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Hello Luis,
You followed most of the criteria for this task- You structured your presentation and you included clauses but it would have been a good idea to include more. Just Focus on:
*fluency
*pronunciation: Vikings, hotel, locals, Haggins, helmet, sword castles
*wrong words: childrenS? assist is a synonym of help, maybe you meant "attend"
Task: very good
Platform: Perfect!

Best,
Andrea

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Comments for the video:Hello guys ,I understood the most of the ideas in your video, the visual support was a great idea for to do most interesting your presentation, maybe the edit of the video in some scenes didn't permit  that the audio was perfect. Good job¡

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Comments for the video:Hello guys ,I understood the most of the ideas in your video, the visual support was a great idea for to do most interesting your presentation, maybe the edit of the video in some scenes didn't permit  that the audio was perfect. Good job¡

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Marcela Colorado D

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Hello Luis,

You were a good reporter but you need to be more active when acting up. Remember that body language is important when shooting a video. Be careful with the pronunciation of some words:
*fluency
*pronunciation: horrendous, hurricane, effects, murders, public, several
* There are a many people? plural or singular? You can't have both referring to the same noun.

Additionally, you guys used the vocabulary from the unit but you did not use the grammar you were supposed to recycle for the video.

Task: Below
Platform: Perfect

Best,
Andrea

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Uploaded by César Augusto Ardila Zipa on 2016-08-24.

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Infomercial