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There will always be violence in the world?

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There will always be violence in the world?

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Violence is an inner human condition that you cannot easily change.

This happen because of humanitarian uncounsiosness.

*confrontations between terrible bands.

* The search of again destruction the stability of the state.

*Mistreating of the people.

In conclusion when violence is not controlled is has a posibility that causes an enormous problems in society.

- The standart solution to the problem of protection against violence has been to bands.

Example: When bands made pacts and killing.

- Provide for a common defense against other bands.

Example: When these clash over a territory.

- The differences.

Example: When a person it is of other race and is discriminated for being different.

- The often destruction and catastrophic loss of life.

Example: When you kill people for money.

- The problems between different places.

Example: Transport of toxic substances for the bad of the people.

- Combatant nations.

Example: The border between Venezuela and Colombia.

- The disagreement of thoughts.

Example: When all people think differently and are not accepted.

- The revenge among society members.

Example: When you hit someone for damage caused.

- The discord.

Example: At the moment that someone opposed to personal causes.

We know that violence is always a very dangerous social phenomenon, it is known that dozens of big people die from kicks and punches, so we must be careful.

Then is we continuous this problem  ¿ can the violence finish?

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Manuela Rivera Martinez

Juliana Avendaño

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TELEVISION HAS DESTROYED COMMUNICATION AMONG FRIENDS AND FAMILY?

TOPIC SENTENCE: Television modified people´s behaviors leading them to non-social attitude

When people fully focus their attention on the TV, they forget to happily share with their relatives

People are replacing his affectionate friend s for a virtual friends who don´t express the same feeling

We are behaving violently relation with our family because of stereotypes presented on TV

CONCLUTION: Television contributes to entertain, but not contribute to créate social relationship

We are converting in a people with a narrow-minded attitude towards socializing.

We don´t have the same lovely relation with our family because we don´t stay enough time with them.

People are destroying their relationships because they aren’t dedicating much time

Despite technology offers a lot of communication possibilities, this divide us of our near relatives.

Spending so much time in front of a television set can cause delays in the intelectual development of people and will be severally distracted.

People see a fantastic and unreal world shown on television and it makes when they go to the real world is more difficulty  because it is completely different

We are learning  violently attitudes that we see on TV as we believe are correct

Television teach us to viciously the people judge the people for the physical appearance it make that we can´t coexist with different people.

Television shows unrealistic attitude s of people but when we live with others does not seem correct their ways and are generated big conflict

CONCLUSION 2:

We are completely forgetting that we have a family because we pass much time using technology.

People are taking distance from the real world to be totally immersed in the world of television

We believe that our attitudes should be equal to the stereotypes presented in the television, how much time do you spend watching TV and how much time do you spend sharing with your family?

ALEJANDRA OSPINA

VALENTINA QUINTANA VÉLEZ

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Why do the people inmigrate to other contries?

Migration processes are inherent in the human species and many other species. Born of self-preservation of the species rather than the individual, and are always due to a comparative assessment of the environment where they live in terms of resources and possibilities that account, and a different environment, in which there is a perception of those resources and capabilities can be bigger and better.There are several causes for immigration ranging from global to personal reasons.Probably one of the most common is the economic migration, since many people emigrate seeking higher income in another country or a better standard of living.

At present this type of migration typically occurs from less developed countries to more developed countries and in many cases these migrants enter or stay illegally in the country.Another important reason for immigration is what will be happening to one in the country. One may want to emigrate for political, ethnic or religious persecution or to escape war or unstable political situations.

In some cases immigration is associated with professions or occupations, such as religious missionaries, employees of transnational corporations, employees of international NGOs or foreign service employees. For scientists, it is, in some cases, expected, or even required, as part of his career studying or working in countries other than the country of origin

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Susan Zuluaga

Mariana Quiceno

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Is it more mportant to be able to work wth a group of people on a team or to work ndependently?

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Is it more mportant to be able to work wth a group of people on a team or to work ndependently?

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Team work will lead us to a more collaborative society.

When we do groups the work is mas rapidly and furthermore easily.

We are going to have a society more united.

The colaborative work allows advantages to social and cultural level.

It's bettler the team work than the individual one when we are making groups.

The work will be more concret, fast and satisfactory as for a factory or a comunitly.

It's faster because there is some people who divide the work, this it allows much agility.

