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To: leisure-centre@hotmail.co.uk
Subject: My concern and suggestions about the open day
Dear Sir/Madam,
Iam writing to express my concerns about the activities at the leisure centre and to make some suggestions for future improvement.
The open day event,  which I attended last week, gave people the chance  to discover new ways of keeping fit and find a sport or activity they can continue to enjoy in the future. It is more than just a gym .The Center offers brilliant facilities including swimming pool, sports hall and fitness studios . Meanwhile, adults tried free exercise classes, gym challenges, the sauna and steam room.

Despite a variety of exercising and activities, there were a lot of necessary activities that were missing , which was very disappointing.For example , there were not any activities for children as dance and gymnastics demonstrations that should also be happening on the open day.
I suggest that the open day should include activities for children as will as  for adults because the family open day is a fantastic opportunity for anyone who has not yet visited the centre to have a look around and find out more about the activities on offer there. My suggested activities that should be included in the open day are  : dance and gymnastics, junior football, family fun bootcamp.
I am looking  forward to keep my consideration and suggestions in mind .
Best regards,
Fairuz Ahmed

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Writing mock exam Task one Fairuz Ahmed 

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Writing mock exam Task one Fairuz Ahmed 

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This is the statement in support of my application to become a library volunteer  , a position which I saw advertised on your website on the 27th of May 2020.
I am applying for this position because I think I have the work experience, qualities and skills which would be required for this job. Also, I am interested in developing my experience in working with customers.

Between 2018 and 2019  I worked as a volunteer library assistant ,in our local library in King’s Norton. In this position, I was responsible for interacting with customers , answering the phone and making sure the books are returned to their place on the shelves. At the time , most of our job was sitting at the front of the desk , checking books out for customers, tiding the children’s area and helping with events at the library. I felt very excited when I was able to help people.

I have many qualities that make me think of this position , such as having a strong interest in books , reading and learning, having a desire to help children , youths and adults in a library setting.Also I have many skills that make me be an ideal  candidate for this position.for example , one skill is I have excellent communication skills in written and spoken English language. Another skill is I have good IT skills in word processing, data Recording skills,email, and internet research skills .last but not the least, I can assist readers to use computer equipment and use library systems and specialist computer applications.
In conclusion, I believe that my abilities and qualities will makes me a valuable member of your library team.

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Task 3 Fairuz Ahmed                                                        

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Demolition the old historical building to build a new shopping centre.                1-Introduction

building a new shopping centre   and luxury apartments

Demolition of the old historical  building

2- The advantages of building a new shopping centre

Save money and time

Provide accommodation

Provide job opportunities

3- The disadvantages of building a new shopping centre.

Causes an air and noise pollution

Demolition of historical building

Attracting less tourists

4.Conclusion.

Not to build the shopping centre

Stop demolition old historical building

Title: _______________________________________
by Fairuz .......
There is a plan to build a new shopping centre and expensive apartment building to replace the old historical buildings in Birmingham.There will have advantages and disadvantages.  The purpose of this article is to discuss the advantages and disadvantages and to provide my own view on the topic.
Advantages
There are many advantages of building a new shopping centre. For example, one advantage is that it can save money on travelling for people who live around the city centre .Another advantage is that it would provide much needed accommodation for people who work  in the city. Last but not the least, it will provide job opportunities because there will be many shops which will employ local people.
Disadvantages
There are many disadvantages of building a new shopping centre ,such as causing noise and air pollution, involving demolition of beautiful historical landmarks in the city, which results in loss of character and charm ,attracting less tourists who come to see historical buildings.  For example, we would lose our old library, which is a beautiful Victorian building that attracts many tourists. Also, we would lose St. Leonard's ( St. Michael, St. George) church, which is a landmark for our city. We would lose our Queen Victoria statue, which people take pictures with all the time.

