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Super job Sam! What a fun story! I love the beach and what a great twist in the story. Your writing is very creative and I love happy endings!

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I loved Kiera's story! It was spooky and creative. I loved her descriptions and how she made the fantasy world come to life. She even used an animated voice when she read it to me!

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I enjoyed Luke's story and enjoyed it it was very interesting at times and was really funny. Great Job Luke!

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I enjoyed reading Max's story. It is a bit short, but I'm very impressed by his fantasy. Great job Max!

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I enjoyed Madison's story because I could picture it from the vivid descriptions she included. I loved reading her story.

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I really enjoyed Olivia's story. I thought her character was interesting, the setting and plot were very imaginative. She was very clever with the names of her spells. It was fun to read and I didn't want it to stop.

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Although, I am not a big fan of cats, I really enjoyed Michael's story. It was creative. Over the past few years his writing has truly impressed me. You can see how much he has matured but also what a great imagination he has in his writings. The way he writes makes you visualize the story & feel like your there which I truly enjoy & look forward to the next story he writes. Great job! We Love You! Your dogs may be a little upset with you though...LOL

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Charlie's story certainly grabbed my attention & left me wanting to know more! I liked his vocabulary & descriptive words. I felt like I was in the woods watching him run in fear. Great job Charlie!

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I am so impressed with Seth's story. You can see the growth in the writing with the phrasing, vocabulary, and detail. Seth is normally one who favors non fiction, so to see him use his imagination like this makes me so proud. I look very forward to reading more of his work as he goes into 6th grade! Great story! Well done!

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I loved reading Brock's story. It was super cool how there was different lands of different animals and he really got into detail. Also how they became the leaders of the snakes and also a land of puppies and dogs. Great Job!!

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I loved reading Morgan's story. I was really impressed by her thoughts and fantasy. I laughed through the entire story. Great Job Morgan!!!

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I loved reading Griffin's story about his accidental trip into Reverse Kingdom.  All the vivid details in the story made me feel like I was there right along side Griffin in his adventure. Great Job!!

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I am very impressed by Rylee's commitment to making this story come alive. She took her time to paint a picture and I truly felt like I was in the story. She had such a great time writing it and has already came up with ideas for a second story. Great Job!!!!

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I just loved reading Gigi's fantasy story! i loved how you had the color's of the flowers match delicious foods. I also loved how the evil cat became friend with everyone! GIGI DID A GREAT JOB!!!

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I loved reading Alex's fantasy story! Time travel is always a fun topic to read about. I am very proud of how far he has come this year in his writing. I can't wait to see if he takes the characters on another time travel adventure!

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I really loved reading Emma's fantasy story. It took me to another world that Emma envisioned. Emma did a great job!

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It was great story keeping the magic and dreams alive. I was able to picture as a movie in my mind this beautiful story. We must keep the magic in our life to make this world better and nice.

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I do really believe Gianna's story is great. I loved how she included me in it! She did a great job choosing words to replace boring ones! I always wanted to know what was coming next!

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It was a great story.I enjoyed it.

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I really liked reading Abigail's story. I saw a lot of her in her character the little girl. She is caring and loves animals. She would definitely do everything in her power to nurture any animal in need back to health. Abigail did a great job putting her story together. The story was a great read.

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Bella did a great job with her story because it had to do with friendship. The main character cared so much about her friend that she used her magical powers to show her that she could be kind to others. This story had magic and transporters. With all of this going on, it still came down to one character's care for her friend. Great job Bella❤️

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Wow very impressed and tired of running and going through this magical forest with slides and traps, in Nick's story a monster was chasing us and Nick saved us all, My boy was very brave for saving us and kind for letting the monster go free after he explained to him that he didn't need to be chasing people just to scare them. He used a lot of details and creativity. Great Job Nicholas!!!

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Alex's story was very intriguing! The beginning hooked me into the story and made me want to read the whole thing. I want to know who the man in the trench coat is! Awesome work Alex!

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Wow! What do I say? Very unexpected story Brady! You did a great job thinking creatively about a fantasy story. I'm a little disturbed by your imagination and the little blue men but at least it was different! :) Great job!

