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Reasons why money is important:
- We can buy things we want without worrying there is no money left to buy food and clothes
- Having money means having power. More money we have, more venerations peaple give us
- This may sounds bad, but in fact, the majority of people having money use money to do things like bribing, promoting or buying grades for their children,...
- But on the contrary, a lot of people who own a big amount of money use it to do charity, to help those who are in difficult circumstances,...

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Money - to some people - is considerd one of the most important elements to the happiness of their lives. From my point of view, I do agree that money brings joy to everyone; however, beside that, a good health is probably necessary and happy to us, too.

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- Satisfying all human needs: water bills, electronic bills, food, drinks, clothes, Internet, .....
+   a special kind of life-enhancing commodity, a tool that allows you to have a better life.
+ Money helps to stabilize finances, not under economic pressure.
+ Money also plays a major role in education and health.

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Nowadays some individuals think that money's contribution to one's happiness is one of the most fundamental elements. In my opinion, I agree. Nevertheless, I believe that social life is as important.

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    There are several people who think that one of the most significant factors that make a person happy is money. In my opinion, I partly agree with it and dicussed below are some reasons in my favor of my perspectives.

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    There are several people who think that one of the most significant factors that make a person happy is money. In my opinion, I partly agree with it and dicussed below are some reasons in my favor of my perspectives.

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Money is believed to be an important part of a person's well-being. I agree with this, however I think people's health and social life also contribute to their happiness.

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Money is considered to be one of the most necessary elements with the joy of people. In my view, I agree with this statement, nevertheless, health also plays a crucial role in our happiness.

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Some people consider that money is a motive of making person's happiness. In my opinion, I agree that people can find joyful through spending money. However, people can find happiness by making more friends and spend time with your family.

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Money is believed to play a significant role in a person’s happiness.In my opinion, I agree that money is the key to happiness,however,I also think relationship is other important element.

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Money is believed to be the best way to make a person be happy. In my view, I partly agree that money is the key to happiness of a person but I think that health is also essential factor in life.

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In the present, some individuals assume that money is necessary for their happiness. "In"->from my point of view, money is one of the factors leading to a joyful and peaceful life. However, I also consider being yourself is important.

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Money is believed to be one of the most significant elements in pursuing happiness nowadays. Personally, I think wealth doesn’t always come with satisfaction and happiness, true joy comes from your own mind and the feeling of self-satisfied.

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there are persons that have money considered as the premier of factors in one's happiness. In my opinion, I partly disagree since money does give the satisfaction and happiness to a certain amount of people

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Nowadays, money is believed to be one of the substrata that create the happiness of a person. I partly agree with the statement because I think there are many factors that influence the health of people's spiritual life.

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Nowadays, some people are of the opinion that money brings happiness whereas others think that any person irrespective of the financial status can be happy. In my view, I entirely agree with the former argument, and some major points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays, someone thinks that finance is an important key which lead to happiness. In my opinion, I am fully agreeing with it. In the other hand, I also think our social relationship take a huge role too.

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There are some opinions that money is one of the most significant elements in human joyfulness. In my view, I partly agree with them because happiness does not only come from money and material things, but it also comes from spiritual values in one's life.

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A person can barely experience happiness if they miss one of the key factors which is money. In my opinion, money now and in the future always plays an important role in our lives. Nevertheless, passion also makes a large contribution to our happiness.

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In the current century, according to many people, wealth is the sole key to enjoy the life. In my view, I agree that money play an important role for human's happiness. Nevertheless, I also think that social relationship is significant too.

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It's hard to discuss about one's happiness because it depends so much on their opinion. In my view, I quiet agree with the point ''some people ... happiness''. Especially in modern life, money plays an important role in one's life. However, health and family are also deciding factors.

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Nowadays, money can be considered as one of the factors that play the most important role in creating human happiness. In my opinion, money can be significant, but it cannot give us everything.