The sucess of enterprises depenas, largely, vapport, communication and commitment that may exist among employees.

The group constitutes, the scope of organizations activitios that are important or interesting for individuos that compose it.
The investigation demonstrates that by means of the collaborative learning the students may achieve even more success than the teacher to make understand certain concepts to the partners. The cause of this fact is that the partners are very close regarding their cognitive development and the experience in the study matter, in this way, the partner that learns is not the only one who benefits of the experience, but the student that explains the matter to the partners reaches a deeper understanding.

The independent work also can allow efficiency in what it goes away to do but can have minor agility since only a person realizes it.

We can conclude that the work in group is very much a productive mas that him individual work for which the knowledge and opniones of different persons many complete mas helps to have a work.

Valentina arcila

Nathalie torres

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Making a bad decision is better than making no decision

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Making a bad decision is better than making no decision

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Making a decision can change your life, decision making allows you to exercise and streghten your character when facing different concequences. Often we feel insecure about our decisions that can change accidentally our plans, expectatives or ambitions, when we finally make a decision, it can better or worsen the situation . Taking decisions makes you exercise your mental habilities and make them strong when triying to get the best from every opportunity . Knowing how to make a decision allows you to get trough the very difficult problems easily. No matter which decision we take, all this is really important and we don't have to be afraid of making a mistake, we have to be sure in ourseves and the decisions we constantly make. Although we take a risk, it is necesary to know which one is the best option.

Decision making is the process by which a choice is made between options or ways to solve different life situations in different contexts: at work, family or sentimental level.At the individual level is characterized by the fact that a person makes use of his reasoning and thinking to choose a solution to a problem that comes to his life. like the decision we take can change radically our lifes we feel frightened about the things that come after, also when we make this decisions and we alredy had expectations they may change thanks to the concequences.

To make a decision, whatever it's nature, it is necessary to know, understand and analyze a problem so that is what this is what the mind exercises and throught this we can offer solutions. In some cases we can solve them quickly, but in other cases the consequences of a good or bad choice can have significant role in our life.

Our past let us experiences and many of them are decisions, so that is what we can take as an example of how they affect in our daily life for this reason that we have the knowledge and ability to make the right decisions.

As we explained above we can conclude that the desicion making process take a basic part of our life, sometimes it can be tricky, easy, difficult, simple, complicated or obvious because we must choose the way that we think is correct, but, How can we know that it's a good decision? (387 words).

Adverbs: So, daily, quickly, after, radically.

Adjectives: Good, bad, frightened , significant, tricky, easy, difficult, simple, obvious.

Valerie Nicole Veron

Sofia Giraldo

Manuela Vallejo

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There will always be violence in the world?

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There will always be violence in the world?

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Violence is an inner human condition that you cannot easly change.

this happens because of humanitarian uncounsiosness .

*Confrontations between bands.

*The search of destruction of the stability of the state.

*Mistreating of the people.

In conclusion when violence is not controlled is has a posibility that causes an enormous problems in society.

-The standart solution to the problem of protection against violence has been to bands.

Example: When bands made pacts and killing.

-Provide for a common defense against other bands.

Example: When these clash over a territory.

-The differences.

Example: When a person it is

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The best jobs are the ones that pay a lot of money?

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The best jobs are the ones that pay a lot of money?

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INTRODUCTION:

In this written work we will learn that not all the jobs that pay the most are the best Freelancing is a kind of important work in that people work for their self and it will well paid Study at university helps to get a well  paid employment To create successful businesses in Colombia is important to study Hard.
BODY:
People should prepare study something good  to have a good job and make money.

In business there are many opportunities and brilliant offers to work that anyone can enjoy, especially those intelligent people who study properly and have a good life plan.

In Colombia they are given good salaries but only in positions of political work of government in and in companies of very important quality that very few, although there are important companies in which working hard receive satisfactory wages.

Today companies are more concerned with making money that simply pay well no matter if they have great experience and are highly qualified academically.

Some jobs that much money in Colombia and the world are paid for high performance would be those with high risks, people who handle toxic products carefully, primarily people who save lives.

The government should pay for people with important jobs that actually help out the community forward for a better quality of life like teacher of universities, colleges and schools. Also avoid only good wages to the unique people in the world of politics remove both corporate tax so that they can make improvements to pay their employees.

