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The bike logo can be improved to attend more potential customers. Yello colour can be improved with typefont also.

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Doesn't show actually the frame at all( at least animals should be rotated)

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All of this could and should be changed for better communication with potential customers

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The Grove Building
- unusual, complex shape
- rectangles of different sizes and colours, feels random
- perhaps attempting too much at once
- clashes with the more traditional surrounding buildings, especially the beautiful Hendon Town Hall

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Cuisine King
- a number of sans serif typefaces are used. The 'C' and 'G' in 'Cuisine King' seem to be from different typefaces
- the grey colour scheme is dull and unappetising. It doesn't make me excited for a restaurant that offers Chinese takeaway and fish and chips

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Color combination doesn't look quite right. Typeface and entrance looks quite outdated. Doesn't look inviting enough for me to want to eat there.

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Irving,  Bad Design 2: Hendon Park Cafe - Branding

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Irving,  Bad Design 2: Hendon Park Cafe - Branding

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The blocky typography, green, white and grey colour scheme, and boat icon put me more in mind of a road map than a restaurant. Again, it does not feel appetising. However, I feel there is potential in the typography on the shelter.

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Dry Cleaners - Adding this one to the mix as I really don't understand how you call a place Diamond and use a weird script to have on your shop front

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Doesn’t say luxury at all.

I don't think this would inspire a high-end customer to choose their service.

Type is understandably crammed, but could be done cleaner.

Colour is not bad at all as it allows the banner to stand out against the white building, but could use a more premium colour like a dark green or purple etc.

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Not a fan of the Hendon Waste title, looks abit wonky and every letter has eyes on it, not sure what the concept behind it was. Typeface on the sub-heading could be improved, maybe the letters are too spaced out and there's too much use of italics.

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Seems dated with use of typography and older style signature logo, could do with a face lift

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The red underline in the sign isn't needed. The colour pallette on the title could be improved, not sure if it's a white outline or reflection of light on the sign.

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The logo looks like popcorn and another typeface could be used.

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The use of italics could be changed on the shop name, the telephone numbers too big so the rest of the numbers goes to the next line. The use of the email twice is unsufficent as its the same email.

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Name of the shop is nice but couldn't really tell it's a framing shop, looks like a construction place. The email and numbers could be at the bottom or the top and the shop name in the middle

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The mix of base colours, simple and complex fonts and lack of hierarchy between the shop sign and window signs

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The banner looks too compact with information, didn't make the use of space. Now Available suggestion isn't really needed and colour of it contrasts too much with the banner colour

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- the 2 different fonts make no sense at all to he together. The time completely  dominate the name of the shop.
- the name of the shop is very comical and feels like a 5 year old came up with the name.
- the colour scheme of red orange and yellow for the texts makes it unpleasant to look at and it doesn't really give you eyes a break since all the colours are relatively similar to each other it can look. It looks like a mess when tryna read it from a far.

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- the font makes it feel like it's meant to be cowboy aesthetic doesn't really look nice to me.
- the yellow writing underneath is poorly done looks very tacky.

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- the colour choice is poor, the mismatched browns as well just poor colour choices it doesn't feel inviting at all and it makes me want to stay away since I'll think the place is not sanitary.
- the 3 different fonts on the sign is just a bad combination and they don't compliment each other at all and it just lacks consistency.
- the different graphics on the window just feel like a quickly done job with poor consideration and it feels like it's from different restaurants.

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Sara-bad design

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Graphics can be improve

The numbering on each ‘door’ look odd in some areas

At the back of the box it show you what you will get from this advent calendar, which I think is unnecessary as it should be a surprise

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The colour of the packaging doesn’t remind me of caramel or toffee

Is look boring compare to the other nestle brand chocolate bar

Lack of characteristic ?

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The background doesn't compliment the ice creams. The text doesn't go well with the whole design. The text is too thick.

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The drawing doesn't seem to be bold enough to catch attention. The text seem to be out of place with the image.

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This just seems to be very much outdated. The whole poster creates a very much old fashioned feeling. Too much of different weight of text is being used.

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Colours don’t inspire hunger.

The logo and the rest of the shop don't work in tandem.

The logo itself can be upgraded.

Not very warm and welcoming.

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It looks like it wasn’t designed by a designer.

The colour combo doesn't feel right.

Type in general can be improved upon.

Has potential with the name ‘Diamond Cars’.

The big 'C' in a red circle doesn't mean anything.

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Advertisement outside local shop - I really dislike the advertisement of random meats and foods and then try to blend them together and it looks so weird like the chicken and steak are one type of meat?

Plus I don't like the type used - not enough contrast in colour to stand out

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-Too plain
-No direct info (green apple juice)?
-No Elements (image)

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Irving, Bad Design 1: Nails and Beauty 4 U - Logo and Banner

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Irving, Bad Design 1: Nails and Beauty 4 U - Logo and Banner

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Irving, Bad Design 3: Imperial Hairstyles - Banner 

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Irving, Bad Design 3: Imperial Hairstyles - Banner 

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Sings are too small and to high for the viewers eye. There is a lots of space around such a small sign which has lots of potential.

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Board with the directions is to high for the commuters, I almost didn't notice it. Th typography is to small. For some reason there is another sign underneath cut in half. Signs don't work as a whole, all together it looks disorganized.

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Sara bad design 3

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Sara bad design 2

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Sara bad design 1

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Aga bad design 2 Pizza shop banner & window offers display

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Aga bad design 2 Pizza shop banner & window offers display

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The signs look inappropriate for the pizza shop, it looks more like repair shop. Graphics are dated, window has too much different type and it looks messy. There is small pages with the offers which don't match with the rest, they are unreadable.

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Aga bad design 1 Carpe diem - cafe, logo design

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Aga bad design 1 Carpe diem - cafe, logo design

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Use of lots of different logos, lack of consistency, use of different fonts and colours.

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Lackeisha bad design 3

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Lackeisha bad design 2

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Lackeisha bad design 1

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Bad Design 2

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Building called Churchill House - Multiple things I dislike about this!

Firstly the illustration of Churchill is really weird and disturbing and looks like someone just image traced around a picture they got offline rather than sketching it - without the Churchill name you wouldn't really be able to tell it's him

Secondly the connection of the 'H' between Churchill and the House makes no sense to me and looks really weird, the only thing I can think of the link is the link to Hendon for the emphasis

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Building in the Middlesex campus, hard to find. We had lectures there and I remember I couldn’t believe it’s part of the university. This building definitely have to be demolished or need some graphics.

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-Typeface (hard to read)
-Arrangement
-Alignment
-Too plain

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-Arrangement too packed
-Font typeface
-Photos

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The logos around the signage are randomly placed.

The design of the logo is not interesting.

Information has the same hierarchy as the logo.

‘020’ does not need to be smaller and underlined.

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Overall arrangement is messy.

The text arrangement for ‘finest dark chocolate’ is awkward.

‘Sugar wise’ logo is awkwardly placed, leaving very big spaces on both sides.

Image of the chocolate can be arranged in a better way to make it the main highlight.