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To begin with, the reason why money is so important is that it provides options for you to live a better life that you choose and puts you in control. Having money and being comfortable with finances also gives you freedom and choices to decide how you want to live and support the things you care most about in your life.  When you have money, you can control what you want or don’t want to do. You can generally afford a fancier lifestyle, bigger homes, better vacations or flashier cars…In additon, if you want to  have a different career, want to move to a different country,  travel somewhere new for vacation, financial problem would probably not your concern. Therefore, it cannot be denied that money can bring us happiness and peace of mind.

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However, enjoying the little things in life can be another important factor for happiness. Obviously, this can make people feel comfortable. Some people think that life is about achieving great things like having a successful job or a big house, but life is also about small pleasures like having a good dinner or a nice walk in the countryside. In this way, people gain the comfort for a happy life. More meaningfully, enjoying the little things helps people become more patient and willing to put more effort in everything they do. They would consider small steps as the vital practice for great success. Therefore,  enjoying the little things is also an important contributing factor to  happiness.

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There is a belief that money is the main element to built up one's happiness. In my opinion, I partly agree because money just gives people a life without worrying about finances, not directly the happiness.

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Money is thought to be one of the most important factors in people's happiness. In my opinion, the statement is correct. However, social relationships also play a significant role in our happiness.

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It is believed by some people that wealth is one of the most substantial element to the delightfulness of a person. In my view, fortunes and richness do offers the sense of contentment, however, I also think a good mental and physical health is the key to unlock further success.

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Many people think that money is the key to happiness. However, there are still a group of people think that joy has nothing to do with financial status. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement because good health and relationship are also important

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- Money is an important element in a person’ happiness because:
+ Having money, you can live a really comfortable life without thinking about finance problems.
+ People who are wealthy often enjoy their life more than who don’t because they can freely buy or do their favorite thing( for eg going on holiday, taking up luxury hobbies,..)
+ Sometimes money can also effect your health. If you don’t have money, you will always think about it, then you will worry, sleepless, and get angry with your friends and family for no reason.

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Money is considered by many to be one of the most crucial elements to one's happiness. In my opinion, I agree that money does play a huge role in deciding whether a person is happy or not. However, having good health, both physically and mentally, is also really important in my view.

Money is the key to happiness. First of all, only with money can you afford fun and exciting experiences, such as luxurious vacations along the beach or exhilarating trips to the wild. A person will most likely not be happy if he or she has to worry about getting enough money to pay bills all the time. Secondly, money can lead to most other factors which make a person happy. For example, with money, you can afford better healthcare services, therefore leading to good health, or the time to actually go socialize and have fun instead of trying to pay for basic needs.

Besides money, I believe that physical and mental health is also really important regarding one’s happiness. It is obvious that if one suffer from mental disorders like depression or anxiety, he or she will most likely not be happy at all. Also, if a person has serious diseases that are really hard to cure, not to mention life-threatening, uncurable diseases, happiness will definitely not be the first thing that comes to his or her mind, as curing the desease or prolonging life will be instead.

In conclusion, I believe that money and health is up there as the most important factors to happiness. However, lacking any single one of them, as well as other elements contributing to one’s happiness can be detrimental, so balancing among them is really the key to happiness.

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Money, according to some people, is one of the most essential variables in a person's happiness . In my view, this statement is not entirely accurate. I will explain why a person needs a certain amount of money to live comfortably, but why money and happiness are unrelated.

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- Money helps you cope with your daily needs.
-  If you can afford whatever you wish for, you will be satisfied.

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There are a considerable amount of people who view money as the greatest contribution to one's happiness. In my opinion, I agree that money play a key role in forming a pleasure life. However, money can only sastify us to a certain point.

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Nowadays, money became an integral part of everyone's life. Some people think that money is everything and they can be happy if they are rich. In my opinion, I partly agree that money is the key to happiness of a person. Howerver, I also believe that happiness does not only come from material things but also from the surrounding life.

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Money:
- Supply fundamental demands of people
- Satisfy people's desires, ambitions and hobbies

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Money satisfies our material needs.
It creates the opportunity for you to experience new aspects of life.