CONCLUSION:

We can conclude that in Colombia and the world to a person progress and have a good quality of life,  the person must have some very advanced studies and practice efficientlyin a company.

we can conclude that study helps to get a good job.

we can also deduct the highest paid jobs are the government.

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Abril Galeano Mira

Isabella Herrera Martinez

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is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently?

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is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently?

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Team work will lead us to a more collaborative society.

when we do groups the work is mas rapidly and furthermore easily.

we are going to have a society more united.

the colaborative work allows advantages to social and cultural level.

it's bettler the team work than the individual one when we are making groups.

the work will be more concret, fast and satisfactory as for a factory or a comunitly.

it's faster because there is some people who divide the work, this it allows much agility.

the sucess of enterprises depenas, largely, vapport, communication and commitment that may exist among employees.

the group constitutes, the scope of organizations activitios that are important or interesting for individuos that compose it.

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Televisión has destroyed communication among friends and family?

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Televisión has destroyed communication among friends and family?

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Television is a mean that breaks communication between people.People prefer to watch a good and fun series at home than talking with others people.It generates an enormous addiction in people so that they can not stop watching tv.People get appart from the real world accindentally and they start living on a television fantasy world.Television dependance states a big issue today,people need to be more consious about its usage.

Is faster and easier than making letssure activities with their families.They can find show for any likes they have.People are breaking the relationships because they dont spend enough time.Once people sit donw to watch tv they forget to be with friends and family.This slows the intellectual development of people and in future could affect time of study of a very strong way.The media and society have fostered watching tv and being a habit it becomes necessary ,addictive and dangerous.Television shows to people something very different from the real world and this makes them have bad relationships with their family and friends when they go to the real world today people are watching so much television they dont notice what happens in the real environment and only thing they care is about what happens in their tv shows.People reflect their dreams on television and why lel away from real world.

Television makes people turn away from his family creating conflicts.People dont know how to carefully control the time they must spend watching tv and time to spend with family.Every day we have a different vision of what is really the world and we immersed in a fictional world that offers television.Television will be absolutely essential in the future?

MARIA CAMILA PEÑA

LAURA MANUELA LOPEZ

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Making a bad decision is better than making no decision

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Making a bad decision is better than making no decision

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Introduction:

There are good decisions and there are bad decisions,not a decision we can make concerns,decisions are very important because we can change lives positively or negatively.You have to know how to choose a decision,being good at making decisions makes you a better person.

Body:

Not make a decision leaves you in your comfort zone and not to choose a path that do not change your life but you can also lose the best opportunity that has presented you.

When you take a decision you can not just think of yourself, you have to think about what will happen if you choose that path.If you have experience taking know what the right decision,because it is difficult to make decisions.

If you're making your result be too selfish just for your benefit, but also make decisions that can benefit others you become a better person for caring for others.

Conclusion

Making decisions is hard?

Decision is important to create a good or bad,if because you have to take into account those who benefit and those who affect taking into account a balance.

Sometimes accidentally we take the wrong decisions and then we usually regret this as such an important decision we have to patiently do not care if you're a tall, short, fat, skinny, ugly, beautiful person that will not influence your thoughts.

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Juliana Sofia Diaz Rodriguez

Mariana Valentina Motta Camargo

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In the future ,students may have teh choice of studying at home by using technology .

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In the future ,students may have teh choice of studying at home by using technology .

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The technology fast needs survelliance and instruction learning at home does not meet this need rearding adolecents.the school is productive for the beautiful social relationships between people.at school we adquire interesting knowledge through various materials that in the house are not available.studying in school is better than studying at home because there are so many distractions with borning technology.those having access to education are more intelligent and big successful than those access.

A socially is good to be in school to have a good relationships with others,interacting with them not only chat, also physically.throug social relationships can get more friends.generate questions and resolve on a certain topic through the opinion of others.

Mainly the study is a long lifetime opportunity in the future.is also an activity that allows us to learn about topics in specifically.through different subjects such as: mathematics,spanish, and english.

For students of today will always be better to study at home than study at the school for the amenities it contains such as : facebook, music, television, movies , etc.

In conclusion, the school will always have fewer advantages for us students but in the future will thank all the effort and commitment that we put cur life

(218 words)

Sofia monsalve

Natalia evans

TEACHER:CESAR HOYOS

STUDY AT HOME OR AT SCHOOL?

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DOES THE VIOLENCE WILL EXIST IN THE FUTURE?

