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1_ An old woman bought some cookies from the vending machine.

2_ But the vending machine was stuck not working well and the old woman hit it.

3_ The old woman sat in a bench with a man.

4_ The old woman tought that the boy was eating her cookies.

5_When the train arrived, the woman was very confused because the cookies were was in her bag.

Well done!!!

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1-  A lady bought a package of cookies

2-The old woman sat in a bench whit a young man.

3-One man started eating her cookies.

4- The boy while listening to music ate the cookies.

5- The woman was mad at the boy because she thought he was eating his cookies.

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Snack Attack

1)An old woman wants to buy some cookies from the vending machine
2)The vending machine wasn't working
3)She hits the vending  machine a she gets a packet of cookies
4)She shouts to a young boy because she thinks he is eating her cookies
5)On the train she finds her packet of cookies in her bag

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1- An old woman bought an Snack Attak in the vending machine.

2- She and a boy were in a train station, in a bench.

3- They had the same pack of cookies.

4- The boy was lisening t o music when he was eating his cookies.

5- She was angry because she thought that the boy was eating her cookies.
GOOD SOFI!
CHECK TENSES AND SPELLING.

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hine, the pack of cookies got stuck, so he decided to push it.
3) The young man was listening to music with HIS headphones ON while the old woman was talking to her.
4) The old woman was angry because the boy was not paying attention to her.
5) Then, when the old woman sat on the bus, she realized he had a pack of cookies in his wallet!!
GOOD WORK!
CHECK EXPRESSIONS AND STRUCTURES.
SOFI PETRUZZO
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SNACK ATTACK
1) The  cookies got stuck in the vending machine.
2) The old woman went to the train station. 
3) The old woman sat on a bench next the boy.
4) The boy was listening to music.
5) The old woman ate boy's cookies.

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WELL DONE AGUS!!!
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SIMPLE AND CLEAR!!!. YOU SHOULD USE CONNECTORS.
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Snack Attack
1)The old woman goes to a machine to get some cookies.

2)THE old woman is going to sit on a bench to read???? and there was a boy and she starthed to eat...?
3)the boy saw that the lady was hungry so he broke (SPLIT)the cookie in half and.... gave it to her and she got angry
4)and then the lady got on the bus (TRAIN) and was still angry
5)
Then I'll open the bag and the cookies were there. She had thought that the boy was eating

SANTOS:

CHECK PUNCTUATION, TENSES AND SPELLING.
SOME IDEAS ARE WRONG, YOU SHOULD WATCH THE SHORT.

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1)  And old woman had a snack attack
2) The machine didn`t work  and she was angry.
3)   When she got the cookies she sat down to read while ate a cookie.
4)When she realized there was a boy next to her eating her cookies, she got angry and he kept eating so if she disconnected the headphones to get her attention, she yelled at her not to eat the last one, he gave her half but he got angry and the threw
5)After the train arrived, she got on very angry, the boy greets her and she gets angry then opens her wallet and finds the cookies, she realized and when she thought she remembered that she did not take out her cookies but that the boy ate the cookies and the poet yelled at her.
GOOD GONZA!!!
AVOID LONG SENTENCES, CHECK PUNCTUATION AND TENSES.
SOME SENTENCES ARE NOT CLEAR.

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SNACK ATTACK
1)The old woman hit the vending machine and she get a packet of cookies
2)The old woman sat down on a bench with a boy that apparently steal her cookies
3)The boy saw the woman hungry and he broke (SPLIT) the last cookie in two parts.
4)He gave one part of the cookie to the women but she destroyed (CRUSH) it
and she went to the train that had just arrived
5)Finnaly, the woman realized that the cookies were in her handbag all this time.

GOOD  CRISTIANO!!
CHECK PUNCTUATION AND TENSES.

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1- The old lady bought some cookies from a vending machine but the cookies got stuck.
2- The old lady was very hungry, she had a snack attack.
3- She was very angry because she thought the boy was eating her cookies.
4- The boy try to calm her down by shearing the last cookie with her.

5- The old lady's train arrived, she got on the train and she realized that all that time she was eating the boy's cookies, she felt very bad.

GREAT GUADA!
CHECK SOME EXPRESSIONS AND REWRITE SOME PHRASES.

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Snack Attack

1) An old lady bought a package of cookies from the vending machine.

