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All right!

You did a very good job. I I hope you have learnt a lot from your activities and also from the platfom.

Kind regards!

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Wooowww!
Awesome holidays, I envy you.... Your writing skills are perfect you include complex vocabulary and that makes your writings attractive!; Here just a few corrections.

Congratulations!!!

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WOOOWW!
Awesome holidays, I envy you! Your writing skills are perfect. You try to use complex vocabulary most of the time and that makes your writings attractive. Here just a few corrections:

Congratulations.

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion about transportation. Nowadays, people use different ways to move from one place to another, which leads to more cars on the road, heavy traffic jams and air pollution. A way to solve this is by encouraging people to use public transportation instead of using cars or helpful ways to move like electrical devices. I agree with you wit the fact that maybe due to the human desstruction, we maybe don't have enough time to achive the dream of flying out of the earth. In terms of English your comment is well written in terms of punctuation, grammar, spelling, coherence, and cohesion.

Keep Going!!! =)

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Hi!

Awesome! The participation in this task is well written in terms of punctuation, grammar  and cohesion. It includes information about you, the things you did last weekend and things you do on a long weekend. There are just a few spelling and coherence mistakes when connecting ideas. Here some of them:
-I'm 47 old years ------ 47 years old
- orderly??? -  SAY  TIDY OR ORGANIZED
- Usually on holiday weekend, with my husband?  This sentences is a mess!

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Hi!
Thanks for the video you shared. You know how to share personal information and talk about yourself your family and future plans. However, it was difficult to understand because there were many grammar and cohesion mistakes. You also need to focus on pronunciation because you are pronouncing exactly as you read. Study the sounds SH, CH, TH, INITIAL S AND Z for know.

I hope I can see progress in the next video activity.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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Task 1 -Tatiana