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Use red post for those who have not presented their works on the consultation day.

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1jmoJyJRy03i4GN1YbPMg7e6dkd07-4bdLrdmllMZqMA/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xoIHTx_di4P5QGU2tnOOAfJK7ey_hDk3V-Hv471UrWQ/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NNqQOnkuot5cb0N71VLNSnoApnrf1E7ItWQAZjd_rgg/edit#slide=id.g118aadfff92_0_6

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Sastra Inggris - Ads - Google Slides

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Member: Yazi(6) / Bryan(10) / Matthew(25)
Side note: the idea was that the reason for the lack of words and full paragraphs in the ppt is that the original plan was to make the presentation the main focus. What that means is that the actual speaking part of the presentation was supposed to be the main thing and the ppt was only supposed to be only a support for the talking, but it turns out we didn't even get the chance to present.

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Member: Evan(08), Adit(18), Russel(29)

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Thank you for the progress!
1. Please check your worksheet naming.
You named it worksheet 1: direct selling.
2. To make the CTA clearer add an imperative word, please.
For example:
Now’s your chance! Subscribe / Join 0.99 $ per month!
3. Thoughful strategies for the direct selling ad! Just make sure that those fit with your target audience (the direct selling one).
4. For the body direct selling: nice points!
Wouldn't be better to be shorter without repeated you?
(You can play any songs, download...)

or if you wanna emphasize the words "you can" with reparations, please make a different font/tone so that it becomes clear.

Good job! Keep it up!

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Thank you for submitting your progress! I love the way you manage and work with the project from the beginning, anw,
Recommendations:
1. Any is normally used with plural and uncountable nouns in questions, negative and conditional sentences. check my comment about grammar ( any guitar) any guitars. they....

2. The brand awareness poster is cool and each element connects to one another. Great!

3. Be clear with the direct selling ad strategy!
"To make the viewer interested and impressed by the quality and tech of the guitar." Promoting the quality is mentioned on the body part, but not as a strategy, it's the element and the focus of the ad.
from what I've seen so far, the strategy used is discount.

4. Are you sure that the picture already represents your main promotion which is about its quality?

Fancy, thanks!

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Thank you for the progress!
1. Please arrange the slides. Present only the required and project related slides.
2. Be clear with what features you want to highlight
your target audience is already clear, good job!
3. Next, complete the elements on both types; direct selling and brand awareness.

Looking forward to the updates, thanks!

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Clear and nice, thank you!
Recommendation:
Give a simple note on the body part, showing features/points that you want to highlight.
as to support your headline, like one of your references.

The rests are excellent! thank you.

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Thank you for submitting yours!
Here are some recommendations:
1. An appreciation for the clear target audience. cool!
think about a strategy that can afford all products you advertise.
2. After knowing Logitec's value, come make our own that still emphasizes/promotes the value, but remember.. you have to create your own headline, body, slogan.

Catch up the progress guys! Keep the spirit on!

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1. Appreciation for the powerful, persuasive, and connected headline, body, and strategy for the brand awareness ad! Awesome. thank you team!
2. Please recheck your direct selling ad. Try to make powerful, persuasive and connected headline and body like your brand awareness ad.
Headline: Capturing the best quality with X-T4
Your point about the best quality has not been elaborated/ presented on the body part.

Fighting! you can do it, very appreciated progress!

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Understood. But unfortunately I cannot open the file it’s private i guess. Please adjust the setting. 🙏🏽

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Thank you for sharing the progress.

1. I have checked your work and it seems that your headline already meets the offered value, which also talks about technology.

However, please check the grammar and how you put the details on the body in the brand awareness ad.

2. Highlight your persuasive part, for example, You need it! → emphasize it more, by highlighting/boldening/giving different colours and fonts, etc.

3. Has a capable for editing? Are you sure? Check the grammar!
Recommendation: Has the capability of best and fast editing / perform the capability of best and fast editing (this is much better, I guess).
(be clear with your offering by adding adjective - kata sifat-)

4. Let people know that you want to promote two values: thin product but advanced technology by separating the two or making the sentences smoother.

5. But for the direct selling poster, is crystal clear. cool!
Thank you!

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Thank you for sharing your progress!
1. CTA is not a strategy, it's an element of an advertisement.
2. You have to make the headline in line with the value. Please check my recommendation on steps to create connected headlines and values.
So first, decide the value; what are/is the point/feature that you want to promote?
is that about the design, trend, ...?
then make a suitable headline that represents the value.
3. The offering is not clear for direct selling.
Try to make the elements step by step as I suggest.

Thank you and catch up! ;)

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Get access to files anywhere through secure cloud storage and file backup for your photos, videos, files and more with Google Drive.

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/14QubyIZfmdESKc7LccDzLBIxiLKFKn5K0k641qLhhOQ/edit?usp=sharing

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Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9

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Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9

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Brand Awareness Poster

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Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9

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Tito Sang Ketua S2-Deo/3, Tito/4, Brilly/9

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Direct Selling Poster

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Worksheet 1 and 2:

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1NNqQOnkuot5cb0N71VLNSnoApnrf1E7ItWQAZjd_rgg/edit#slide=id.g118aadfff92_0_0

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Group Members (Science Class 1):
Danu/22
Yesa/31
Bijann/32

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Yazi/6, Bryan/10, Matthew/25

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1. Josh/12
2. Fanuel/17
3. Nathan/27

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Ajibuana Wibowo/1
Deutelin Dipataruna/15
Narendra Bahi/26

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Worksheet 1.pptx - Microsoft PowerPoint Online

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https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1xoIHTx_di4P5QGU2tnOOAfJK7ey_hDk3V-Hv471UrWQ/edit?usp=sharing

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Where are the two products; brand awareness and direct selling ads? it is only the worksheet.

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Very nice progress!
Please attach the ads directly on Padlet under my feedback, as I have announced earlier so that I can see the detailed progress ways easier.

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Nice progress and excellent ads. Really love your authentic ideas! Thank you!

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Cool! thank you

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Thank you for the progress. The direct selling is cool but next time you can check the elements and details on the brand awareness one. ;)

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1. The brand awareness ad is super powerful.
2. For direct selling you just need to show more strategies and make clear distinctions for important words/phrases like CTA, headline, etc.

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Where are your updated works?

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Brand Awareness

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Sorry we're late