2) The vending machine wasn’t working  WELL so the woman hit it.

3) The young boy was eating cookies. WHERE?

4) The old lady tought they were her cookies.

5) ........and she found her cookies in her bag.

(REWRITE SENTENCE 5)
WELL DONE LARA!!
CHECK TENSES.

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1) a old woman wanted to buy some cookie but the machine  was  stuck and the old woman  hit the machine and the cookie fell fron the  bending machine

2)when the old woman arrives the station shi site next to a boy

3)she started eating his cookies but the boy take aut package of cookies and eat une cookie

4) the old woman was angry and she  started yelling at him
but  the boy eat all the cookies

5..............

WELL DONE!!! MATEO
USE CAPITAL LETTER AND CHECK CORRECTIONS

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SNACK ATTACK
1- A lady was in a train station when she saw a vending  machine.

2- She saw a snack that she liked inside the machine.

3- She bought it, but did not give him the snack, she got angry, he hit the machine but later he realized that he had given it. She got a snack attack.

4- Then he went to a bank to wait for the train, where there was a boy who had  the same  cookies as him.

5-..........
COMPLETE THE TASK. SOME IDEAS ARE NOT CLEAR. CHECK PRONOUNS.
YOU ARE ON THE RIGHT TRACK!!!
GOOD!

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1) A old woman got a snack atack in the vending machine
2) The old woman decided to bought cookies
3) She hit the bend machine, the cookies fell down
4) The old woman went to the train station
5) Next she was hearing music, she decided open the pack and eat

GOOD NICO!

SOME IDEAS ARE NOT CLEAR. MIND PUNCTUATION AND TENSES.

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1) one woman was going to buy some cookies and the cookies get stuck.
2) she kicked the vending machine
and the cookies fall from the vending machine.
3) she go to the train station and she sit near a boy and he sarted to it aparently her cookies
4)then the boy cut the cookie from the middle and he gave the middle to the woman the woman broke.
5) the cookie and get on board.
then he look in her purse and found her really cookies.
GOOD BENITO!!
SOME IDEAS ARE NOT CLEAR, TRY TO REWRITE THEM. CHECK TENSES, PUNCTUATION AND SPELLING.

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1- A old woman want some snacks.

2- The snack got stuck in the vending machine.

3- The woman went to the station and she sat on a bench that where was a young man.

4-She accidentally ate the cookies from the young man.

5- When she got on the train she realized that  in her wallet he had the snack that she had taken before, and she felt very bad.
SUPER!!
CHECK PUNCTUATION AND TENSES!!!

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1- The  pack of cookies was stuck in the vending machine.
2- The old lady was very angry, so she started hitting the vending machine.
3- The teenager didn´t listen to the old woman, because he was listening to music.
4. The boy shared the coockies whit the woman.
5. When the lady sat on the train and she saw her bag she found her cookies.
WELL DONE BAUTI!!!!
DO THE CORRECTIONS.

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1) The old woman bought a pack of cookies from a vending machine, but the cookies got stuck.

2) Then, the old woman hit the machine and she got the cookies.

3) After , the old woman sat on a bench. She was at the train station, and a young boy sat with her.

4) After that, the boy started to ate the cookies, and the old woman get angry so, the boy broke the cookie in half and give one part t o the woman.

5) Finally the train arrived to the station and the old woman got on the train. But when she loked on her purse were her cookies and she realized that she ate the boy's cookies.
SUPER!!!
CHECK TENSES AND PUNCTUATION!!

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1 The old  lady bought cookies in the vending machine.
2 The vending machine didn´t work so  the old lady arrived at the bus station.
3 She get angry and she sat next to the boy.
4 She saw the boy ate the cookies, so she got so mad.

5 She went to the bus and she realized that the snacks it wasn´t her.  So she got very calm and happy.
WELL DONE SOFI!
DO THE CORRECTIONS( TENSES,STRUCTURES...)

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1 A woman bought a coockies from a vending machine but got stuck and the woman started to hit the machine and finally the cookies falled.
2 Then she went to a bench to wait a train.
On the bench was a boy and the woman start to eat the coockies but the boy started to eat to.
3 She was fourious and WHO? crashed the last cookie.
4 The train arrived and the woman got on the train, she gave she's tiket to a person to cheked.
5 She saw on she's purpose find her cookies.