My suggestion is that the company should stop demolition of the old historical buildings  because we do not want to lose the historical building in Birmingham, which was attracting tourists from everywhere to see it and we do not want that our city loses it’s character and charm . Although I think people really need  to have a build a  new shopping centre, they could chose another location in the city because the historical buildings are more important.

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Task 1 Personal statement

This a statement in support of my application to become a library volunteer, a position which I saw advertised in a newspaper on 20th May 2020.

I believe that this voluntary position would be suitable for me for the following reasons discussed below.

Firstly, I have some work experience because I worked as a volunteer in a hair and beauty salon between 2017 and 2018. In the salon, I was responsible for making appointments over the phone and placing orders online for the salon. It was a good experience in the business environment as I had the opportunity to make friends with colleagues and also meet different people. As I really enjoyed the experience. I would like to develop my experience in working with customers in academic environment by join the library.

Secondly,  I am a friendly, reliable and a supportive person, who likes to work with customers of all ages. Also, I am highly motivated and eager to learn new things on the job.

Thirdly, I have got excellent communication skills in written and spoken English at Level 2. Also, I have good computing skills such as data recording and researching. I am experienced in customer service, so I can easily interact with customers.

I believe that my abilities and qualities will make me a more valuable member of your library team and I hope to hear back from you soon.

Task 2

To: The Center organizer outlining  You need an email address

email:

Subject: Concerns and suggestion about an open day.

Dear Sir/ Madam.
I am writing to express my concerns about the activities  at the   leisure center and   to make suggestions  for future improvement.

On Wednesday 20th March I attended an open day at the local leisure center. There were many activates which were very interesting, especially the swimming pool which was very big, clean and attractive.  My concerns is the Gym room as it was very small and only few exercise equipment were available. In addition, a few activities were missing for example, football, badminton and soft play room it would have been much better if it included.  (In this paragraph you are talking about facilities, not activities which were not included. You need to write about activities.)

In my opinion gym room would be better if it was bigger to reduce the suffocation and make space for more exercise equipment.  Secondly, more activates place for children like soft play area. Thirdly, If the leisure center added different kinds of activities it will be more beneficial for our local people.  You need to develop this paragraph by referring to concrete activities, not facilities. Alsom you have to specify which activities benefit which age groups. People in general is not enough.

I hope that all the above suggestions improves the leisure center  to make it more enjoyable for people.

Task 3

Plan

Building a modern shopping center and luxury apartment Birmingham’s historical area.

1.  Introduction:

·        The place of a new building to be build

·        The purpose of new building
*the purpose of this article - very important

2.  Advantages of building a modern shopping center and luxury apartments :

·         It save money and time

·        More accommodation

·        Job opportunities

·        Attract the customers

3.   Disadvantages of build a modern shopping center and luxury apartment:

·        Losing hold and historical buildings

·        Less tourists who come to see the buildings

·        It can cause air and noise pollution
4. Conclusion
- my view

Building a modern shopping center and luxury apartment Birmingham’s historical area.

By Merertu Hailu

The new building will be located in Birmingham’s historical area.  The purpose of this building is to have a modern shopping center and luxury apartment in the city.
Add a sentence about the purpose of your article.

Advantages of building a modern shopping center and luxury apartment:

There are several advantages .................; One advantages is that people who live in the city centre are able to save their money and time by not travelling a long distance to go shopping.  Also, this building provide much needed accommodation for people who live in the city, while reduce the problem of accommodation in the city.  It will also provide job opportunities which decreases the number of people without jobs. (there is a word for people without jobs In addition to this, it will attract customers from outside the city, who will go shopping in the new shopping centre, which increases the businesses income of the city.

Disadvantages of building a modern shopping center and luxury apartment:

There are many disadvantages, such as an addition to air and noise pollution which is not good for environment friendly.  Also, it involves the demolition of beautiful historical landmarks in  city, which results in loss of character and charm. On the other hand less tourists would visit the city, which may affect the economy. DEVELOP THESE IDEAS

WRITE YOUR CONCLUSION
It is much better to keep our historical landmarks in the city.

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