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Monday criticality  reflection (critical thinking)

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Monday criticality  reflection (critical thinking)

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I have learnt that i have to ask questions while i read any academic article or material , the fact that is it academic piece of work does not mean i can not ask if the material is appropriate for my work
This skill will be applied to my home course work and to my Ass 2 and any other assignment in thee future.

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What to improve on next time
I will improve more on the below  feed back by showing this in my assignment 2. for e.g i will use more academic words instead of typing long sentences and i will show more engagement with the academic librarian for my assignment 2.
Action i went to the library to get books and engaged with the librarian for help for my home course and for my assignment 2 it was really helpful because my ass 2 seems better than my ass 1.
I went into the drop in session today
(13/12/2017) to speak with Michelle my tutor about my ass 2 and about my home course assignment this was very helpful because i made correction to some major error in my ass 2 draft and my home course assignments as well. especially we worked together on citations and referencing.

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Week 6 : waking up every night and  Finding relevant sources
Week 7 Reading my sources. and doing my matrix along.
Week 8 filling my reading matrix and typing up my work
Week 9 Typing my work and showing it to my tutor for more clarification and to know if i am on the right track, synthesising my  sources.
Week 10 Reading my work over again and make personal correction and submit my first draft
Week 11 Friday 15th of December submission: submit my work

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Most straight forward: The most straight forward was  when i changed my topic  and how i have changed the  way i structure my question on the search engine.
How well have i achieved learning outcome: i have supported my work with evidence, i have linked my work with my home degree,i have shown the understand of text that i read, i have  used more academic vocabulary in my work,  I have followed the Harvard referencing format, my work is more formal, i have included citations in my work,
Where i could have improved my achievement: i could have studied more hours if i didn't have children
why did i not improve at the time: (work-life balance)because of my family and personal issues.
greatest challenge:My greatest challenge was time management. it was hard  creating a time to get my work done because i have 3 kids and i have other  assignment  and presentation form my home degree
why was it a challenge: it was  a challenge because i had the fear of not completing my assignment in time  and this will make me fail.
to what extent do i feel i have met this challenge : i have  decided to wake up every night while my kids are asleep to get my work done and this is helpful. and i went in to have a drop in session with my tutor to correct my potential error.

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Gathering source: How - i gathered my source by using google scholar search engine, then i located  an article, this article took me to Taylor and Francis online, i got  more information that linked  to my work
structure PEEL ?(how helps ) the peel structure was a great help because it gave me an insight on how to structure my work.Also the PEEL structure made my work more easier in general.I also went to the library to collect some relevant books and i engaged with the academic librarian who directed me to where my home course shelf is. this gave me an headway and a positive attitude towards my work because i used the books i got from the library for my ass.

Any changes (why): I changed my topic because i was not  assessing much information on my previous  topic.
I have also changed my topic because if i continue searching  on my previous topic time might be against me due to lack of  enough evidence to back up  my work.
Why
Also i was struggling to link my sources together and to my home degree  which might affect my
learning outcomes  grades .
what will i do next time  : If i have written my work in easy i think my outcome might be different from what it is  right now.
next time i will study more hours than i have done right now, due to having children i do not have enough hours to study. but i plan to study more hours next time  so that my grades can improve and it can have better outcomes on my assignment generally.

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So far i have learnt about citation, using evidence to back up my work and this as made my work easier because i have applied this to my Ass.
(Referencing). Also Michelle explained to me that while reading i have to be able to analyse, criticise,evaluate, and describe what i have read before i put it into writing-I have applied to my reading/writing while i read for my assignment and while i type my work i think about what i read and read out loud what i have typed.
Also i have gained more learning on academic writing style, academic vocabulary, paraphrasing my reading, how to use word thesaurus, i now know that i have to reflect on my actions why i read or while i carry out an assignment - I use word thesaurus while i type my wok and i paraphrase while i read a source,
Michelle explained to me on how to structure a report because i have decided to write my work in a report format because this is going to help me with my home degree work.
Reporting verb, adjective. noun is another learning experience i have gained. Michelle explained the benefit of reading matrix and i have used it to build up my points for my work( i found it helpful) .

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What i did not know before and what I  understand now  : Before i did not have an idea of Harvard referencing, Also i do not know about google scholar, i was struggling with locating sources for my work but now i know all of this. i did not know about report and paraphrasing before, i had just little clue on citation and academic vocabulary but i do  have an understanding of this now because it reflect in my ASS 2 compared to my assignment 1.
How can i use what i have learn in a different context: I apply what i know now to my home degree and i plan to apply to all aspect during my academic journey.
Deeper reflection is on the group chat .
With this piece of work, my critical thinking, analytical, reading, writing  skill has been improved, i have also learnt how to paraphrase which i am applying to my present work.
Difficult part and why:Locating a relevant source is the most difficult part of this work and i think this is because of my previous topic and the way i structure my questions on the search engine. This is why i have changed my topic and i structured my question differently which helps a lot

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Assessment criteria

location of my information
all stages of the process are explained and reflected on on how information was use (  what, why , how , what will i do next time )

how well are my linking my home degree topics  to 21st century university this will show in my thousand word.

outstanding evidence clear point, linking all points to my home degree

references and citations
every time i make a point i have to back my point up with evidence or citation
Have i use academic writing style, avoiding i, its more formal, sentence structure , logical points.more academic vocabulary.