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1. (자신) 글쓰기
2. (짝) 댓글로 피드백 하기
3. (영어쌤) 댓글로 피드백 제공
4. (자신) 최종 글쓰기, 그림과 목소리 업로드
* 목소리 녹음이 어려울 경우 직접 발표

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The person I admire is Alexander McQueen. His job is a fashion designer. He designs inventive clothes. The reason why I respect him is that his design reveals his own personality. I wish I had my own personality like him.

-선생님의 피드백을 받은 글입니다.

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선생님 확인 받았습니다

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선생님 피드백 안받았어요

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선생님 피드백 안받았어요

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Hi my name is Jooeun. My role model is You Jaeseok. He is a natinal Mc that everyone knows well.
He's also a funny guy and He's playing a lot in the entertainment 'Running Man.' The reason why I respect him is that he is considerate of others, overcame the difficulties and came all the way here. That's why my role model is You Jaeseok.
-피드백 못받았어요

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동료피드백 받았고 선생님 피드백 을 못받았습니다.

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Let me introduce my role model!

Her name is Maria Montessori.

Do you know who Maria Montessori is?

Her job is a child educator.

And she opened a kindergarten for the children of workers.

She also designed the Montessori education method for children.

I respect her.

Because I want to be a kindergarten teacher and a good teacher for children.

I'll try hard and become a teacher like her
피드백 받았습니다.

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Hello. My name is Yeji Park.
My role model is Dominique - Jean Larrey.
The reason why this person is my role model is that when I become a doctor, the medical department I want to go to is emergency medicine, and  he is called the father of emergency medicine.
I respect this man, and if I become a doctor in the future, I would like to be called the mother of emergency medicine. This man was a doctor living in France and is now dead.

피드백 안받았습니다

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피드백 받았어요

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My role model is the president of Samsung.
His name is Lee Kunhee, and his job is a Samsung president. He ran a company. He's a great CEO and a Korea's richest man. He was born on 9 January 1942 and died on 25 October 2020. Unfortunately, he is not with us now.
선생님 피드백 받았습니다.

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선생님한테 피드백 받았습니다

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My role model is Lee Suman, the executive producer of SM Entertainment. The reason why I respect him is that he debuted many handsome idols. It's called "Suman's Flower Garden." It literally means that Suman has many pretty and handsome people. I really like NCT. Lee su man, who debuted my favorite nct, can be my role model. Let's all enjoy "Suman's Flower Garden!"

피드백 못 받았습니다.

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Let me introduce my role model, Hye-An.
He is  a youtuber with 1.06 million subscribers. He plays various games and makes videoes about them. His name is private. I respect him for a number of reasons, some of which are that he is kind to everyone, humorous and well-dressed. His height is 179 cm. I want to resemble him. With this, I will finish introducing my role model.
피드백 못받았어요

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My role model is Ariana Grande. She is a singer, songwriter from Florida. I really like her third album. Because it’s the album that shows her sexy and imposing appearance the best. I felt Ariana was trying really hard. And I felt her freedom and her dignity were wonderful. I want to resemble Ariana’s freedom and her dignity.

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My dad is a teamn leader of
Changwon center
He is good a golf
He takes my family to trlp
He fixes cars well
He is good at jegichagi
korean traditional play
He is my  great fa ther

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iMy role model is Soyeon Jeon. She is 24 years old and 158 centimeters tall. She is a member of the G-idle. Her jobs are songwriter, dancer, rapper, singer. I am respect her because she is passionate and hardworker.  SO, I WANT TO BE A  LIKE SOYEON JEON.

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Hi, My role model is Park hyun sook.
She is a writer. She writes a lot of books.
I respect her because she writes funny and meaningful books.
Her books tell the problems in the world.
Also she publishes a lot of books and all the books is good.
I respect for this point.
Lastly my dream is a famous writer like Park hyun sook.
선생님 피드백 받았습니다

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Hi! my role model is my English teacher.
Her name is Do Moon-hee.
She is friendly.
She is nice and funny.
She helps me study English.
And she is good at English.
I respect my English teacher.

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Let me introduce my role model. My role model is BTS's rm. His real name is Namjoon Kim and his job is a singer. He is the leader of an idol group called BTS. He manages seven team members with a sense of responsibility by acting as a leader. I want to emulate his leadership. He writs and composes various songs, and he debuted in 2013 and has been trusted by the members. Also, he  taught himself English after watching an American drama called "Friend." Since then, I have steadily developed my English skills. As a result, he currently plays an interpreter for the team.
피드백 못 받았어요

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Let me introduce my role model. My role model is Seo Eun-kwang, the leader of BTOB and the main vocalist. His occupation is a singer and musical actor, and he is a director of Cube. He sings and dances. The reason I admire him is that he is a good person who helps people a lot, compliments them and makes people laugh.

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1228 허선경
Hello, I'm Heo Sunkkyung. My role model is BTS. BTS is now a very famous and wonderful idol. But the reason I admire BTS is that they had been unknown for years and must have been very difficult. But they overcame it well and became BTS today. I'm not a fan of BTS, but I'm one of their admirers.
-피드백 받지 못했습니다-

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His Japanese name is Kitashinsuke and his Korean name is Shin Yu-hyeon. And he us 175.2cm tall and weighs 67.5kg. His occupation is a student and he plays volley ball. And he is a captoin and wingspiker in the his team. The reason I admire him is that he is athletic and has good leader ship

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My rolde is Lee Kwang-soo.
his name,is Lee Kwang-soo.
he is an acter by profession.
His debut film is "he's coming" in 2008.
He was shown in the "running man" TV program.
The reason lespect is that
he is fun and he acts well and he makes people smile .I hope uncle gwangsu gets better soon.

