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Star 1: I liked the format of how you answered the question and wrote the text. It was easy to look and and great for an informative article.

Wish 1: The definition you chose to use for secure was not the same way that you used it in the article you should try and find the other definition that fit the way that the word was used. (A word could have two meanings)

Wish 2: I think you could’ve done a better job with paraphrasing and the article seemed very copy and paste like and very robotic. Overall it was fine though.

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Your article was very interesting. Before I read it I didn’t really know anything about march madness but now I know a lot about it.

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For your article, I really like the topic you have chosen and I think its a really unique article especially since its about college basketball. One wish I have is that I didn’t see much defining details. But overall, a really great article!

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Star: I like how well structured and neat your Canva was. It was nice to look at and read. You had good data and since i don’t know much about basketball in general, this was a big help!
Wish: I wish some of your headings weren’t still questions.

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Star 1 -I like how persuasive your slide is, the amount of facts and why the things are better than other projects is good.
Star 2 - I like how you explained your projects use and details, if you didn’t do this, how would I have known that it charges the iPad too.
Wish- Seems really expensive for basically just a charger, because we have a pencil holder already on our IPads and a charger doesn’t need to cost $40.

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I think the idea you hade was great. Being able to store school materials and charge your ipad all in one device, and you can also magnet it to the back of your ipad. Who wouldn’t want that. The only thing you could have done better is your persuasive strategies. Many of your slides were unorganized and lacked many important information. I did like your you clearly explained how your product was better and countered your competition.

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One thing I like about your slideshow is how you clearly explain why your product is better than competitors. I also like how you explain every detail of the pencil pad so I clearly understand exactly what your product is. One wish I have is for you to maybe put the investment offer at the end instead of the beginning. If I was a shark watching that presentation, that offer would mean nothing when I first see it, since I don’t know what the product is yet.

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One thing I really liked about your product is that you provide a logical reason why people should buy your product and why your product is better than your competitors. You also provided facts from the internet to further convince the viewer to buy the product. One thing I think you could have done better is to make the slides more eye catching. The slides seemed a little boring.

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I like your piece because it had a lot of details and was very original. It had everything, except for a slogan. I like the background colors it makes the blue pop out really good.

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I liked your google site especially the essays and buy my products but one thing is the google site in some parts has a lot of space and theres nothing there

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Hi JT! I think your essay is well structured, which makes it even more persuading. Overall, great job!

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Star 1 - I like that your topic is original.
Star 2 - I like that you misspelled your title.
Wish - You capitalized a lot of the words that didn’t need to be capitalized.

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I like how you wrote about the Framer’s market. But you wrote the title wrong.