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I asked Coleman to give me feedback during the planning stages and after the products were complete.

WEBSITE:
Mock up-
Positive: Looks well thought out and having the album cover as the first thing you see is a good idea for marketing.
Negative: Remember to put in the social media in your website, make sure the colour scheme is the same in both products.
Final product-
Works well and very simple to use. Colour scheme works well and the inclusion of the links to social media at the top of the page is good.

ADVERT:
Mock up-
Postive: The order of information on the page is set out well and the size of text works well across the advert.
Negative: Make sure the image is proportional (make it smaller) and remember to include links to where to buy.
Final product-
The colour scheme creates synergy across all products including the music video and using the drop shadow makes the text and image stand out. The image is also a good size now.

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From the pitch feedback we reevaluated some of our choices in regards to planning. For example we chose to not include subtitles as we thought it may be confusing, as the original idea was to have them in french to relate to our artist's french background. There was also worries about our video becoming confusing due to our flashback ideas, so we also decided it would be wise not to include them. We also decided to film the chorus in the studio in order to give the video a good structure.
From the rough cut feedback we decided to sort out the order we were placing our clips due to the confusion with the mixing of day and night clips. We decided to make a plan (shown below) to decide which clips were to be used in what parts of the song. As we already decided to have the chorus shot in the studio, we planned the rest around that in an order that hopefully flows well.

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Similarities:
-Both feedbacks said that parts of the video were confusing

Differences:
-On the rough cut feedback the criticism was mainly editing orientated
-The pitch feedback was criticising some aspects of the planning

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As shown below the feedback for our first rough cut the main points made to us was that there was no fast or slow motion, and there was still some confusion on what we were trying to achieve at the start of the video with lots of different shots of day and night. From this we planned to rearrange the video so that it flowed nicely from day into night and add features of fast and slow motion.

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As shown here in this mind map made by Ren some of our main negative points from the feedback were the main idea of the video being confusing, the use of a party scene and the use of subtitles. From this we planned to take out the subtitles and the party scene as we realised it would bring anything to the end product.