence show association that between a student using multiple electronic devices over long period of times with discomfort.  There are few students reported discomfort lasting for a month . (H.C.Woo, P White, W.K.Lai, 2016)

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Thesis statement : There are three main negative health effects of using mobile phone among college students which are increase sleep disturbance, develop musculoskeletal discomfort and damage brain cell. 

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Thesis statement : There are three main negative health effects of using mobile phone among college students which are increase sleep disturbance, develop musculoskeletal discomfort and damage brain cell. 