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'Page 27 is too much text.'

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'Page 27 is too much text

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'Grammar and spelling must be checked.'

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'Where instagram pictures taken for magazine?'

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'Instagram posts

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'Instra

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'Contents is spelt wrong.'

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'Probably need proof that Georgia picture was taken for music magazine.

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'Same picture from the front cover.'

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'Plus artists don't really stand out.'

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'A tagline may be nice.'

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'No price is not included, neither is issue number.'

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'The text on the left hand side is not on line with eachother.'

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'The text on the face gives it a less proffesional look.'

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'Some text is difficult to read, dark grey on black.'

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'Picture could be mistaken for school uniform. Should explain in research.'

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'Spelling needs checking.'

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'Use too much off the same colours,

at least one more colour needed.'

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Below you will find my draft for my music magzine.