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DOES THE VIOLENCE WILL EXIST IN THE FUTURE?

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Violence will always be led by injustice and intolerance of people wich have negative  values born from ambition. In some contries the state is very unfair when collecting taxes and not helping the poor. Social differences  such as a person believing that is more important than other people points to violence . As people become more powerful they become more greedy. Violence  should be punished will the death penality becauuse violence deteriorates our quality of life in physchological and social terms.

Violence is not only blows,is any oct that causes phisical or phychological suffering,eat occurs when a person imposes his power over another aggressively ,violating their rights.This behavior is a cultural problema,wich can be trasformed through education.The origin of the violence occurs because people are intolerant and indiferent,this should be severaly and quickly punished to improve the quality of life or every member of society. Social differences refer to a socio-economic situation in wich a minority or group is treated differently by another individual or group greater social power.The causes of inequality may be cultural reasons,religious,ethnic,gender e.t.c;covering allareas of social life:educational,labor disputes and may even turn into legal dispuetes.Social differences and it is consequences are die. are manifested on may accasions thorough insulation, marginilation and discrimination.Power has a natural foundation based on different skills,resources and abilities of humas,allowing them more power and completely  greed.Beyond ideologils and beliefs in capitulism,greed is one of the great evils of modern man.Generally greed begets violence in societies and also causes  lie that leads them to plan strategies and tricks to fool the neighbor and thus submit to his will,so it is important to achieve a society in wich all individual enjoy the some rights as citizens.

Violence is born when we don not know to live with people with different thoughts and opinions.By having a high position in society we have more powerful,on the other hand this does not entitle us to belittles or do you feel bad others who belive that they are inferioir by social.People are stub born to belive with more power than the others because they belive that having more things that others are more powerful and can master more.¿Can violence increase over time?

LAURA ALVAREZ HERRERA

MANUELA GOMEZ CARMONA

( 390 WORDS)

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Ilegal immigrants do not contribute to the development of the country's economy. In Venezuela Maduro's president says the colombian people's houses to be destroyed, because he considered those immigrant as invader. Other example related to this situation happened between U.S.A and Cuba 50 years ago, when both countries started argoing. And other one is some people that lived in Dominican Republic were haitian's were deported by the government to their native country. The problems in this countries appears because the economy and politic situation.

IN VENEZUELA TO COLOMBIA: Maduro creates an comunist economy because he thinks that it was to favore his country. Unfortunately the thing that cause this, was the unemployment of the 25% of the people in Venezuela and viseversa. Maduro was deshonoring his own citizens, considering that his family is colombian. IN CUBA AND U.S.A: In the present year was a dialogue that result the problems between Cuba and U.S.A. Right now the cuban people can go to U.S.A in a legal way, without any necesity to go in with false documents. Now the goverments agree to take decisions for the great economy in the two contries. IN DOMINICAN REPUBLIC AND HAITI: The Dominican Republic occupies the eastern two-thirds of the islands of Spain, while the rest belongs to the Republic of Haiti. This has a population almos equal in size to Haiti, seven times larger economy, six times more prosperous than Haiti. Some sectors of the Dominican economy widely using Haitian labor in their productive activities.

Unfortunately for this situation are countries that might have managed to be world powers and that now simply need help of countries whith major economic stability to solve the problems with other conditions. But what now turs us out to a concernis that if.....

this will continue happening?

CATALINA LOPERA

SUSANA ZAPATA

GRADE 7

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in the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology

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in the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology

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The right usage of technology in the house supports the knowledge learn in the school.The internet help us, to understand all the topics of school in the house. Technology makes the homework easy because you can get almost instanst answers. The internet is a good tool, that in a near future will educate us, avoiding the need to go to school. The internet is a good mean to learn and studying fastly and eficent in the house and school.

On the internet we find interactive explication of the topics. We learn quickly in the internet because we avoid the need to go to other places. We can find different explanations to different topics no matter their complexity.There are many sites on wich you can easily find information. Technology makes the homework fun because offer sites with different media that allows you to interact in several ways. Internet gets instant answers while the books have limited information The need of going to other places can be very exhausting so that, the internet allows you to find websites with school topics. It is means that you cannot only have at home but also in other places and this enables us to study anywhere we may be. The internet will continue to grow so the knowledge of school will be more extensive so we can widely learn.