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My role model is my mom. I can't tell you her name. Her job is a nurse. She takes a good care of her patients in the hospital. I respect her because she endures the coronavirus test ever month and works hard.

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피드백을 못받았어요
His nameis Jaybum Park
His jab is a head of her entertainment company and singer.
He raps and sings well.
I respect him because he is good at singing and rapping.
And he is handsome and rich and the representative of
my favorite agency.
해석
그의 이름은 박재범이다
그의 직업은 소속사 대표와 가수이다
그가 하는일은 랩과 노래이다
존경하는이유는 노래도 잘하고 랩도잘하기때문이다
그리고 잘생기고 돈도 많고 내가 가장 좋아하는 소속사 대표이다.

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His name is Ash Island.

He is a rapper.

He usually writes lyrics and sings.

He makes songs and sings them.

And his signature album is ISLAND, More ISLAND.
피드백 못받았어요

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My dad is the team leader of cj Changwon Center
And play golf well.
Family trips are also good.
And fix the car
good at jigsaw
that's a cool dad
저희 아빠는 cj이 창원 센터 팀장입니다
그리고 골프도 잘 치시고
가족여행도 잘 갑니다
그리고 자동차도 잘 고치고
제기차기를 잘 하시는
멋진 아빠입니다

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1220 이다솜

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My role model is the president of Samsung.
His name is Lee Kunhee, and his job is a Samsung president.
He ran a company he's owned.
I respect him because he's great CEO and a Korea's richest man.
He was born on 9 January 1942 and died on 25 October 2020.
Unfortunately, he is not with us now.
일부가 누락된 부분이 있어 추가하여 다시 올립니다. 죄송합니다.
피드백을 받은 글입니다.

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Hi , My role model is Park hyun sook.
She is a writer. She writer a lot of books.
I respect her because she writer funny and meaningful books. Her books tell the problems in the world. Also she publishes a lot of books and all books is good.
I respect her this point.
Lastly my dream is a famous writer like Park hyun sook.
선생님 피드백 받았습니다.

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1210박민주
My favorite Pony is a princess
Luna. The reason I like her is that she ls so pretty, patient and polite.
It is fascinating to see it change when she is angry.  I like it. Don't you think she and I are similar?

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1222 이윤하

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My role model is 'Samulgung Miscellaneous Knowledge'. He is a YouTuber with 1.31 million subscribers. He makes and uploads videos about what people are curious about. What happens when you shoot into the sky? 'Why do you flinch in your sleep?' These are small but curious stories. The reason I respect him is that as I said before, he makes videos on the subject of trivial stories and it is useful.

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My role model introduction letter
Let me introduce my role model!
Her name is Maria Montessori.
Do you know who Maria Montessori is?
Her job is a child educator.
And she opened a kindergarten for the children of workers.
She also designed the Montessori education method for children.
I respect her.
Because I want to be a kindergarten teacher and a good teacher for children.
I'll try hard and become a teacher like her

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선생님 피드백 안받았어요

Hi, today I will introduce my role model. My role model is my mom. My mom's name is ♡♡♡and my mom doesn't have a job because she's a normal housewife. Why I respect my mom is that she is so cool and she works hard for me and my family.

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My role model is Dominique - Jean Larrey.
The reason why this person is my role model is that when I become a doctor, the medical department I want to go to is emergency medicine, and  he is called the father of emergency medicine.
I respect this man, and if I become a doctor in the future, I would like to be called the mother of emergency medicine. This man was a doctor living in France and is now dead.

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(올린 글이 삭제되지 않아서 다시 올림)
The person I admire is Alexander McQueen. His job is a fashion designer. He designs inventive clothes. The reason why I respect him is that his design reveals his own personality.  I wish I had my own personality like him.

결과물 사진

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-녹음 내용과 사진을 같이 첨부할 수 없어서 따로 올립니다.

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1228허선경

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Hello everyone. Today I want to introduce my role model. It’s STAYC’s “YOON SE EUN”. Despite her young age.She is good at dancing and singing. She also study’s hard and attending school even though she is currently. She’s very sociable. She gets along with everyone she meets. Also she looks so cute. It makes her more attractive. She said she would study for her future no matter how hard it was.

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My rolemodel is Jung youjung.
Her job is an author.
She writes a novel.
I respect her because she writes amazing novels.
She wrote [Night Of 7 Years].
She wrote mainly under the theme of 'Human Evil'.
What I want to emulate from her is all about writing with probability.
선생님 피드백 받았어요.

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My role model is Lee Gong.
Her job is an illustrator
So, she draws illustrations with various characters.
I saw her for the first time on Lee Gong's youtube channel.
I respect her because she draws her own unique charaters steadily.
She published a book for people who want to be an illustrator.
Until now I introduced my role model.
(피드백 받았어요)

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영어발표 녹음

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1228허선경

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My role model is Ariana Grande. She is a singer-songwriter from Florida. I really like her third album. Because it’s the album that shows her sexy and imposing appearance the best. I felt Ariana was trying really hard. And I felt her freedom and her dignity were wonderful. I want to resemble Ariana’s freedom and her dignity.

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1206 김예은

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1206 김예은

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My role model is Steve Jobs, so he didn't adapt well at school, but his desire to do so was great, and his creativity is considered one of the world's lowest 0s and 5s. And the reason for the world-famous iPod is that Steve Jobs passionately did what he wanted to do to be successful. So I'd like to compliment him for this.