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Jerusalem is becoming a concept which can teach us a lecture not only about a never-ending war, but also the importance of peace and reconciliation.

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People has expressed their dream in building a utopia in their declartion, but there's still conflict between theory and practice.

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Talking Point 2 (90 seconds) Write your second talking point here. Write a complete sentence.

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Talking Point 2 (90 seconds) Write your second talking point here. Write a complete sentence.

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After the long history of wars, Jerusalem is now experiencing rebirth, transmitting into a well-acknowledged concept of peace and shared future.

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Jerusalem has experienced a history from utopia to dystopia.

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Now is the time to reach out a conclusion, not only for the speech, but also for the war that seemingly never ends. The tragedy of Jerusalem can be the past, and now, we face a new future of peace and reconciliation, which is meaningful for us all.

Can you think of other practices in building up a utopia, except the one mentioned in the declaration of Israel and Palestine?

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Jerusalem plays an important role in different cultures.

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Natural Geographic. Sacred Mosaic. Dec 2019.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gLgSEv583og

1988 proclamation of the State of Palestine

Basic Law: Jerusalem, Capital of Israel, Israel Ministry of Foreign Affairs

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Talking Point 1 (90 seconds) Write your first talking point here. Write a complete sentence.

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Talking Point 1 (90 seconds) Write your first talking point here. Write a complete sentence.

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Jerusalem has a harsh history of being disputed by different races, playing an important role in various religions.

This is not accurate. The dispute in Jerusalem is not between races. Especially for your topic, it would be good to consider what we discussed in class about why we cite sources. According to who is this a harsh history? Your presentation must reference the work of others to appropriately meet the requirements for this assignment and also to help you express yourself more clearly.

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I believe everyone has been awared of the constant war in the Middle East, between Israel and Hamas, which has attracted attention from all over the world. However, the tension situation in the Middle East is never a new story, and it's long-lasting conflict always has something to do with a city, which is always known as, the promised land flowing with milf and honey. Jerusalem.

As the topic of my speech, I'll interpret Jerusalem from both its past being a religious utopia being disputed causing harsh wars, and its future as a concept of long-lasting wellbeing and a spirtual hometown for different races.

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What strategy will you use in your hook?

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What strategy will you use in your hook?

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Using a fact that everyone is concerned, which is the war between Israel and Palestine.

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the Bible:

“So I have come down to rescue them from the hand of the Egyptians and to bring them up out of that land in to a good and spacious land, a land flowing with milk and honey.”(Exodus 3:8)

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Wikipedia website introducing the etymology and names of Jerusalem.

The book: Jerusalem: The Biography, by Simon Montefore

You cannot use Wikipedia and you cannot use a book as your sources. You need to find different sources.

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What strategy will you use to end your presentation?

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What strategy will you use to end your presentation?

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Call to action.

A call to action is a great way to end a presentation like this. I wonder if you can work on your call to action so it resonates more with your audience.

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Please cite the source or sources you will use during your conclusion.

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Please cite the source or sources you will use during your conclusion.

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the declaration of independence, Israel

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the UNESCO Digital Library. Jerusalem Utopia. Sep 2001

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Declaration of Independence, Israel

Judicial reform: Israel needs a Zionist constitutional convention, jpost

Palestinian Declaration of Independence, Palestine

The Israeli Ministry of Foreign Affairs, official statement

Are these in English? All of your sources must be in English.

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It's beautiful--you were right!

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Watch this video for instructions on how to fill out this Padlet. The video does not contain any instructions about the Works Cited slide. However, you are responsible for that as well. Be sure to copy and paste a screenshot of your works cited slide in the appropriate post.

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I'm confused about your strategy. If you are stating a fact, then where is the fact? The fact should be the thing you have a citation for. What you've claimed as a fact is actually a general opinion that there is a war between Israel and Hamas. Even those words are in dispute. Your hook needs to contain a fact that you cite from somewhere if you want to use a fact.