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- supply basic needs
- more abilities to do what you like and want eg: bobbies

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- Having a happy family where members love each other and care for them.
- We always have friends that we feel happy and relaxed when spending time together.
- It is usually rare to find a happy person who does not have a pleasant family or good friends.

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Statement: Financially adequate are crucial to your joyfulness.
Supporting ideas:
- Your words would be trustworthy and earn more respects
- Money makes you feel centered and higher your esteem

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- You can use money to solve your problem and be satisfied every things you want
-> ex: health service
- You have no pressure
-> do not need to worry that:" What should i eat today to economize"

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- able to do what you want creates motivations and hopes
=>lead to happiness

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Money is important because:
- helps you afford the most basic necessities: food, shelter, clothing
- pay for services you needed: education, healthcare,...
- reduce financial stress

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Money:  +afford to buy lots of things-> give us material satisfaction

+ do not have to worry about basic needs in lives

+ live comfortably  -> less stress

+ somehow lives can be boring because we don’t have passion and love with our jobs

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- Money is the common standard of a successful and happy life.
- Money provides basic needs and entertainment.
- With money, there is no need to worry about poverty and people receive instant fufillment to their desire.
- In short, money means no worry and to most human being, that is their definition of happiness.

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Passion: + may not bring us lots of money

+ make our lives more interesting

+ people can do what they truly want -> feel comfortable and free

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Money:
- pay for essential things: accommodation, foods, education, medical...
-satisfy physical demands: buy favorite thing, travel all over the world...
- give freedom, faith and power to follow the dreams

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- bring stability and happiness to their lives.
- afford whatever you want
- live comfortably

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In today's world, we are all surrounded by materialistic stuff, and we all feel that greed would bring us happiness and fulfillment . In making one's life more joyful .Others, on the other hand, contend that money has no bearing on happiness.

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- Money is required to buy everything: nothing comes for free, from daily meals to fancy mansions.
- It would be tough if you lived without money.

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- It can only gives temporary satisfaction
- money can't buy true friends
- money can't gives you real love, care and happiness

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- It's true that we need a certain amount of money to lead a life and we can't live happily with poverty.
- But it also depends on how you spend the money and how satisfied you are with the money you earn. If you don't use your money properly or if you're always obsessed with making more money, you just can't enjoy your life.
- Also, having a huge amount of money often leads to negative traits like greed, being mean and stingy,... And it often brings numerous trouble to yourself and family.

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Other factors are:
- The endurance and stability of mental and physical health: A good foundation for obstacles in life
- A lifestyle affect the way people think and behave
- Social and familial relationships are a crucial contribution to the life's balance of a person

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-You can easier to be happy if have money but can not sure
-> You need many others factors to have happiness: relationships, health,...

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-Indeed money can bring us lots of happiness:
+Financial problem is always one of the biggest issues humans have to face so when you have a lot of money you will have much less on your plate and feel more relaxed
+Money can almost provide you with anything you want or need
+A great amount of money can give you a peaceful life which you can enjoy without having to worried too much about everything for the rest of your life
-However, happiness isn't always about money, one's social life contributes a lot, too
+There are some people in the world who never have to worry about being broke, but they still feel empty and they feel like their lives are meaningless since they are alone.
+Many people did whatever it took to have money because they were so power-hungry and when they have achieved their goals, they still don't find happiness. In order to have a lot of money, you have to sacrifice a great number of things. Some things are not worth sacrisfying for money, like friendship and family
+Sometimes you can be really rich but in exchange, you lose real relationships, you only have friends who only stay for money and you will be all alone by yourself. No one is happy being alone, people always seek for company

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- Health: prevention is better than cure, healthy body leads to healthy mind, keep a balanced lifestyle because money can't cure you once you are terminally ill.
- Social life: family and friends can give you support in hard times friendly co-workers boost work efficiency.

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Money plays an important factor in people’s happiness for many reasons.

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+ Money is the material which is used to exchange necessary things for our life.

