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It’s a good start, but you need to work on the wording. Not only are there spelling errors but basic grammar errors as well. I’d suggest fixing that first considering this is what you’ll be basing your entire presentation on and it needs to be professional. Make it more specific as well. Pick a region and focus on that. Dig deeper into the subject.

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Don’t bother with frilly words to connect your sentence, get straight to the point. “To what extent can polar bears adapt to the change in temperatures?” Also make sure to include a specific region.

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Good specificity. It’s just a mouthful and can get difficult to read at times. Read it aloud to hear what doesn’t sound right and reword it.

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Operationalize agricultural plants. Make them locally applicable. Are you using a range of plants or just one? Define it.

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Define and operationalize stimulants. Make it specific.

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Focus on a specific areas where forest fires appear. Otherwise this question is well phrased and focused.

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The concept is good. Focus on a specific type of cancer though. This will give you a more honed focus. In addition, this question is worded strangely and does not read clearly. Each word must have an impact because it is such a short phrase. Keep that in mind.

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Good with specificity. Make sure you can relate it to real world problems; how do sea urchins affect us locally or in the grand scheme of things?

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Good, but don’t put in parenthesis. Just say outright carbon emissions and COPD rates. You can relate these to the bigger ideas later in the analysis.

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Good question! Locally applicable and a current issue that affects us.

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What type of salmon are you looking at?

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12.) I don't think that you have to state results in your question. 

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12.) I don't think that you have to state results in your question. 

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A bit hard to read

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either "changing climates" or "rising temperatures"

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what is rising the temperature? could be more specific

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8.) Perhaps shorten your question to the essentials. 

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8.) Perhaps shorten your question to the essentials. 

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Is there a particular cancer you will be looking at or a group of them?

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maybe change "what implications" to "what effect does..."

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specify a certain location at which this is occurring. also use scientific name for salmon

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3.) get rid of information between commas?

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3.) get rid of information between commas?

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How is it measurable? What factors would be considered?

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specific area?

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fix the wording of the question so it flows

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Choose one part of sleeping bear dunes because it’s a little vague

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the beginning wording is difficult to follow

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Maybe make this more specific?

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could be rephrased to make it flow example: to what extent does rising...

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How will you be measuring their adaptability?

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which type of plant are you studying

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the wording sounds too informal

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Which agricultural plant?

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what area specifically

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Hard to operationalize, maybe rephrase the question to establish a cause/effect relationship.

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the wording just seems to be a bit hard to follow

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“have an effect” could be written a better way

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2.) Operationalized well, and you could draw a good correlation from this. 

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2.) Operationalized well, and you could draw a good correlation from this. 

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maybe specify the stimulant?

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"resulting in coral bleaching" might not be necessary--more for the background section?

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is association the correct word to use? also which cancer are you looking at specifically

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Just choose soybeans

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what plants?

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specific place?

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specify what cancer, also when you say “associate” it sounds weird to say “or” after (in my opinion)

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what stimulant?

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what do you mean by health?

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I don't think that the "caused by rising CO2 levels" part is really necessary (that might be more background)

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You could maybe condense the question and replace ‘crop growth’ with ‘soy bean growth’.

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Choose soybeans and don’t say such as unless you are still deciding what crop to grow

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“Implications” implies that the IA is going to be more focused on what this will mean going forward. Maybe “What are the effects..” might be better as it establishes a cause/effect relationship?

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interesting topic but what would be the definition of success

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where?

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Grammar check

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Specific region?

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clarify what or where these rising ph levels are that you are referring to

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Please provide constructive feedback to your peers questions.

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Please provide constructive feedback to your peers questions.