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You talked about most of the things in detail

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www: i like you ideas of what can make you house more attractive to people

ebi: less laughing

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WWW: you explained each slide very well and it was laid out very nice. you also explained each topic and had very detailed paragraphs that was easy to see

EBI: maybe you could've added more photos which would really convince the audience

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WWW: I like that you used wind turbines and solar panels in your house since it is very sustainable.

EBI: You should not read off the screen and you should look at your audience more and be more specific with the materials that you used in your house.

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www: You explained well your points. You equally spoke the same amount. You included eco friendly materials and added a local Market.
EBI: you could speak louder next time less laughing

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WWW: Good explanations and examples with good details and ideas in the house.
Zach was the best(probably did everything)

EBI:  you could add a reference or example on what the house could look like so it is easier to imagine. you could be more confident while speaking and speak louder. don't laugh.

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www: the slide looks really good and has good information.

EBI: you could read it louder

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WWW: The presentation is eye catching and you were able to do lots of research on this topic
EBI: zach, you need to project your voice so everyone can hear you, be more confident

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WWW: Very neat and well prepared document
EBI: Try not to read off screen too much

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From Naomi:
WWW: It was all well explained and the location and materials chosen were good.

EBI: The presenting wasn't very engaging. It might have been better if you explained your ideas from bullet points.

From Nehir:
WWW:I liked how you talked about a lot of stuff and explained it.

EBI: Pictures of the house you made.

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Www: Did a lot of research And covered for a lost teammate
Ebi: A bit silent

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WWW: you have put in most of the success criteria in your presentation and also laid out the presentation very well

EBI: I think you should have added more photos to help us visualize what it would look like

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WWW: very good ideas and thoughts on the aspects of your house
EBI: everyone could speak louder and more details

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WWW: The presentation of the houses and the sustainable aspects of the area was great.

EBI: Have more people speak up.

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WWW: I think is was very well thought through and the presentation (graphics and explanation) were good.

EBI: It would be better if you could include more about waste and if the video linked slightly more to the speech.

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WWW- really like how much work and detail have been put into both into making the house design and designing and entire communities to show how your house can get all of its necessities.

EBI- how is waste overall handled?

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It was a good description and had lots of accurate detail.

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WWW: You added a market that has locally sourced crops

EBI: You added the meats

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WWW: you explained thoroughly about the features you've decided to use and linked it well to your chosen location.
EBI: include how to manage your waste, let nehir speak more

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WWW: you made a very good presentation and it was very specific and you explained each item very well.
EBI: Maybe you could've explained the waste of the house

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WWW: I liked that you did lots of research and you were able to explain the different features of the house
EBI: include how you manage your waste

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WWW: I think you have made a decent presentation on minecraft and have put a lot of effort in researching about the materials
EBI: if you put in how you manage your waste and speak clearly

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www: you really thought about how and what makes your house sustainable.

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WWW : cool additions to the world. out in much effort and thought about the ideas well.

EBI: could think about the materials you used in Minecraft because it seems unrealistic in sum parts

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www: no transport is needed. Very good house and neighborhood.added a marcket that had local crops
ebi:next time make people speak equally and make cooper speak louder and clearer

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WWW: Very big world and you can tell they worked very hard on it.
EBI: Make sure work is distributed evenly because some people were speaking more then others.

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Www: you did a good job explaining and researching
Ebi: Could have been louder and didn't explain how to manage waist.

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WWW: Made sure to describe your area and made sure to show us all your ideas well.
EBI: Make sure everyone presents

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I think you explained your location verry well and it was verry informative

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I think you should have shown us the whole house

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www - Explained the location very well
ebi - everyone presents

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WWW: you were able to choose a good location which is sustainable
EBI: make sure everyone presents equally

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WWW: Considered and chose the location really well
EBI: Distribute the work more evenly

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WWW: I think you guys did the main success criteria details  

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WWW: I think you guys did the main success criteria details  

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EBI: I think you guys should even out the work load on the presentation

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www: you just hit most of the success criteria SLAYY

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WWW: I think you explained your location very deeply and that really showed and convinced a-lot

EBI: I think you could've shown an actually photo of the end product of the house to make it more clear and show what it actually looks like.

