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I was wrote a draft for my first article by using General Criteria for Evaluating Text by University of New South Wales, Sydney. Also I was use the Manchester University Student Phrasebank for writing my draft of article 1 in the academic, critically and professional way. This draft will help me on organising the structure for writing the final task 1, also I have to apply the drafting for make a structure when we are going to write the essay or other task as well. There is some more benefit of writing a draft before writing the real article or summary, we will be able to write the self-introduction letter or academic letter. But unprepared of reading the main part of the article will be having some problem with the writing task, I was just only read the abstract and the conclusion which is not really tell us the main part or the important part of the article, so the task will be lack of important detail, and I should read the whole article

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I was wrote a draft for my second article that's contain summary, evaluation text and linking sentence between first article and second article. In the second article, I wrote the draft by using the academic words and General Criteria for Evaluating Text by UNSW University, I also use the Student Phrasebank by University of Manchester's website, those sources would helped me in writing more academic and look professional for the final task. This draft will help me to decrease confuse when I start writing the final task 2. In the task 1, I found my weakness and made some mistake on writing the evaluation text, which I did not write them down. First article is quite long, but this article is shorter and easier to read, so, I had read them all, the whole article.

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I wrote a draft of article 3, I found that it is very hard because we have to link them to another article which is being the reference to article 3. My article 3 is the long article and there are 4 authors and all of them are not English native speaker directly, I known by their name and I found my mistake since the beginning, that is due to I have 4 authors in this article, I used to write all of their names for the citing in the beginning of paragraph but that is wrong and I just realise that we have to write the first author’s surname and follow by et al. will be correct. In this draft, I use the Manchester University Phrasebank to help me for writing correctly and all try to use the reporting verb from the page 52 in the handbook to guide me on writing a draft. I found some more academic words from this article and try to learn them, so, I can use them for writing the final task 3.

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Task 2 Peer and Teacher Feedback Reflection

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Task 2 Peer and Teacher Feedback Reflection