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Setting A is better and within singing range

Setting B consists of too wide range of notes and it will make it hard for the person to sing it in time and tune.

# data[].attributes.body
Setting A is better.

Setting A
It flows.
Wide range of chords used
Climax is at a appropriate place
Dynamics

Setting B:
Too big a leap  from 'stream' to 'sings' --> unsingable
Climax at the wrong place (Too early)
Accents on the wrong places --> sounds bad
'blows' lasts too long (singer cannot breathe)
Improper phrasing --> last note of a phrase should be lengthened

# data[].attributes.body
Setting A is better.

Setting A:
-has a good climax
-appropriate mood and dynamics
-has both steps and leaps

Setting B:
-weird leaps
-too many perfect cadences (use interrupted, imperfect, plagal)
-climax is too early
-notes are too high for alto

# data[].attributes.body
Setting A is better as it is within a singable range. Setting B should avoid leaps and within a singable range.

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Setting A:
Flowing melody and appropriate use of both leaps and steps to create an interesting melody.
Has a variety of chords
Good phrasing that is well balanced
Detailed performance directions

Setting B:
Awkward rise on the second syllable of the word "La-gan"
Only the chords I and V are used throughout the composition
Alto voice cannot reach the highest note in the composition
The word "a" in the second last bar has too much emphasis on it. It is played at forte and us also a high note. It is also on the first beat of the bar which places even more emphasis on it.
Too many leaps make the word setting awkward
The climax is in the second bar of the word setting.

# data[].attributes.body
Setting A
Stepwise motion is nice Leaps are not too frequent, Singable
Has word 'painting' with the word fal-ling

Setting B
Climax is too early on
Pitch is too high
Has "jumps" making it hard to reach notes
not very singable

# data[].attributes.body
Setting A is better. :)

Setting A
- appropriate climax
- appropriate voice
- good dynamics for mood
- good mix of chords
- good mix of cadences
- good phrasing (ends at longer notes)
- good emphasis

Setting B
- inappropriate climax
(too early)
- inappropriate voice
(alto for high D???)
- full of leaps
- loud dynamics for soft and gentle words
- too many chords V and I
- inappropriate emphasis
- weird phrasing (ends on short note and no phrase for rest of composition)
- too many perfect cadences