For study we donot need to go to school, because we can do it on the websites at home;all can learn new knowledges. Internet is a very good tool more than the books, because have unlimited information which enable increase the understanding briefly of the topics. Internet offers the comfort of studying anywhere so effectively and simple, wich is your favorite webtool to study and why?

(293 WORDS)

MARIANA MORENO

SARA GOMEZ CANO

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8.when students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems.

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8.when students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems.

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Introduction

When a child goes from a school to another, both fathers and sons don’t think two times before to take this decisión. Example-:

The son only thought on your new friends and his parents only thought costs about the school, the transport and economy.

With this put my opinión about why there are problems when cute child goes from one school to another new school.

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The first problema like we said before are than the fathers and son think in different things

Another problem is: the child don´t accustom at new school, because he are so much custom to activity academy o social life. These inadaptability from child has than child take low qualifications.

The family homework is finalized on time than the child leave to be protected and formed only by parents and the institution appears with new contributions. The son don’t depended more from parents because appear a new form in his leave, the masters.

The school will play a new role to inform and to educate.

The child in the beginning of school has learned to adapt to these circumstances but when the child changes schools must again adapt to the norms, rules, penalties, disciplinary aspects new values and the new school has.

In turn, the child must accommodate the sharing of new companions, schedules, transportation, work, school and extracurricular activities and other commitments to avoid that parents should have agreements with their children and discuss problems or difficulties he had at the start the year school.

Conclusion:

Both wise parents and son should accommodate to the new circumstance, the parents should be trust on yours sons and help them stand by side to take decision. And the children should be trust on all advice than the parents said them.
(295 words)
Evelyn Andrea Ortega Duque

Valeria Morales Sierra

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The illegal immigrants who have not papers in order to be in a particular country, that they are a phenomenon of legal study, leading the governors to issue rules allowing them to regulate their stay in the country and possibly the evacuation thereof.

The legality of each country to deport foreign immigrants, remains one of the most divisive issues countries is not pleasant or the country of immigrants, or the country hosting a foreign person who can take away your citizen´s rights and opportunities must be shared or reduced so that all the inhabitants of the territory to enjoy.

Thus, through management, it is freedom or hardness to be given to this issue is a political, social and cultural issue; considering that the main reasons why immigrants choose to go to a particular country are economic, personal, work and family reunification. What drives governments to regulate the expulsion of a foreign country that are in a state of illegal immigration.

Illegal immigration is a complication that had sunk to the governments of developed countries since past times, but for immigrants the option to abandon their culture, family and country for an uncertain future, it is a difficult decision, taken just before the difficulty of having poor quality of life in their country of origin and the absence of economic opportunities, since it is not unknown to anyone the possibility of sending well be a few dollars or euros to their families is what needs people to take such decisions.

Analyzing the documentation on the subject, which supports that illegal immigrants can be deported and the state is not committing any wrongdoing to proceed against the case and that whoever is committing improper or illegal act is the immigrant to not have their papers in order, it is considered that immigrants have rights like every human being, and the lack of documentation should not affect the dignity of people, should not be discriminated against or treated contemptuously, because despite not having a legal residence permit, they maintain their status as human beings, to be respected and guaranteed.

Before investigating on this issue we did understand that undocumented immigrants had no rights because living without permission to legally reside in a country that is not theirs, but notes that this is simply a myth. The human rights of undocumented immigrants have been articulated in various instruments and treaties, both regionally and internationally; non-discrimination, together with equality before the law are basic and general principles of the protection of Human Rights.
CONCLUSION
Illegal immigrants can be deported, as he says the word "illegal" ... are not regulatory documents to be in a different country of origin, must take into account that people leave their home countries to get a better quality of life for them selves or their families to obtain greater welfare and social assistance, at the expense of emotional effort, with all this and although they are illegal immigrants, have rights that must be respected and be treated with dignity. After researching the subject, it is aquired and extend the knowledge about this social phenomenon, which affects millions of people worldwide, their families and states.

It broadens the perspective on a current issue, as well as making personal judgments based on knowledge of rules and legal criteria that expand the thinking and the opinion of the students.
(555 words)
Sara Correa Ortega.

Daniela Montoya Uribe.

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people say that computers have made life more complex and stressfull.

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people say that computers have made life more complex and stressfull.

