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Be more confident, review the material more and make the presentation more

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Try to keep a steady pace within your presentation and do not have those awkward pauses in between.

You should speak louder and out  to the audience rather than towards your iPad .

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-speak more loudly.
- good points
- go more in depth with

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- Dont cross your legs while you’re presenting, stand straight and confidently
- know what’s on your slides

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- Be a little bit more confident.
- When making the slide, indluce bullets or small sentences of key points to make it more inviting to read.
- Perhaps include pictures and videos within the PowerPoint

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- You know what you're talking about just get loose and have fun presenting.

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Be more fluid while speaking

Make your slides bullet points, not paragraphs

Keep talking

Interact with us, do not bore your audience

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- You seem tense and real nervous nelly
- more eye contact
- less pauses
- you knew what you were talking about, you just need to cool it now

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It feels like you're not confident in you presentation next time have more confidence even if you feel it's bad.

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- Just talk a little louder
- Slides are a bit bland, maybe next time you could add more pictures
- Try to be a little more confident
- Overall you had a good presentation

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-stand more confidently
-speak louder
-have more pictures next time

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- Speak up a little
- elaborate on each slide a little more
- Be a little more prepared with your information
- overall good presentation

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- Try not to pause as much while talking.
- Speak up a little more and be more confident
- Slides could have used more pictures to engage the audience
- Presentation was a little short

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Speak more confidently and louder so everyone can hear you. Make sure to know your information. You sounded a little confused about what you were talking about. Why do you feel prisoners should get the medication? You never explained that. Do not pause as much and flow more into your slides. I would have liked to have known more information!

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I wish there was a bit more information in the presentation.

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You seemed very nervous, which is understandable. Next time try to prepare your presentation more( I know you were put on the spot). But overall, very nice PowerPoint and informatiom

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Honestly you did great you knew what you were talking about so be more confident

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- You seem nervous!! Shake it off girly, you cute!
- Since their isn’t alot  on your slides, you need to give us more info while presenting
- Maybe choose a topic next time which you care more about?

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Try to keep eye contact and make your PowerPoint more detailed and have picture

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- I'm not gonna be rude like most of the people here because I understand that you're nervous.
- Maybe practice a little more next time and you'll feel more confident next time!

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Ronshay makes decent points within her presentation. Though, her PowerPoint should be more organized and be more appealing to her audience. Maybe to supplement that, adding pictures or videos would be a nice option. Also, if she projected her voice more and made eye contact, her presentation would have been a little better.

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Try elaborating on the answers to the beginning questions.
Try enlarging the text of your PowerPoint if possible to make it easier to read.
Nice eye contact!
If you can, try not to pace back and forth so much during your presentation. Also try adding more media to your PowerPoint.

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- face the audience more
- elaborate more with your points like why you advocate that the transsexual prisoners should have access to their medication