GOOD FELIPE!
NOW CHECK SPELLING AND TENSES. WRITE SOME IDEAS AGAIN. CHANGE VOCABULARY.

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1- The old lady bought cookies from a veanding machine but the cookis got stuck.

2- She was very angry, she had a snack attack.

3- Then the old lady got more angry  because she thought the boy was eating her cookies.

4-

COMPLETE THIS TASK!

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Snack Attack

1. A lady bought some cookies on the vending machine.

2.The cookies got stuck from the vending machine and the woman got very angry.

3. Then, she started to hit the machine.

4.After that, she went to the train station.

5. The women sat beside a boy with the same cookies, and she forgot that s he didn´t  take out her cookies from h er purse.

SUPER!!!
DO THE CORRECTIONS.

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Snack Attack

1)The old woman hit the vending machine and she get a packet of cookies.
2)The old woman sat down on a bench with a boy.
3)She saw that the boy was apparently stealing her cookies and she tried to get them back
4)The boy saw that there was only one cookie left and when he also saw the angry women he took the cookie and broke it in two
5)Finally, the boy gave the women a piece but she destroyed the piece and went angrily to the train that had just arrived

GOOD WORK!!!
CHECK SOME STRUCTURES, SPELLINGS AND PUNCTUATION.

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1) A lady is in a train station.
She bougth a snack and she put angry, because the snack not out the machine.
2) The snack get out the machine and the girl take them.
3) A boy was next her, the boy takes a cookies of her .
4)She put very angry BECAUSE.......
5) She go to the train , when she was in the train , she looked  INTO her purse and she saw her cookies and she felt bad .
WELL  DONE, SIMON!!!
CHECK TENSES!!!!

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1. A lady got an "Snack Atack" and she conviniently see a bending machine

2. She decided to bought some cookies, but they got stucked

3. She hit the bending machine and the cookies fell down.

4. She went to the train station and she sat on a bench

5. Next to her, there was a teenager that was hearing some music

6. She decide to open her cookies pack and start to eat

7. The boy next to her take a cookie, so she got mad!

8. After the boy eat all the cookies, she went so angry

9. When she got into the train, she saw that her pack of cookies were in her bag all the time, and the other pack of cookies was from the boy

10. After she noticed that, she see the boy outside the train, and she went so sad
WELL DONE FAUSTO!
CHECK PUNCTUATION AND TENSES!!!!

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1) A old woman wanted to take out some cookies from the vending machine.
2) The old woman was angry because the cookies got stuck.
3) She had some problems with a boy in the train station,she tought the boy was eating her cookies.
4) The young boy broke SPLITthe cookie and gave it to her.
5) The old woman realized that the boy had not ate the cookies.
WELL DONE  HELENA!!!!
CHECK SOME TENSES AND USE CONNECTORS.

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1- The old woman was hungry.
2- She wanted some snacks , but her cookies stucked on the vendind machine.
3- She become angry.
4-Next she hit the machine  the cookies felt down.
5- Before her train left s he waited next to a b oy with some cookies too.

GOOD MARIANA!
CHECK SOME STRUCTURES AND WORDS.
MIND PUNCTUATION.

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1) First, the old lady wanted to buy cookies from  a vending machine but they got stuck.

2) The lady was very hungry, she had a snack attack.

3) Then the lady sat in a bench and a boy began to eat his cookies.

4) She got angry so the boy shared to him  the cookie, and the lady destroyed the cookie in pieces.

5) Finally, she got on the train and realized that she ate the boy´s cookies.

GOOD SOFI!!!
CHECK CORRECTIONS!

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(1 The  woman hit the machine several time.
(2 The boy made a cute gesture with the woman.
(3 The woman forgot she had the cookies in her bag.
(4 The woman ate the boy ' s cookies.
(5 The woman got angry  when the boy ate her cookie
CHECK PUNCTUATION AND VOCABULARY.
GOOD WORK!!

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1)The old woman had a snack attack.
2)She went to a vending machine but the cookies got stuck.
3) She got angry so she started to hit them.
4) She went to a train station and she saw a boy eating cookies, she tought that there were her cookies so she started to broke the cookies.
5) Finally she realized that they weren´t her cookies.

GOOD CONRADO!!!
CHECK PUNCTUATION AND TENSES, SOME IDEAS SHOULD BE IMPROVED!!