+ With money we can live a life without worrying about expenses.

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On the other hand, not only money is important, but also health is a needy element for a happy life.

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+ To earn money, a good health is indispensable factor.

+ It’s possible to live without money, but living without good health is impossible

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- lose family relations
- have health problems

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- have someone who will encourage you and stay by your side
- family and friends play an important part

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Money is important because
- You can pay for your essential life. You don't have to worry about financial.
-You have ability to do what you want and you can decide your own life.
Health and happy family are important
-Health is important because only when you have good health, you can enjoy life and do everything you like by yourself.
-Happy family help you feel the love. Family is the best mental support because a person lives in happy family is much more confident than others.

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In these day, money is generally considered as one of the most essential factors leading to one's happiness. In my opinion, I totally agree with this belief, however, there are other factors, especially the affection between people, need to be taken into account.
Money evidently has huge impact on our well-being. First, People's material life heavily depends on the amount of money they own. Without money, even the necessities such as food, water,... could hardly be afforded. Furthermore, human's demands don't only center round basic needs, people nowadays desire objects that satisfy them, for instances, a high end camera or a luxury car. Second, money is extremely significant for health catering, which contributes to one's happiness. As we can see, the amount of money required to treat deadly diseases is generally numerous, so wealth is needed to pay the bill. In addition, wealthier people can afford healthier (organic) food and better products which is the key to avoiding health problems.
If money provides us with material, then a healthy relationship is there to fulfill the remain. First of all, bonding with others is undeniably benefited to our mental health. We receive love, mutual trust and respect from others and learn to treat people nicely as well. This enriches our mental life, erases the loneliness. Moreover, as long as we maintain a relationship, we maintain interaction with the society. Being in a society gives people a sense of belonging. And by belonging to a community, one might get both mental and physical support from the their friends, relatives, partners,... The affection between people is the source of real happiness.
In conclusion, money plays an important part in a joyjous life. However, to be happy both physically and mentally, bonding with people can not be overlooked.

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health
-possible to do anything even though we don't have money
-complete work with the best result

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Statement: Mental and physical health are necessary
Supporting ideas:
- Longevity, I mean, the longer you stay the more you can possess and experience
- A healthy, open-minded beings is the one that can see and attain the true meaning of happiness

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MONEY
-Material life:
+necessities
+objects for satisfaction
-Health cater
+Paying hospital bill
+afford healthier/organic food, better products

RELATIONSHIP
-Mental health
+ receiving love, respect
+ (also) learning to love others
-Maintain interaction with society
+sense of belonging
+getting supports from others

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Relationship
+ You will feel happy when you are on good term with people around you because you can feel their love and care.
+ If you have good relationship with friends and family, you can easily get out of stress or tiredness by talking with them. When you have conversation like that, I believe you will be happy and see everything positively

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- In my opinion, happiness has no relation to how much you possess, happiness is not something great or luxury.
- You can find happiness in your daily life, in the smallest thing in the world.
- But the most important factor is your thoughts, your mind, your enjoyment.
- So appreciate what you're having, your current relationships, your normal life with your family,... try to find joy in every moment of your life.

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Idea 1: Money helps us stable life
Sp idea 1: We don't worry about money when shopping or buying something
Idea 2: We can help improve our quality of life
Sp idea 2: We have money to go to the gym instead of working out at home

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Money is believed to play a significant role in a person’s happiness.In my opinion, I agree that money is the key to happiness,however,I also think relationship is other important element.

Money can make you happy for some reasons.First of all, this may surprised you, but people who have money can avoid several mental illness.People who don’t have to think about money as a daily problem often feel happier with their life,they don’t have to worry about what to wear or eat,..they don’t feel stressed or stay in bad mood,..so their life is really comfortable.Secondly, money can afford fun. Having money means that you can freely buy or do your favourite thing.You can go holiday abroad, buy expensive things,take up  luxury hobbies or sometimes money can also help you follow your dream.