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WWW: There was a lot of detail.

EBI: Next time make sure everyone equally speaks

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WWW: You thought about how you would collect water and energy very well

EBI: everybody spoke

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WWW- great consideration over the location of the house and liked different features very well.
EBI- You should include how all of the features fit togeather

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WWW: You did well on explaining the different features

EBI: everyone in the group spoke

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WWW- great detail and lots of research

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www: Lots of research done and you explained all of it also made sure to make everything is not far away and making sure to grow every thing locally
EBI: Desalination is a very energy consuming thing some solar panels wont cover it

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I think that thepresentation was good

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www: you did lots of research and were able to explain it well
EBI: more pictures and diagrams

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WWW: You did lots of research and you explained well on the different gardens

EBI: You can add more pictures to show more details

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WWW: you guys have done a ton of research and you guy were reasonably organized.

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WWW: you guys have done a ton of research and you guy were reasonably organized.

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EBI: I think it would be better if you guys rehearsed your presentation more

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www: you did a lot of research because you explained a lot about how you would get food and how you would deal with waste
ebi: Other people speak because Khudeja spoke the most.

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WWW - lots of information about the building materials and waste and energy
EBI - Don't repeat the facts

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WWW: Great 3D design and lots of information

EBIs: Don't repeat the same information, shorter sentences and face the audience

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WWW: did more then she asked you to do and presentation was good
EBI:Spread out the work

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You considered all of the success criteria and you described and exlained everything really clearly. I could icture the house in my mind

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WWW: Lots of detail about the house
EBI: more pictures and diagrams

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WWW: you explained and said detailed things about individual stuff and had a very detailed explanation of the interior

EBI: I liked the details, however i think there could be more photos that would make it even more detailed and more encouriging

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WWW: i think what you did with the waste was good and really made sense and would definitely help.

EBI: if there where more pictures.

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I think it was very interesting it was explained well and it was very focused

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WWW: A lot of detail and research

EBI: Distribute the work more evenly (let Sean say something)

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WWW: You did well on your explaining of why you should make your house cooler and you detailed your explanation of the interior

EBI: I think you should add more pictures to show the audience

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www: you guys had very specific things that you wanted in and on your house

ebi: next time you should share the speaking time because anna spoke most and sean didn't speak at all

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WWW: you put in a lot of effort in to the presentation, and you had clear voices, so it was easy to listen to

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WWW: you put in a lot of effort in to the presentation, and you had clear voices, so it was easy to listen to

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EBI : i think you should spread the work more evenly

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WWW: I like how you drew the interior and made the presentation really specific.

EBI: Next time more pictures and let everyone speak equally.

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WWW - There was a lot of reaserch and lots of description.
EBI - More pictures

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you could have practiced the speech more as you all seemed unsure about what to say

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WWW: you were able to explain the design very thoroughly and explained why it would be useful 

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WWW: you were able to explain the design very thoroughly and explained why it would be useful 

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EBI: you could have researched the location better because perth has alot of hurricanes

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I think you should include more statistics or facts and face the audience more (don't read off the screen).

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WWW: you gave reasons to everything you said and had a lot of detail
EBI: better presenting, less looking at the board

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WWW - There was a lot information about the materials and why they were good for the house
EBI - Use more statistics

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WWW:i like how you really took advantage of the environment i think it really worked

EBI: maybe next time you could add in sustainable furniture.

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You did all of the success criteria and you exlained everything clearly

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I think you could've explained the interior more by talking about how many bedrooms, how many people the house is available for and what type of showers.

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I think that the presentation was very good and informative,it also covered a wide range of factors needed for a sustainable house.

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WWW- You did lots of research with showed through with all of the different features you have included.
EBI- Next time you should include a waste program.

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WWW: I like how they all took turns speaking and researched a lot while explaining it.

EBI: Next time don't read off the board