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Boaring!!!

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Yes I Am For Sure, and also I'm Going To Blackpool For A Day Today!!!

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Hi guys

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Hope You Like It!!!

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Hi Guys It's Me Merłan And I Really Apreacheate All Of Year 4 Well Year 5 And I Can't Wait To See You All Again In Year 5

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Yyyyyyoooooooooyyyyyyy - yay

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The air was putrid like rotting vegetables. I approached the old wooden bridge. The bridge was wobbly like jelly and creaked like my grannies bones.I stepped on to the path and warily approached the door.
My curiosity took over my fear and just as i was about to knock on the door which was carved in to the tree an owl hooted. i froze to the spot and my skin was as clammy as ice. The smell became more intense but my legs would not work. The door was opening slowly, silently and serenely, time appeared to stand still. A figure loomed before me. It was an old woman with a warm and smiley face. "Are you all right dear" "You look awfully pale" I remember starting to stammer to try and explain that my curiosity got the better of me. I did not mean to intrude. "That's all right" she said , I have many a curious visitor. Run along now I bet your parents are worried.

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Cole homework 😄

In the creepiest and darkest part of the forest there lied a crusty old rickety brige but the brige rocked if something stud on it. Quietly there sat a strange tree but the tree moved like a human it smelt like a human that did not shower for 90 years ago. In the blink of an eye it felt like a Crystal shards falling from the sky there was a sound of a person getting beheaded from through the door.

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In the deepest darkest forest I leaped towards the creepy haunted tree. I was terrified the bridge was rickety like a derelict building, I walked inside and a 5 foot zombie was standing like a delicate statue and it suddenly roared like a lion roaring while fighting.

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One  cloudy day I was walking down the country street. I saw a path that leads into the deep dark forest, and that's were l saw a  door that's were l saw a door

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One cloudy day I was walking down the country  street. I  saw a  path that leads  into  the  deep  dark  forest,  and  that's  were  l saw a door that  was

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One cloudy day I was walking down the hard street. I saw a path that led into the forest, and that's were I saw a door that was lying in the tree. I saw stepping stones I walked on them and they were creaking.   The tree was full of moss and leafs.  I dared my self to go near the door...
Suddenly I opened the door and a sound was freaking me out...
The End! :]

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One day I was walking down the street to school and I saw a mysterious, dull door. Eagerly I ran through the mysterious, dull door and found out that it was a portal, a   really, really long portal. When it stopped I got out and saw a tall tree with a door in it just standing there, lonely with nobody there. I saw a door that had a kind of a light browny type of colour, it had a very rough surface for my hands. It smelt damp, I opened the door and heard it creak and I was scared. I slowly crept through the hair on the back of my neck stood up. I saw a light and suddenly an old lady appeared and said "would you like a cup of tea?"

THE END

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Eventually when I started walking towards the gloomy forest. It was damp were ever you stood it was just mud or a puddle when I saw a haunted house then I saw a bridge it was slippy and wobbly ther were probably the deepest cliff'sin the world. When I had crossed the bridge there was some cobblestone and when I stood on it ,it went down 2cm when I finally reached the door I opened it slowly. There were a haunted wordrobe there were two haunted dolls in a seller. It was all spooky every were ther were no brightness there were no torches never when I entered the gloomy kitchen there was blood every were and ther were a piglet and two demons and then all of a sudden I dropped down even ferver I dropped into a gloomy seller it was as dark as outer space omg it is so scary here.

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Harmon’s Homework.

Far inside of the middle of the deepest and darkest Forrest I had ever seen in my life, large trees did not move as the leaves fell onto the ground because of the cold autumn howling wind. As I stood before a small and narrow looking wooden bridge above a bottomless pit, I knew that if I fell inside I would never land, I would only fall forever into darkness. I carefully walked across the bridge while it swayed from left to right because of the wind blowing hard and whistling into the pit below. While I stepped onto the stone path I felt nervous as I walked closer and closer to the large and mysterious tree, with a door in the middle, I was afraid as the door slowly creaked open with the horrible sound of rusty metal, scraping against rusty metal which led into a big and dark room inside of the centuries old hollow tree. When the door creaked open and banged on the inside of the tree, it made a loud sound which echoed through the forest so I ran from the forest as fast as my legs could carry me, because I was so scared of what was inside of the large tree, was it a Witch or an Evil Monster?

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In the dark depths of the old jungle , lies the mysterious wooden door. The cobble walked to the door. You could here the river billow the old wooden rusty bridge that had been there for sentries. Under the huge tree stood the wooden door. You could smell the rotten bark from the wood. What would lie behind the door... Voices creptd through the gaps in the mysterious old wooden door. The vines dropped the hole way down the massive tree. The tree was a rely  dark brown. when you went through tigers were evrewhere you would look. Be careful in there. When you leave you just end up on top of the tallets tree in the largest jungel.

The end!

