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Nothin. It was perfect

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The way he wrote the entire article

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jayden ugly af

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The writer uses advanced words throughout their essay

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The questions that represented their mind as they shows doubt and hesitation to whether to send the email.

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nothing

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It was boring and made the reader lose interest over time

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Even though their ambition to study TTX was for a postdoc and not a high schooler, they weren’t discouraged

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Even though their ambition to study TTX was for a postdoc and not a high schooler, they weren’t discouraged

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the last two sentences were very good

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It felt a little lengthy as we were reading along but I don’t necessarily know what I would change about it.

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the topic was interesting and detailed

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focuses on specific topic

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I like how he showed how passionate he was

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I like how he showed how passionate he was

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When he explains how his excitement for the topic started

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When he explains how his excitement for the topic started

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The research topic that the writer was interested in and how Issac Newton motivated their confidence and desire to learn

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The way the writer uses advanced words and detailed paragraphs

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fake boring

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This is something new, something not many people talk about which gives them a chance to talk more about this and make it very intriguing

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the end was very good

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I like how they started off the essay introducing Isaac, his newt and himself and listing off the traits that he finds they have in common

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the dedication the author continued to have

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I liked the hook catching the attention of the reader

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I like the California newt detail

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The end

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Their interest in learning about wildlife, mainly newts and what they can do

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Their interest in learning about wildlife, mainly newts and what they can do

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The essay shows the student dedication toward science and it proves/shows to colleges that they are a capable and strong enough to endure the college life.

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The essay shows the student dedication toward science and it proves/shows to colleges that they are a capable and strong enough to endure the college life.

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The stronger parts of this essay were the details

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The stronger parts of this essay were the details

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How he talked about TTX

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A strong point in the essay was how motivated she was to gain experience and get answers from Newton.

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kassidy stop ittttt

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bae wya?

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a bit boring ngl. maybe next time put some spice in it 

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a bit boring ngl. maybe next time put some spice in it 

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The scientific topic