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it is all about this kid who destroys others gardens that no one likes one day everything that was the colour orange slowly became the colour purple timmys hair was orange he wanted to squeeze the juice out of the last orange orange before it was too late! instead of getting his hair back to normal it changed to purple. he then decided to shave it all off. everyone made fun of him, he eventually learned his lesson.

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There was a naughty boy named Timmy every night he would wreck peoples gardens  and put the blame on the innocent boy named Joe. Then suddenly all the orange in the world slowly turned a ugly purple colour.In Joe's garden there was the very last orange orange and Timmy squeezed the fresh orange rom the tree.The next day Timmy came to school bald thinking he was smart because, he had no purple hair or any hair in that matter.

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timmy would destroy gardensbut when he went to squirt the orange to fix his hair it turned purple like an octopus once he squirted the orange juice in his mouth

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theres a boy name timmy and joe  timmy like destroying people gandens and blame it all joe was one of those people thant cant say no to anything so when the old man thougth he did it joe just took the blame.

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it is about a kid who destroys people's gardens. But one-day oranges started to turn purple.

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Timmy was destroying everyones garden for the orange oranges that they were growing but Joe took the blame for it because Timmy was Joes friend. Joes mum said that all her oranges were turning purple but none knew why, but not only did the oranges turn purple but so did Timmy's hair because that was also orange! Timmy went to school and got bullied for having purple hair. Timmy wanted to have the last orange orange so that his hair turn purple again. It didn't work so Timmy shaved off all of his hair and kept getting bullied at school.

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Timmy was a boy and he messed with people's gardens. Until he went into a garden to through out the oranges and smoosh them. Then his hair turned purple because he smashed the oranges and so all things that were orange would turn into purple and that that's what happened to Timmy

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QUESTION 1:

A friend of Joe's was a bully as he ruined everyone's gardens at night. One day Joe's mum complained about her oranges turning purple, later Joe had found out that everything orange was getting infected by purple such as Timmy's hair. Joe's Dad had warned the entire family that they had to prevent anything that could turn the last orange orange purple.  The next morning Timmy thought one thing would save his hair. He forcefully entered Joe's house and rushed straight get the last orange and squeezed the last orange onto his hair. It unfortunately didn't work and he attempted to cut all his hair off. Joe hoped he had learnt his lesson.

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so Timmy was like a bully he would go around people's gardens and destroy them and everyone thought was joe but joe wouldn't even hurt a fly, he does not like to fight with people but joe had all these complains and joe needed to do something so at school joe punched him and gave him a black eye and timmy never touched anyone's gardens

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that Timmy was a bully and that he didn't care about anyone but himself

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timmy was a mean boy who went around destroying everyones garden and blaming it on joe. Timmy kept on doing these bad things until he leant his lesson the hard way

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lazarus

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There was a kid named joe and a kid named timmy and timmy would go out at night and destroy everyones gardens.But timmy would blame joe but joe was really humble so he did not want to get timmy in trouble.But then one day joe's oranges turned purple and joe did not know what to do so he carried on and went to school and he saw timmy with different hair because his hair is usually ginger but the ginger faded away and everyone teased him.joe had one last orange orange left but timmy invited his self into joe's jouse and destroyed it and the next day he came to school with strings of and was basically bald so he learned his lesson

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The story is about a kid that destroys everyones gardens and the oranges slowly became purple and his hair was orange and he wanted to squeeze the last orange orange but his hair didnt go back to normal it changed to purple then he wanted to shave his hair off so he did that and then everyone at school made fun of hime because of his hair

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The story is about Joe who was a innocent kid who followed the rules but Timmy was the opposite, He was a bully who would go around the neighborhood wrecking everyone's gardens and blaming it on others to get himself out the situation. Joe was about to go inside his house but the mailman stops to confront JOE about wrecking everyone's garden even though it wasn't him, But joe wasn't the type of person to rat out other people (timmy) so he took the blame. Joe steps inside his house and throws himself on to the couch only to hear his mum shout at him. "WHY ARE MY ORANGE ORANGES TURNING PURPLE!?" It took a bit of time for Joe to process what had just happened, It was like he was delayed. He focused on the orange for a few days starting to notice the changes. Timmy barged into Joes house on the hunt to squeeze the last orange orange, Joe tried to hold timmy back but it was too late... Then all of a sudden the next day at school everything that was orange turned into a dull, ugly, unappealing purple colour. All of a sudden joe saw timmy and noticed something off, his hair. All of timmys orange lushious hair was gone, he was bald. Eventually all the kids teased timmy and he learned his lesson.

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lazarus

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it is a kid who was ginger and kept ruining his friends orange oranges so he ruined the last one and he turned bold

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it is a kid who was ginger and kept ruining his friends orange oranges so he ruined the last one and he turned bold

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elie

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Timmy was a mean boy who destroyed everyone's gardens and blamed others, then he learned his lesson the bad hard way

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I wonder if the story can make the moral more interesting like timmy was mean and he got karma by his hair turning orange so he knows now that he shouldn't be mean and bad.

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The story is about a kid, whos name is Timmy, that destroys gardens every night and blamed it on a kid named Joe. Timmy has ginger hair, is a troublemaker, and a big bully. But one unfortunate day every orange orange is turning purple and even Timmy's hair turned purple. So Joe took the last orange oranges and if the last orange orange vanishes then the colour orange will disappear. The following day Timmy barged in Joe's house and took the last orange orange. But when he destroys it the colour orange is gone but Timmy didn't care and squashed it. The next day Timmy had no hair since he shaved it off. Now Timmy learnt his lesson not to destroy gardens, especially ones with oranges.