Besides money, happiness also comes from relationship.Firstly, people who are on good term with friends and family often feel happy because they can feel how much their family care about them.Many research has proved that people feel happiest when they are loved by people around. Next, by having good relationship with friends and family, you can easily get out of stress and tiredness. You can spend time talking with them about your daily life, your problems,.. then I believe you will feel happy and find your life meaningful after listening to their advice.

In conclusion, money and relationship are two important factors that make you feel happy in your life.

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-With human's physical and survival needs being sastify, there rise a new pressing mental demand.
-Ex: craving for relationship, excitement, sense of belonging.
-Young people find a connection between happiness and joyful act. Meaning they have to be in rapture constantly. If not, they will experience boredom and loneliness real soon and thats far from happiness.

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Nowadays some individuals think that money's contribution to one's happiness is one of the most fundamental elements. In my opinion, I agree. Nevertheless, I believe that social life is as important.

First, financial problem is always one of the biggest issues humans have to face so when you have a lot of money you will have much less on your plate and feel more relaxed. Second, money can provide you with almost anything you want or need in life. Third, a great amount of money can give you a peaceful life which you can enjoy without having to worried too much about everything for the rest of your life.

However, happiness isn't always about money, one's social life contributes a lot, too. There are some people in the world who never have to worry about being broke, but they still feel empty and they feel like their lives are meaningless since they are alone. Of course in order to have much money, you have to make sacrisfies and sometimes the prices can be heavy like friendship and family. You can still be happy even when your property isn’t that much, as long as you have company and have faith in life.

In conlusion, money really is important when it comes to making a person happy, but it isn’t the only thing that can put a smile on your face, there are still many meaningful elements that can do it other than wealth

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It is believed by some people that wealth is one of the most substantial element to the delightfulness of a person. In my view, fortunes and richness do offers the sense of contentment, however, I also think a good mental and physical health is crucial to achieve happiness.

In my opinion, being financially adequate are crucial to your happiness. People have said “We are the master of our own world”, and with cashes and wealthiness along the side more people are captured within our world, bringing us the sense of being the center of the universe. It elevates our self-esteem, confidence, it satisfies our ego and needs, it makes us feel like kings and queens. Moreover, fortune often bring about fames and approval. Richness guarantee that our words have ears that listen and gives us respect and admiration. The words of a renowned successful man would be ton heavier than an ordinary one.

However, it is not only wealthiness that ensure our happiness but also other criteria such as mental and physical condition. Living healthily allows us to extend our longevity. The longer we live, the more we can experienced and possess during the life time. Furthermore, being healthy helps us cleanse our thought and see things more clearly. It is neccesary because life is just a matter of cognition and feeling, thoroughly estimating an life event may have you a better look on it. It is us that decide how we treat ourselves and others, thus, giving us the true actual happiness.

In conclusion, money may brings us the sense of having everything on our sides, gives us confident and respect but having a healthy soul and body also bring you a happiness that is worth more than the rest.

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There are a considerable number of people who view money as the greatest contribution to one’s happiness. In my opinion, I agree that money plays a key role in forming a pleasant life. However, money can only satisfy us to a certain point.

It is undeniable that money is the common standard of a successful and happy life as it provides people’s basic needs and entertainment. You and I feel good not to suffer from hunger and dehydration. With money, there is no need to be concerned about poverty and people receive instant fulfillment to their desire. In short, money means no worry and to most human beings, that is happiness.

Nevertheless, with human’s physical and survival needs being satisfied, there is a new pressing mental demand arises. For example, those demands are: craving for relationships, excitement, sense of belonging,... People rarely distinguish a happy life to a peaceful life and assume a quiet life will do their best. Woman’s life in a patriarchal social system is an example. Furthermore, young people find a connection between happiness and joyful acts. Meaning they have to be in rapture constantly or else they will experience boredom and loneliness real soon and that's far from happiness. Making money, however, seems to be tedious to our young generation as they dont produce the same amount of joy as hanging out with friends.

In conclusion, money may be important for happiness to occur. However, we all have our own definition of happiness.

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