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Outline task 3

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Hi Jennifer,

well, you did it and survived, that is good.
Now, let me give you some pieces of advice:
1. your introduction was very good, however, you didn't use your outline, but a text.  Because of this, you did not speak, you read. you read and the parts that you didn't read were memorized.  you had great ideas, but you memorized them or read them.  the task was a speech, which means that you needed to speak.  your grade is Below.

Action plan: record your voice and send me a whatsaap message answering the following question: what's your opinion on conventional medicine vs alternative medicine? 2 minutes recording. try to do it spontaneously.  send me the message on Thursday July 7.

Platform: doing ok, pay attention to scores.

Cordially,
Anderson
Your teacher

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Hello Jennifer.

As for as I'm concerned you did a good job, you recycled a little vocabulary and you followed some public speaking principies, however I consider that you must work more in respect to your posture and you intonation, because in your presentation you were a little nervous. Maybe you should practice in front of the mirror, it will be able to help you.  You can improve but is necessary that you control your nerves to get better results.

Cheer up!  You can do it.

See you soon.   Lorena Londoño

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http://vocaroo.com/i/s1qJoPOehrqQ
Click on link to listen to your feedback.

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I think that you should be able to try to improve your speed when you are talking because you always talk with pauses....... .You used many times tag questions, it was so good.

It was a good job!
Nicolas Ulloa

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○ Make yourself look good online.

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