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I really like your website because I can hear your voice in it! It sucks that some of it got deleted but I'm sure it was fantastic like the rest of your website! ****

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Your descriptions were very short, you could have added more about how the different things influenced you - 2 stars

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Try to make sure that you explain each thing equally. Some things you had maybe 3 sentences, others you had 7. *** -Lizzie

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great work and intresting info, 4 star

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You explained why you made your selections very well and was meaningful. I really enjoyed reading your website. ****

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Your content was great, it was very heartfelt and it really stood out that you must have spent a long time on it ! - 4 stars

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Your overall website was good, but your wording got confusing on some of the pages.**
-Emma

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So descriptive and thoughtful, I could tell you put a lot of effort into your work! I thought you added a significant amount of pictures and information, well done. ****~Jenna

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Some meaningful text. ***

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You explained how much the things you chose mean to you very well! Great job! ***!
-Alexia

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lots of awesome information and lots of detailed

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I loved the way you wrote your website, there were some great memories, I can tell! - 4 stars

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I liked how detailed the texts were, pay attention to the autobiography because you started talking in your perspective and switched halfway through, other than that, great job! ***!
-Alexia

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You had great text and pictures to describe your things and what they mean to you. **** -Lizzie

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John Burtt- Very long and thoughtful paragraphs, great font  and visual.
4 stars

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I thought you were very descriptive and thoughtful about every single one of your medias! I think it exceeds the expectations, and was great! ****
-Emma

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LOTS of details 4 stars

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Your website was very meaningful.

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a lot of details very deep and and heartfelt 4 stars-khushi

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good interesting info, didnt make me sleep 4 stars adam

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Your descriptions were great, they showed how important these things are too you. - 3 stars

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not a lot of content 3 stars -khushi

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Amazing detailed descriptions and explanations for all of your books. 4 stars

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I really liked how you included humour in your website, it made it more interesting! I would add more visuals and colour to the pages because they seemed a bit empty (in my opinion), other than that, great job! *** !
-Alexia

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Try to add explanations of why you chose each media
-Emma

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very heartfelt and interesting 4 stars -khushi

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amazing amount of content... very detailed. 4 stars

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Overall, you explained the reasoning for your choices well and had expressive writing. There were a few parts that were a bit confusing (introduction and conclusion said list was only books, Harry potter isn't a trilogy), but otherwise your website had great content! -Sydney Sh

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I really think that your website exceeds the criteria with it's great text! I really thought that I could hear your voice clearly! I think that you could have added some more color but, that is just my personal preference! Fantastic Job ****

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Next time, explain what the songs mean to you, and why you chose them. I needed more information about that to really understand.
-Mya

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John Burtt- Content is very thought out and goes with the images and background.
4 stars

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lots of detailed information 4 stars

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I loved your website! I think it deserves ****! I loved the writing and visuals, and I think the sarcasm was a good touch ;)
-Alexia

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not good work

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John Burtt- Finish the content and make it more thoughtful.
1 star

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Lots of detailed information on each of your pages 3 stars

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Your text was lots of fun to read and you gave lots of information for why you made those selections. ****

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AMAZING **** great videos, pictures and writing!

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I really liked how you worded everything, and your writing almost had a flow to it, and that made it sound good! ***
-Emma

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very heartfelt and interesting 3 stars -khushi

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John Burtt- Content very thoughtful, visuals flow well.
3.5 stars

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I love the way you wrote your paragraphs, they were very funny and made me laugh! - 4 stars

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John Burtt- Content is very thoughtful.
4 stars

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adam- dont juST ADD pictures without words.. you have no words and it looks like you copy and pasted the song list. sorry 3 stars

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Lots of details and amazing descriptions on why you chose the song- 4 stars

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Add more then a short decription

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Try to explain why you chose those things so that we can know more about you.
-Lizzie

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Adam - it seems that you took alot of time, and put alot of thought into this. Which payed off. 4 stars ****

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Your website was well written and meaningful, I almost cried. It was detailed and shared memories and shared some informative points.

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eh , good layout but wasnt well done

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possibly add more details

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Great job making a great website! Ill give it ***

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You had a variety of different movies and books that were very interesting to read about.
On your website, it was also cool to see the comparison of the old and new theme song of Doctor Who.

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I really think that you put a lot of thought into your pages and into the choice of each book! This is a *** great job!

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I thought your website was well-written, and sounded like you were actually talking to me through the computer, instead of it sounding like a robot wrote it. ***
-Emma

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You had a lot of great information that sounded very heartfelt, I can definitely tell that those things were important to you! - 4 stars