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it hooked me in and gave me some intrest of what was gonna happen next

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there is a kid that ness everyone's garden then he hair goes purple then he cuts all he hair off

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there is a kid that ness everyone's garden then he hair goes purple then he cuts all he hair off

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lazarus

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the story is about this kid called timmy who destroys everyone's gardens and is a really bad bully to joe

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it was very intriguing especially about how everything orange was turning purple

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i liked the fact that the bully learnt his lesson

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There was a bad kid named timmy who destroyed people yards and the mailman thought it was a nice kid named Joe and soon everything orange started going purple except one orange from a tree.Timmys hair went purple to and then he got bullied like he did to other people so he tried to steal the orange from joe to make his hair purple but it didn't work and the next day at school Timmy had shaved his head bald and he was made fun of more.

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i wonder why timmy was a bully

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the narrator described that text and had hooks

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I like how the writer put in like techniques that i thought were interesting

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onomatopoeia- "DING DONG!"
personification- "you octopus"
personification- "Timmy looked back like a tiger hunting for prey"

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they was this kid named Timmy that nobody like not even his parents because he looked weird and Joe was the kid who never got into fights and didn't like saying no but one day all the oranges started turning purple and so did anything else orange ,so when Timmy entered the school with purple hair instead of of orange everybody laughed at him even Joe than something happened after school the secret about the oranges got out and Timmy barged into Joe's house to find the last orange that was orange Joe tried to warn him that if he destroyed the last orange orange that he would erase the everything orange and he would nevver get his orange hair back ,but it was too late he had already squeezed all the juice out of the orange and than Timmy's hair never turned back orange ,so the next day at school Timmy walk in with a bald head with little strings of hair still on his head all the kids laughed and Joe even said that he deserved it after what he had done.

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I look how the writer started with a hook and how he ended the story in a good way

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for example like a struggling grandfather clock

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What I liked about this text was how it hooked me in.

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I like how the story began with action and finished with action. I was hooked as soon as I started reading the story.

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his ginger hair twirly
octopus hair

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it was interesting because of how everything changed for him

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I wonder why timmy would always blame joe

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i like how joe gave a lesson to timmy to never touch a garden in his life

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i wonder if that the reader would put figurative language more in the text

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he put his head in a deflated pillow

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" You  Octopus " " Who is the nerd now? "

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i wonder if timmy still ruins peoples gardens

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There was onomatopeia-Ding dong
simile-timmy looked back like a tiger hunting prey.

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i wonder if the writer could add in like some more figurative language that could be interesting to read

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I love how the text flowed and how the author used a good amount of dialogue and figurative language.

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perhaps the author could make the purpose/moral of the story more clear if they added exactly what he was doing wrong and a more meaning full description.

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"Ding Dong", "twirly octopus hair" and " struggling like and old grandfather clock".

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spiral into an uncontrollable fit of laughter

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Ilike how he hooked me in instantly and how it gets you thinking about the mystery of the purple orange.

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curly ginger hair bounce with every stride.

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it hooked me in

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DING DONG an onomatopeia

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"DING DONG"

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I liked the use of onomatopoeia and other figurative language.

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1. He was a tubby
little kid whose eyebrows slanted
towards the centre of his head, like a
slingshot was drawn between his ears
down to his chin.
the author painted a picture in. the readers head
2. Joe tried to pull him back, but Timmy
locked onto the orange like a tiger
hunting for its prey.
smile
3. Joe’s Dad kept barking at him that if
anyone destroyed the last orange
orange, then the colour orange would
vanish for good.
personification like instead of saying yelling the author used the word barked.

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I wonder how the oranges turned purple and why he was a bully

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i wonder if the writer could of made it more interesting

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1st paragraph 2nd line
“You little rat!”
This figurative language is called metaphor

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I wonder if the author could have added what happened after he walked away in the foggy distance.

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I wonder if the writer could give us a reason as to why Timmy was so cruel.

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i wonder if the moral can be more interesting

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I like the start of text because the author had included onomatopoeia and had started the story with some action. An example of this would be how the mailman said " You little rat." This personally gets me hooked into the story willing to know what happens next.

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I liked how in paragraph 2 the author described Timmy really well using descriptive language and figurative language.

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elie

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simile- " eyebrows slanting towards the centre like a slingshot was drawn between his ears down to his chin" paragraph 2

onomatepoeia- "DING DONG" paragraph 1

simile-" locked onto the orange like a tiger hunting for its prey" Paragraph 8

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I wonder if the writer could explain how the orange oranges turned purple.

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I wonder if the author be more descriptive. and have less dialogue in the text

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for example like a struggling grandfather clock

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for example like a struggling grandfather clock

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elie

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i wonder what would of happend if he didnt step on the oreanges 

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i wonder what would of happend if he didnt step on the oreanges 

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The text hooked me in and had us on a cliffhanger and at the end of the story the bully learned his lesson which i liked.

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example 1: "He buried his head into the deflated pillow."

Example 2: "A tiger hunting for it's prey."

Example 3: "He jumped onto the tattered couch."

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i wonder if the author can use more figurative and descriptive writing.

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ding dong and joe struggling to process the words like a struggling grandfather clock

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maybe make the story more humorous

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I like how he described the characters and how he hooked in the reader with the first sentences.

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Like a struggling grandfather clock.

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I wonder if the author could have made a scenario that was a bit more intense.

I wonder if the author could have created an even harsher consequence for Timmy.

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I wonder if the writer could write what happened after Timmy walked in and I also wonder id the writer could add more figurative to their story.