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INTRODUCTION:

technology for some years been moving very quickly to everywhere and replacing things such as CDs, telephones, radios, etc ...

Certainly, this allowed to make major scientific, medical discoveries, etc.
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Technology is the set of scientifically arranged, allowing expertise to design, create goods, services that facilitate adaptation to the environment and always satisfying  the essential needs and desires of humanity.

positive aspects:

increased leisure time to be earmarked forthe recreation and the development of interesting jobs, lower workers' efforts , and often, this creates new jobs.

The negatives:

inactivity, means lack of activity or movement.   It generates Stress as a physiological reaction in the body that comes into play for various defense mechanisms, to cope with a situation that is perceived as threatening or increased demand.

now,

now, for convenience people have different devices at home, among these the computer,  the most simple and easy to use, either fixed or portable.
CONCLUSION:
Indeed, Technological activity influences well the social and economic progress everywhere.

The importance of technology in our times and for tomorrow: The technology provides great benefits to humanity, its main role is to create best useful tools to simplify saving time and effort of labor, technology plays a major role in our social environment and thanks to she can communicate immediately by cell phone.

(217 words)

Stefany Sanchez Urrego.

Mariana Martinez.

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why the people immigrate to other coutries

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why the people immigrate to other coutries

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Immigration is a phenomenon that will never stop.

-People immigrate to other coutries for many situations such as political difference, so the result of two or more groups of parties is to take the political power so the people go to other place, because the political differences are the causes of war, discrimination or violence.

-The young adults or children go to other schools in other coutries or cities for different razons for example bullying or discrimination.

-Work: many people change the coutries because they have more opportunities for jobs.

Many people change the country for different razon work, school or political differences.

Immigration is a phenomenon that will never stop.

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--Political differences: when people dislike the representantives of a gran political field, people change the countries and cities.

-Violence because many people for this razon do not have house or family.

-Discrimination for the differences for example the color of skin, religion,ect.

-War this destroid the families or they houses.

--Go to others schools, they go for more better opportunities.

-Bullying the students are autodestraed.

-Opportunities: best option for the school or for their parents.

-For likes: many people dislike the school of the origin and like other school and change.

--Job many adults or older adults like other jobs and change the city.

-Schedule, many people change the job because your schedule is too long and has no time for personal matters such as family or friends.

- Salary: people want more money and for that change the city.

-Family ocasionally live in other coutry and the person like to change for this razon.

Conclution

the IMMIGRATION is a phenomeon that will never stop happening because the people for many razon chance the city. Immigration is the opinion when go to other city, phenomeon is a repeting action and never stop to happening because the humans are insetable and equaly of they ideas.

Maria Sofia Sepulveda Villa

Ana Sofia Jimenez Volkmar

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THE BEST JOBS ARE THE ONES THAT PAY A LOT OF MONEY.

INTRODUCTION:

Recently in our culture many busy people think that the best jobs are the ones that pay a lot of money, but almost the majority of those people are completely wrong, because much money never guarantee happiness and while we grow up , we learn that what really matters is to enjoy each beautiful moment of what we do.
BODY:
Often we find many young people who after completing his studies do not know what to study in college because their parents pressure them to choose a career in which they can achieve a successful work and where they earn much money and on the other hand they have to choose a profession that they really like and even if they do not earn much money they can be really happy, that when they get to work they feel satisfaction with what they do and the  most importantly they never look boring and bad tempered.

CONCLUSION:

Finally we can say with certainty that the most successful in their work and economically people are those who regardless of what they earn creatively found ways to expand their vision and create new sources of income so we can have a job in wich they earn a lot of money and they can be really happy.

(210 words)

Ana Sofia Avendaño.

Luisa Fernanda Berrio.

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These are the aspects you must consider when posting your essay: a) Write the question / statement on the top of the post. b) Your essay must have 3 paragraphs: Introductory, Supporting and Clonclusion. c) Each paragraph must contain the elements studied in class. (You can check NEO to review the parts of an essay) (https://bethlemitasbello.neolms.com) d) Use ten (10) adjectives and ten (10) adverbs in your essay. (Write all of them in bold). e) The minimum number of words is 180. (State the number of words in the end of the essay)
f) When using adjectives, include at least:
-One adjective with ed ending.
-One adjective with ing ending.
-One comparative form.
-One superlative form.
g) Add an image related to your essay.
h) Eventually, write your names in the lower part of your post.

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