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she should have started by greeting the person she was contacting rather than yelling at them.

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she should have started by greeting the person she was contacting rather than yelling at them.

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Next she should have been clear about the service she wished to receive and included contact details.
Then she should have thanked the person she was ordering from and kept her opinions to herself.

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Make sure to inform the recipient of the email what the request or problem is and insure the message is clear.

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Make sure to inform the recipient of the email what the request or problem is and insure the message is clear.

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Always re-read the email before sending it.

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Vivian should have closed the email with both her first and last name, as well as her contact information

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Write about more details and use proper words

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Write about more details and use proper words

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Don't be disrespectful to business partners

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- Use proper grammar (way too many exclamation marks in some demands)

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- Use proper grammar (way too many exclamation marks in some demands)

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- Mention who it was towards
- Be less demanding (no one likes an entitled client Vivian)

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1. Don't be rude.
2.  Be softer.
3. constructive criticism goes a long way when you are polite.
4. more details
5. Don't be a bitch..............

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Greet them politely, explain the situation and give full details about the wedding, notify them on what is going wrong and what they can do to help.
End with a closing compliment and your contact information

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State who the clients are and when the wedding is. The cafe may have more than 1 wedding that they are supplying for.

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Clearly defining what you'd like to see and leaving personal feelings aside, state what facts you'd like to inquire.

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-Be clear on who the clients are, the wedding, and the detailed on how to contact you.

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-Be clear on who the clients are, the wedding, and the detailed on how to contact you.

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- its a professional email so be polite, use proper language and be kind.
-please state what you want exactly.

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use proper grammar
- no all caps
- no "!!!"

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re-read the email to check grammar and spelling

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Add contact information

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be polite and don’t demand what you want

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Avoid using inappropriate language, and provide more specific information. Treat the businesses you are working with fairly, and try to solve the issue with friendlier and more co-operative measures.

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it would help if she did not come across as rude as she did and explain what is happening so that they understand so they can do what needs to be done on their end and leave proper contact information

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You could improve her email by using proper paragraphs, and using them in a professional manner, as well as using proper punctuation and grammar.

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Add more details of the issue, make sure to properly title and specify who the person is and also be more specific on how to be reached

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- Be polite, It encourages willingness to help
- Be clear, Who? What? When? Where? Why?
-Be Professional, full name, please,and thank yous