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Should university students live away from their parents?

Agree – students should live away

Disagree – students shouldn’t live away

Argument – explain opinion

Explanation – explain argument

Evidence – Provide facts / example to prove explanation

We need to acknowledge that living away from parents bring a lot of benefits.

Agree:

We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. (explain argument) As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them to learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

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·             This is because…(explain argument)

·             the explanation for this could be the fact that …(explain argument)

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·             what we have to realize is that …

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We need to admit that some education systems which ALLOW STUDENTS from the age of 15 TO focus on a small number of subjects help them understand it more deeply. What we have to realize is that teenagers just need to study TREMENDOUS subjects, then having more time to do PRACTICAL lessons, review the subjects and time for themselves. As a matter of fact, it is ANTIEDUCATIONAL when students are too exhausted because of POURING THE HOURS INTO a wide range of things and gradually LOSE SIGHT OF THE GOAL.

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We need to admit that reading global news keeps people up-to-date with international problems. The point I want to emphasize is that we can have more information on universal climate issues, especially climate change which has happened tremendously. For example, by reading BBC news, I have known that due to the co-vid pandemic, the greenhouse effect is reduced which gives a boost for the ozone layer to be enhanced. Moreover, people will be aware of how rigorous situation of the environment to encourage others to take actions to improve it.

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It is worth mentioning that studying few subjects at school bring for students more knowledges about everything needed for their future, however, in my opinion, I think it should be limited in amount of subjects for student who starting at the age of 15 because they have to understand its clearly.This is because students in younger ages studying wide range of subjects help them know a little bit about each subject, while students from age 15 have to understand deeply about each subjects they learn, it will bring benefits for going university and getting job. For example, student from grade 9 in Vietnam have to study extremely large amount of subjects so they study by learning by rote way to get good mark because they have to pour the hours into too much things.

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It is worth mention that reading local news opens the door for people to keep abreast of material for the job market in their countries.The explanation for this could be the fact that people might get more knowledge of occupation opportunities, mainly university students, who will find jobs after graduating. For instance, my cousin can have a long-term job to pay her bills well for the reason that she used to read national labor market news carefully, especially chances and obstacles.

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We need to acknowledge that study wide range from the age of 15 can help them easily to choose jobs in the future. The explanation for this could be the fact that there are many job that suitable for you but many people have different job from their dream in the past so that we should have knowledge in all subject we have learn to not be unemployed. For instance, many people who want to be singer but they work in company because they want to have a stable job and not too famous.

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We need to acknowledge that students who are required to study a mixed variety of subjects until they leave school will help expand their knowledge. The basis of this is the fact that children have more opportunities to show gifted in all aspects and get to know which subject is suitable for them, hence, it is probably professional development. On the other hand, learning limited subjects bar high school students from being reachable to their favorite subject and be reduced the exposure of other areas.

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There is no denying that students who study a limited number of subjects will open the door for themselves to gain knowledge deeply. This is because if the -15-aged students have few courses, they might have more time to research the material of those subjects widely or accumulate experience perfectly. Moreover, students can spend their time doing extracurricular activities such as sports or play instruments. Therefore, I believe studying a limited number of subjects will let students achieve great recognition and skills in their fields, which give a boost for them to have a better life.

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We need to admit that studying expanded fields brings essential upside for students. This is because when students have to grow education of a large number of subjects such as history, geography or mathematic, their background knowledge will be improved effectively. For instance, if students want to investigate the LGBT situation in the USA, they can understand the thought of local people and have a multi looks by studying the past and literature of America. In addition, students can get their strengths and weakness to choose an occupation, which suits them in a rigorous job market.

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It is worth mentioning that focusing on domestic news has tremendous importance because it is easier for you to find job opportunities in your nation. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that no matter what line of work you are in, reading specialized newspapers in your country will help you expand your knowledge and find out more frequently updated jobs that attract you. In fact, reading the news regularly allows you to access new and more practical knowledge, then, we can change to have a suitable job.

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There is no denying that being aware of foreign news can help you enhance your language skills. The basis of this is the fact that pouring the hours into reading international newspapers allows you to understand global renovation works, expand your vocabulary, and be more facilitated to go abroad. For instance, popular foreign newspapers have interesting content that gives you more motivation to read such as The New York Times, The Wall Street Journal, Financial Times,..