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When I returned from shool I saw a huge old tree. In this tree were wooden door that were not open. After a while the door opened and in the depths of dark forest stainless little boy. In was very dark, everywhere became huge tree I could be heard strange noises. The boy took me to his home and had fun in there.

The end.

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Very exciting start, well done. Now have a look at your spelling. Read it, to check it makes sense and put a space after a comma or a full stop.

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Great work Darcie, you've included lots of adjectives. Now look at adding some punctuation. Capital letters, full stops and commas.

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i was passing by the deep dark forest and in a blink of a aye i so a littul cottage with pebbuls worcking to words the door slim around  the cracked of the door

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Dorian HOMEWORK                                in a deep pary of a forest,a brige lay and its was very old next the brige was a dark old tree its was roten it  vines all over it.I did not dear to go near it.😮

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Dorian HOMEWORK                                in a deep pary of a forest,a brige lay and its was very old next the brige was a dark old tree its was roten it  vines all over it.I did not dear to go near it.😮

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Great work, your first sentence is a fronted adverbial on its own, change the full stop at the end of it to a comma and add a second clause. You could use your second sentence as your second clause. For example, "Creeping carefully across the wobbly, wooden bridge, you will see a stoney, pebbled path leading up to a gigantic, twisted, winding tree."

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Exciting start, good use of an ellipsis. Try and add one more sentence to describe the scene.

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Creeping carefully across the wobbly, wooden bridge. There you will see a stoney, pebbled path leading upto a gigantic twisted, winding tree. You can smell, touch and feel the soft green grass and listen to the rustling of the leaves.

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When I saw the old, rotten tree I  felt excited but apprehensive, and I forced myself to go in....

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In the deep forest I looked at the tree

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Good start. Think about your punctuation, capital letters and commas are essential.

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Let's try and keep this padlet for homework. I will set up another one for chat (about homework) another time.

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In the deepest  darkest part of the forest, lily jumped over the bridge ,and walked over the grey dusty path , looked at the mossy door
and also yes miss.

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Very good start Merlan, try and break your first sentence down into smaller sentences. Use full stops instead of commas. Ok, don't worry. We'll look at it on Monday, you've done really well.

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Great work Imogen. Put a space after each comma and after every full stop. There is one comma after a fronted adverbial you have missed, try and find it now.  Good, I can see you are adding your spaces, put them after the commas only, not after the word. Perfect. Well done, now try to find the missing comma after the fronted adverbial. It's towards the end. Yay! Well done. You're welcome. See you on Monday. Good girl.

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Very good Harvey, please add some commas to your sentence. They should go between adjectives.

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In a dark, dark forest where animals like spiders live, there is an enormous mossy tree with a tiny old door stood up waiting for somebody to call it's name. Following along a rickety bridge are 11 mini stones lying down with each other. I could hear owls hooting, I could feel damp wood, I could see green moss  everywhere, I could smell the old tree rotting away and finally I could taste disgusting leaves in my mouth. As fast as lightning, I ran back to my gorgeous home. I was a cheater that day. I never went back to the muddy, mossy,  mischievous forest again.
Hope you liked it.
Thank you.See you on Monday.
I'm doing my maths now.I have all ready done the first 7.

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In the deep dark forest a door lay there and mayed a creepy noise like [cccc] and like the wind and it shook very very hard then nearly fell open.

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In a deep forest, there was a big lovely tree stump, in front of it there was an bridge and some shining grey foot-steps, the tree looked really old, it must of be older than the world, then suddenly an big shiny door popped out, it was really butifull I stepped in it inside the floor was shining the walls where bright and colorful I went right to the end of the TRAP!!!!! It was awful there was skeleton bones in the corner, when I was trying to run out an big creepy wall fell down from the sky, I was really scared but I survived
The End
I hope you like my story Mrs Marciniak see you on Monday 😇

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Great start, think about were/was and adding some commas.

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There were two girls that went in a   deep, dark forest they found scary doors they went inside. The doors closed, they screemed,  there was spiders on the floor. The was skeletons on the floor. So they went to get out but they forgot that the doors was closed and they was stuck. They screemed so loudly that some people hear them, they came in the forest and kicked out the door and rescue the girls. And they lived happier ever after.
The End
I hope you like my story Mrs Marciniak see you on Monday

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Great start, you are missing one comma in your first sentence. Try and add it now.

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In the dark, damp forest was a spooky, brown, wooden, weathered hut hidden amongst the trees and bushes in the forest.

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Great work Joshua. Your first two sentences are excellent. Have another look at your last sentence, how could you improve it?

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Down in the rotten woods, a bridge sat over the sleepy pit. Next to the bridge, laid an eaten tree with an stinky door. The tree was a costume so what the tree actually was is an haunted house, ready to say the spooky BOO!!! The End.  Liked it? 😉 (Improved)

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In the deepest, darkest part of the forest, an old, wooden door stood unopened. The cobbles walked their way down to the long, winding path and the trees hummed like a bird in the wind.