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Areas to Improve: my main area i need to improve on is my structure and writing my essays as it is my main let down in my assessments. i feel that i dont have many strengths that stand out but i think i am quite good under time restraints and find short responses easier than essays.

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Strengths:  Constructing fictional texts, primarily feature articles and persuasive texts Presentations and Oral presentations  Weaknesses: Analyzing texts such as The happiest refugee Completing tasks within a deadline Reading long books. 

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Strengths:  Constructing fictional texts, primarily feature articles and persuasive texts Presentations and Oral presentations  Weaknesses: Analyzing texts such as The happiest refugee Completing tasks within a deadline Reading long books. 

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Strengths: imaginative pieces, and the composing section.

Weaknesses: comprehending section (especially the variety of questions asked (gain a better understanding of a variety of questions))

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Strengths:

Finding and applying general or visual conventions.

Constructing persuasive texts with proper arguments.

Time management of exam sections.

Areas to Improve:

Constructing sentences which flow with proper structure.

Vocabulary could be enhanced.

Making discussion and analysis more in depth.

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Areas to Improve: I  believe I need to work on my short answer responses  I also need to work on my TEXT structure in my essay responses and adding more language features into each body paragraph One of my main weaknesses is repeating my body paragraphs and same points over and over again  Strengths: I am better at persuasive essays/ speeches and writing imaginative pieces I am able to look at a picture or piece of text and come up with an appropriate story to suit that piece I am also really good at global statements 

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Areas to Improve: I  believe I need to work on my short answer responses  I also need to work on my TEXT structure in my essay responses and adding more language features into each body paragraph One of my main weaknesses is repeating my body paragraphs and same points over and over again  Strengths: I am better at persuasive essays/ speeches and writing imaginative pieces I am able to look at a picture or piece of text and come up with an appropriate story to suit that piece I am also really good at global statements 

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Weakness: Identifying techniques in texts, short answer responses, understanding what the question is asking, explaining

Strengths: Sometimes imaginative and persuasive texts

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strengths: creative aspects of assessments, such as oral presentations.
moderately okay with understanding texts and questions.

weaknesses: essay structure and the use of more sophisticated language to give my responses more clarity.
i also struggle with linking back my tie-up to my topic sentences.
short answers are pretty tough too.

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Weaknesses:- I need to work on my analyzation of visual and written texts - I need to improve my vocabulary - I need to improve on my creativity in the composing section - I need to improve on my structure of my writing - I need to improve on my thesis statements - I need to improve on my conclusion  Strengths: - none

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Weaknesses:- I need to work on my analyzation of visual and written texts - I need to improve my vocabulary - I need to improve on my creativity in the composing section - I need to improve on my structure of my writing - I need to improve on my thesis statements - I need to improve on my conclusion  Strengths: - none

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Strengths:

Potentially responding questions such as ideas and characters.

Persuasive areas in the composing section

Areas to improve:

Creating things in the composing section.

Comprehending section including- analysis of the question                                             - structure

Structure of most areas

Content of my essays

Written expression

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Strengths: Forming arguments in persuasive texts  Weaknesses: My short answer structure and I need to widen my vocabulary.

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Strengths: Forming arguments in persuasive texts  Weaknesses: My short answer structure and I need to widen my vocabulary.

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Weaknesses:

Limited vocabulary

interpreting the questions

Lack thesis statement

Lack depth in argument/point

Lack structure

Spelling and grammar

Lack knowledge of generic conventions

short answers

essays

linking ideas

no metalanguage use

Strengths:

Writing fast

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Strengths:

Global statement

Key ideas

Analysis of text, but struggle with feature articles

Being able to come up with creative ideas quickly

Areas to Improve:

Time management with analyzing and writing

Structure of text

Not being open to other questions that aren't creative

Clarity

Structure

Improve vocabulary

Grammar

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Strengths:

Analysing Film

Composition

Essays

Weaknesses:

Short Answers

Thesis Statements

Linking ideas

Don’t use enough metalanguage

Not very clear

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Strengths:  Analysing film  Weaknesses: Writing/ constructing thesis statements and global statements.  Struggle using the metalanguage and clearly explaining what I'm trying to say. Can annotate a text, but struggle to incorporate what I have annotated into an essay or short answer. Struggle with in depth analysis . Don’t understand what a question is asking. Struggle to explain my point without reaping what I just said.

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Strengths:  Analysing film  Weaknesses: Writing/ constructing thesis statements and global statements.  Struggle using the metalanguage and clearly explaining what I'm trying to say. Can annotate a text, but struggle to incorporate what I have annotated into an essay or short answer. Struggle with in depth analysis . Don’t understand what a question is asking. Struggle to explain my point without reaping what I just said.

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essay structure
remembering quotes

weakness- reading a long novel
comprehending written texts

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Strengths

Creating speeches

Story structure

Weaknesses

Identifying language features & generic conventions

Essay writing

Essay Structure

Spelling

Analyzing film & novels

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Weakness- tying back to topic sentences/ thesis Comprehending written texts Responding to a studied text essays Need to expand my vocabulary  Strengths- writing a solid intro

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Weakness- tying back to topic sentences/ thesis Comprehending written texts Responding to a studied text essays Need to expand my vocabulary  Strengths- writing a solid intro

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Strengths:

Essay structure

Weaknesses:

Being able to identify specific language features, answering response questions related to voice, mood  and perspective, spelling and vocabulary.

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STRENGTHS Responding essay  WEAKNESSES Short responses making it flow and making sense- structure and fully addressing question Vocabulary  Developing explanation 

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STRENGTHS Responding essay  WEAKNESSES Short responses making it flow and making sense- structure and fully addressing question Vocabulary  Developing explanation 

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STRENGTHS  Persuasive pieces  WEAKNESSES Responding Making my work flow and using an evolved vocabulary  

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STRENGTHS  Persuasive pieces  WEAKNESSES Responding Making my work flow and using an evolved vocabulary  

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TEXT strcutures

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I am capable of analysing a text for its themes, ideas and attitudes. I am good at finding and using the most efficient quotes to support my argument.

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Areas to improve: Analysis of text. I struggle with being able to see the metalanguage and the language features. And then translate that into an essay or short answer response. The many different conventions is very confusing and I struggle greatly with this.

Vocabulary: I also struggle with finding the right word to use in my texts. I have been marked down previously due to a limited vocabulary. Although I have a wide knowledge of the words, it is the translating them to a text that is my downfall.

Strength: I feel very confident with composing. I am able to create many short stories as long as I have a good starting point. However without a strong base my text lacks.

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Areas to Improve: -I  believe I need to work on my short answer responses  I also need to work on my TEXT structure in my essay responses and adding more language features into each body paragraph One of my main weaknesses is repeating my body paragraphs and same points over and over again  Strengths: I am better at persuasive essays/ speeches and writing imaginative pieces I am able to look at a picture or piece of text and come up with an appropriate story to suit that piece I am also really good at global statements 

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Areas to Improve: -I  believe I need to work on my short answer responses  I also need to work on my TEXT structure in my essay responses and adding more language features into each body paragraph One of my main weaknesses is repeating my body paragraphs and same points over and over again  Strengths: I am better at persuasive essays/ speeches and writing imaginative pieces I am able to look at a picture or piece of text and come up with an appropriate story to suit that piece I am also really good at global statements 