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The essays were all very descriptive they catch the reader's attention by using mostly emotions. They focused on a specific time in their lives that was important to them

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Article 3 is more personal and emotional

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In article 3 Kenworthy writes his life story including the reality of summiting college admissions. He describes his college essay writing skills and the steps it took to get there , instead of including stating a strategy and not explaining . He also ends on a positive note expressing the lesson he learned .

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Students who have academic achievements and participated in extracurricular activities have a greater chance of getting into college.

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Elevated Language
Imagery

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All 3 were very well written but the first one caught my attention more because of how detailed it is.

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The 1st one is more descriptive about her surroundings and how she felt towards them, the second one is talking about his run and how it made him feel, but it doesn't seem as descriptive as the 1st one.

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The authors take a topic and expand on it in specific details, wether its just something simple or personal

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The authors take a topic and expand on it in specific details, wether its just something simple or personal

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Uses advanced diction
Well Structured
Written descriptively

The experiences he was comparing when he was running from the symphony compared to his heartbeat to the imagery he was using to have the image of his home town and his surroundings as he was running at night
The last dealt with his experiences of having a very unstable relationship with his mom and his experiences that made his story very relateable to those who have dealt with the same experiences

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The first writing turned a simple everyday activity in to insite in an adventure. It has structure but is more detailed  narrative. They tend to focus on how their feeling in the moment. The third essay is my favorite because I can relate in a way

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They are using strong words (diction) and everything flows together they are not all over the place

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Advanced writing/word choice
Very descriptive and specific when explaining
Tells about a deeper meaning

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Each essay is VERY descriptive. Each writer successfully was able to stretch out a simple action and turn it into very specific detail. Also in each essay they told something that they learned from this experience of theirs, and how it effects their life.

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the essays are written as narrative stories with overly detailed descriptions. show don't tell. there is a lot of imagery, so the reader actually feels and sees in their head what the writer is saying.

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In article 2 Altenburg writes his story using direction to illustrate a sense of direction of his home .

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I like how they pick a very basic topic and expand on it

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The essays uses descriptive imagery and high-leveled definitions. Each description provides alot of detail to understand about the story.

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Each of the essays use very descriptive language, like the first paragraphs usually set the scene of the story. The story is written like the writer is talking to the reader.

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The essays connect an event to a larger picture such as how certain traits they possessed were improved by an event.

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The Essay is Well written,very descriptive, it also uses extensive vocabulary. The essays are able to tell a story about an experience in their life.

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Very discriptive of surroundings and feelings. Ex: "arms flailing and chubby legs fluttering"

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Having a good essay could possibly get you accepted into Ivy League schools that have acceptance rates ranging from 13.96% to 4.69%.

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In essay one the student uses an high standard vocabulary as well as the rhetorical device imagery. She helps the reader depict a actual image of the store.