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gotten better at using commas and pucuation

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gotten better at using commas and pucuation

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i procrastinated way to long and could have had a better essay

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I could have connected sentences to make them longer

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word choices

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I thought that my intro was a little choppy and could have been smoother.

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I didn't write down the page numbers for my OMAM evidence

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I didn't write down the page numbers for my OMAM evidence

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what we did to think about in life is very important this is why we the class should stand up and protest against essay, book talks and papers

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I could have improved more on the analysis and evidence after I typed my quotes.

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I could have improved on fluidity between sentences and a better conclusion

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I feel I could have gotten better at not being so repetitive

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I feel I could have gotten better at not being so repetitive

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I needed to work on it more but i procrastinated so my essay was sucky.

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I needed to work on it more but i procrastinated so my essay was sucky.

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I wanted to improve on how long my speach was because it was kinda short

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I wanted to improve on how long my speach was because it was kinda short

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I need to improve on how to introduce my quotes

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I had an easier time finding good quotes

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I had an easier time finding good quotes

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i forgot to change the page numbers in the works cited

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I need to improve putting
the intro together better

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I could have had a more in depth analysis and could have linked it to euthanasia better

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Putting more depth in on My intro paragraph to catch the readers attention

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Putting more depth in on My intro paragraph to catch the readers attention

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I feel like I can improve on going more in depth with my analysis

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I could have gone into more detail and I could have tied the research and the book together better.

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i need to not procrastinate

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I felt that I could work on make sentences less choppy and make them flow better.

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I felt that I could work on make sentences less choppy and make them flow better.

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! I thought that i could improve in my punctuation placement

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I could have improved on transitioning sentences
and paragraphs

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I could've related the topic of the essay to euthanasia more. Also I could've improved on my transitions.

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I could've worked on more in depth analysis's

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I felt like I should have had a longer and better analysis

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counterexample.

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My essay could have had 1 or 2 better pieces of evidence and connected to the thesis better than the claims

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My essay could have had 1 or 2 better pieces of evidence and connected to the thesis better than the claims