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1) The old woman had a snack attack so he decide to go to the vending machine.
2) When she went to the vending machine, the pack of cookies got stuck, so he decided to push it.
3) The young man was listening to music with HIS headphones ON while the old woman was talking to her.
4) The old woman was angry because the boy was not paying attention to her.
5) Then, when the old woman sat on the bus, she realized he had a pack of cookies in his wallet!!
GOOD WORK!
CHECK EXPRESSIONS AND STRUCTURES.

SOFI PETRUZZO

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SNACK ATTACK
1) The  cookies got stuck in the vending machine.
2) The old woman went to the train station.
3) The old woman sat on a bench next the boy.
4) The boy was listening to music.
5) The old woman ate boy's cookies.

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SNACK ATTACK🍪

1) An old woman had a snack attack.

2) Then the woman got angry because the cookies got stuck in the machine.

3) Then he went to the train station to eat them.

4) The woman got angry when the boy ate her cookies ...

5) And finally the boy divided  SPLIT his cookie

WELL DONE SOL!!!
CHECK PUNCTUATION!!!

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1) The woman was angry because the cookies got stuck. WHERE?
2)  A young man was eating his     cookies.
3) The woman got angry because she thougth that the cookies the young man was eating were her.
4) The young man was listening to music.
5) The woman sat on the train (SEAT) and she realized that the cookies that she ate were from the young man.

WELL DONE VALENTIN!!!!!
CHECK TENSES AND SPELLINGS.

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SENTENCES:

1) The old woman was trying to buy some cookies from the vending machine.

2) She was hungry and the cookies got stuck.

3) She got angry because she couldn´t eat the package of cookies and began to hit the machine

4) Some minutes after, the cookies fell and she took them.

5) The boy didn´t listen to the old woman that was next to him, because he was with his headphones listened to music.

6) When the woman entred to the train, she saw a package in her bag; she wsa so sad because she ate the boy´s cookies.
WELL DONE!
CHECK SOME EXPRESSIONS AND TENSES!

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1) The package of cookies got stuck in the vending machine.

2) The woman was angry with t hat error of th e machine.

3) One man started eating her cookies.

4) The man shared his cookies with the woman.

5)The old woman was confused when she saw her cookies on her bag.

Tomas Rostagno🥶🤙
GREAT WORK! SIMPLE AND CLEAR!!! CHECK CORRECTION!!

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Snack Attack 🍪
First an old woman wanted to get cokies from a vending machine, but they got stuck so she hit de machine and the cookies fell down.

Then she went to a train station and she sat on a bench next to a boy who had cookies.

She confused and start eating  boy's cookies and the boy had not problem.

The old woman got very angry beacuase she think that the boy was eating her cookies.

Then when she got on the train she was puting the ticket in her handback she saw her cookies.
GOOD MILI!!!!
CHECK SOME IDEAS AND TENSES!
MIND PUNCTUATION!

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1) The old woman was very angry when the package of cookies get stuck.
2) The old woman sat in a bench whit a young man.
3) She thank that the cookies they were his.
4)The young man was listening to music whit headphones.
5)The woman was very angry and she broke the cookie. CRUSH

GOOD LUCIANO!
CHECK TENSES AND VOCABULARY.

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1 The lady wanted to buy some cookies.
2 The boy was not afraid of him.
3 The woman was angry because the boy was not paying attention .......
4 The lady got on the train angry.
5 The lady realized that she had not taken out her cookies and had eaten the boys´

WELL DONE, FELIPE!
COMPLETE SOME IDEAS. MIND PUNCTUATION!!!

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1) The old woman wanted cookies.
2) She paid for the cookies on the vendind machine.
3) Then, she went to the train station.
4) She ate the boy's cookies.
5) She was so angry because she thought that the cookies was yours.

GOOD CATA!
SOME IDEAS SHOULD BE

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SNACK ATTACK 🍪

1-The  old woman was angry because her cookies got stuck on the vending machine.

2-She sat on a bench next to a boy.

3-He was listening to music while the old woman was shouting at him because he ate her cookies.

4-The boy divided his cookie and gave a half to the old woman.

5-She realized that the cookies she ate were from the boy's.
SUPER SOPHIE! !!
(SPLIT THE COOKIE)

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WRITE DOWN FIVE SENTENCES HERE IN PAST TENSE.