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it is good but there is a strange patch next to Emilia’s face which looks out of place.

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I agree with Jamie in regards to the tag line because I thought your trailer was about the femme fatale and someone passing away due to illness, not drowning. Maybe its too mysterious it doesn’t make sense

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This might be abit picky of me, but isn’t the credit block meant to be long and narrow? Not so squished up. It doesn’t look bad at all just not sure if you will lose marks for it!

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The pop art images is a great contrast to the noir vibes from the smoke, white writing and background

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Im at a bit of an advantage as you spoke to me about the characters before, however I love the smoke covering over all the characters except Katherine! Makes it clear that she’s ‘putting the smoke over there eyes’ and hiding something

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I really enjoy everything about this poster. I think the structuring is good and the coloured smoke is a great addition to bringing the whole poster together

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in response to chris

theres already quite a lot going on in the poster, the space is almost needed so there isn't too much overcrowding on the poster, quality not quantity

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There’s quite a lot of wasted space in-between the credit block and title

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I really don’t understand the tag line if I’m honest. How exactly does that apply to the poster? Would it make more sense if I saw your trailer? But I really like the font

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I really like the colour scheme! its a lot like drive, (which i know you were going for) and have succeeded!

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Hi, so the image below is my poster that I created for the trailer. If you could give some general feedback about your opinion on the colour scheme, framing of the images, the tag line and your over all opinion on the poster that would be really helpful. Please also state your name and age before posting. You are welcome to put more than one comment as it would help me improve my poster.