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Share why this is an example of strong writing.

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This essay had a very strong hook and good grammar.

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strong claim and clear reasons

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has good grammar

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The essay uses multiple pieces of evidence and keeps me interested

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It was presented clearly, and the claims were backed up with evidence.

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This essay gave three very specific examples of how characters in the toll have shown perseverance and went really in-depth.

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tells us a little about the book and whats happening

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The hook made you want to keep reading and the spacing and grammar was 10/10.

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This essay keeps me really hooked and has a lot of good reasoning behind it.

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I love how essay 2 gives us specific examples and quotes and clarifies what is going on.

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It isn't very clear and doesn't have the best grammar.

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This essay had a lot of evidence and good reasoning

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The essay includes a clear claim, accurate grammar, and good citations

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starts with the writer's point of view, then gives us a summary

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It used many pieces of evidence and quoted many lines from the real happenings

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The introduction is very strong and the text is very clear

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it was written clearly and the everything had evidence behind it

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The whole beginning is kinda spotty. It sounds like the same thing over and over.

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Very clear details and gives quotes and the page number of each quote.

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It doesn't have any context.

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Very good hook by asking questions and they did a good job on quoting lines from the book

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Everything about this was great.

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not detailed

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This showed many things that can happen in real life and put it into the essence of a book which made it very hooking to read and also had good evidence.

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It gives us a summary, not the writer's point of view.

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bad grammar and hard to follow what they are trying to say.

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I really like how this person introduces the essay and doesn't use "I" in the writing.

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Good quotation citing and decent grammar

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this essay uses direct quotes. And has a good hook.

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A lot of details and evidence

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It quotes the book and you understand what is happening.

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It is extended so that it could lose some reader's interest.

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I enjoyed how they introduced the person and did not use many filler words.

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shows the writer's view of the book and gives us some context and summarizes the book

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Whats the meaning behind it?

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This essay uses a great strategy of asking questions to hook the reader. The essay also has lots of test evidence an quotes.

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Great character analysis

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This essay had a really strong hook and a clear claim with strong evidence.

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This essay had good quotes and the page number of each quote.