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#5-This person explained good traits and had good claims

#3-This person shows great claims and great transitions

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#5- the author had clear writing.

#2- they showed great examples.

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#9-- this author uses a lot of examples and transition words

#8-- this author has a good intro and a good conclusion and he states a lot of claims

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#9- This author used a clear claim, great reasons and examples and had a awesome conclusion

#5- Used awesome transitions and gave a clear claim and good examples and a great conclusion

#7- Had clear reasons and examples and gave a good claim and had a good conclusion

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#3-- This author used a clear claim, they used great transition words, they had good examples to support their claim, and they had a appropriate conclusion.

#5-- This author had a clear claim, they had good reasons and examples, and they had a good conclusion.

#2-- This author has a good claim, they give some good examples, and they have some good transition words.

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#1-  This author gave great transitions, facts, and had an excellent conclusion.

#8-  they gave a clear claim, good transitions, and good facts,

#2- they give good examples, and transitions.

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#1- This person had a good claim and gave reasons to support his/her claim. They finished with a good conclusion statement.

#2- Good claim, good reasons to support his/her claim. Should not have used the opinion statements.

#4- Claim is well written with good reasons to support the claim followed by a well written conclusion.

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#3--This author used a clean, clear claim. They have used great transition words. This author has a great conclusion. This author has great examples and explains they very well.

#5-- This author has a great claim. They have great examples and they explain well.

#7-- This author used  great  transition. this author has a good claim. this author has a great example of coming if age

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#4 This author gave a great description of how Walter was like at first and how he was such a scared and timid boy at the beginning of the movie, later improving to be a outgoing and energetic young man, and had a great, appropriate claim

#7 This author gave a great example of coming of age, using a claim that clearly states this

#5 This author gave a great claim, they had a right amount of examples and clearly stated everything.

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#1) Clear claim awesome transition they connected really well great examples and a phenomenon conclusion.

#7) Good transitions an alright claim. didn't really see the connection.

#9) Great Claim. okay transitions, connected really well and an awesome conclusion.

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#8- This author used good transitions but no comas. Also, their conclusion was good.
#7- Again good transitions and good claim.
#3- Good claim, and great examples

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#5-- This author used a clear claim, they gave great reasons, and used awesome transitions.

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