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Melina's Story was awesome. It was very detailed and I was left wanting to know more. I was hoping they all lived in the same house together in the end, even the bear! Great Job Melina!!!

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I really liked reading Reese's story, she did a great job describing what was going on, so I could picture it in my mind.

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I thought Emma's story was very good and she did very good I thought she wrote very well and used detail and.

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Jason's story was great! He worked hard on it and you can tell. When reading it you can see he used his imagination and creativity.

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It was a great book very interesting .

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a girl running from a dark sprit and ends up in a trap with a clown that truns up tobe a witch

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I enjoyed reading Autumn's story! I loved the decriptive language for how the characters felt and the setting around them! I could really visualize what was happening and feel the suspense! I am glad they learned to trust the tree to save their friend and get home safely out of the dark forest!

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My story is about a boy finding out theres a evil proffeser making a dragon that will destroy the whole United States.

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my story is a girl finding a hidden place. It was advernturous and creative. I let my imagionation flow.

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The story was both creative and intricate. I could really visualize the multiple settings within the story. Also, I could feel what they characters felt though your use of descriptor words and phrases. There was a good amount of dialogue and the story was fun and imaginative. I don't think I would have been as calm as Brynn if a talking cat showed up in my life! Excellent job!

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I love Mackenzie's story about her adventure into the woods. I enjoyed reading it to the very end! Funny choice of characters and great details about her encounter with the "clown!" Great Job Mackenzie keep up the great work!

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4.5/5 stars!!!!! The short story about a young girl, saving a cat, in a secret land made of candy, while fighting a dragon was extremely imaginative. I was able to picture the backgrounds, and action as well as the emotion of the characters. Maybe I will make Morgan and her friends act it out into a short video. Very impressed Morgan.

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It was a great story.I enjoyed it.

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I loved Luke's short story about Jordan and the stolen jewel. I was transported to a different world and was so impressed with the imagination that went into creating this story. Great job Luke!!

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my story is about me getting traped in my video game and I have to get out

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I absolutely loved Jessica's story! She caught my attention with a very descriptive introduction. I really enjoyed the creativity throughout and want to visit the magical forest with the cotton candy blue sky and silky grass! I was also impressed by the heroism and main characters working together to help others. Great job Jessie!!!

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This story was very entertaining and fun to read! I was entranced by the talking raccoons and purple dragon. I was really rooting for the main character to get her purple dragon and to go on many adventures!

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It was a good and short story he was missing periods and capitals but it was very interesting with the characters.

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I loved this story! Dreamlandia sounds like an amazing place. The characters were interesting and I like the fact that Jeremy finally came around to humans again through Sophie preserveringMost of all I like the morals of the story: Good things take time and never give up!

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I enjoyed this short story. I felt like I was there with Scarlet and Ryan.  I wish I had powers like her! I was happy she defeated the witch and saved the river for the animals. Great story Madison!

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Rich language, well-paced potting, and rounded characters create an enchanting, hard-to-leave world. Friendships, magical time travel.. Readers will root for Nicole and wish her the very best! Very impressed of this fantastic debut novel, a must read!

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I was very impressed with Eric's story. For a student his age, his level of imagination was far more than I expected. The first question I asked Eric when I was done reading his story was "how long did this take you to write?" He told me he wrote a page a day which took about two weeks. The quality of his writing showed he was very invested in the assignment and really enjoyed doing it.

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Great story. It had sports, action, and adventure. Very interesting and fun to read.

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WOW!!!!  I'm not sure Dominic wrote this!!  It didn't have football! haha. But it had to be Dominic- this main character EATS A LOT!!!!
Fantastic story that included a land of magical creatures, sword fighting a devil, releasing the goblins back to humans and lots more. Your imagination really does take you places. I was interested the whole time. You worked very hard and it shows. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

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I give Ella's fantasy two thumbs up. I found myself looking forward to reading each new paragraph to find out what happens to Jennifer in the Outer Banks. I found the underlying "bullying" issue to be a great subplot to the fantasy story and it allowed for a great conversation. I am very proud of this work.