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2. Direct quotes or paraphrasing:
i) Are you including enough relevant material from your sources (primary and secondary) to give your analysis authority?
ii) Are you citing secondary sources (with MLA parenthetical citations--ex: (Doe 78).
iii) Are you giving credit to anything you would have not known (fully) before reading your sources.

1) Post an example of quoted or paraphrased material from the source with
2) an explanation of how it provides enough content to support the claim.

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A.  Does your introduction use one/some mix of the following to establish relevance?

1. A pathos argument about the emotion you and others attach to the subject.

2. A logos argument using facts or logical deduction to explain the significance of your subject.

3. An ethos argument about what standing you have to address the subject.

B.  Thesis (usually)--Is it an argument (one that we could reasonably agree or disagree with) about some combination of your propaganda or its topic (secondary sources)?

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B. Each paragraph should end with a closing sentence: Does that sentence tie what we read in the previous paragraph together?

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Support your claims with multiple quote sandwiches.

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Support your claims with multiple quote sandwiches.

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1. Introduce the quote:
i) Are you elaborating on your initial claims in a way that leads to your first source?
OR
ii) Are you connecting to the evidence/analysis of your previous quote sandwich?

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i) Are you using the 10 on 1 exercise (saying more than your initial thought) to explain the 'So What?" of the quote by adding context or elaboration?
ii) Do you have ideas or analysis that connect quote sandwiches within the paragraph
Provide one example of a quote followed by an explanation/transition. If you are uncertain of how to explain or transition, provide what you have and ask for help in developing your analysis.

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Did you include a basic conclusion that attempts to answer the question ‘So what?’ using one of the methods below

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Return to an earlier idea in your introduction or analysis with the benefit of new information.

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Connecting to a Broader Argument: What’s in it for us?

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Connecting to a Broader Argument: What’s in it for us?

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Broaden the view from the here and now of the paper by looking outward to the wider world and forward to the future.

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Acknowledging Limits of the Argument: What other questions/concerns need to be addressed?

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Acknowledging Limits of the Argument: What other questions/concerns need to be addressed?

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Not everything can be handled within the scope of your research. Acknowledge outside factors that might affect the significance of your analysis.

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Did you include a separate (separate from your 5-6 pages) Works Cited page, in MLA format, alphabetized, without annotations?

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My introduction to my first paragraph is dealing with people’s emotions meaning that I am using pathos. My introduction goes like “as a woman we are always expected to look a certain way to fit the standards of society...” people can always argue and say that it’s either true or false that there’s a pressure that comes from the people around us or the general public.

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Claim: the attitude around immigrants has changed from them being welcomed into the country to wanting them being locked up

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"In 2006, Kobe and wife, Vanessa Bryant, launched their foundation, which seeks to provide cultural and educational experiences to kids that may not otherwise have the opportunity." Many people wonder if some athletes are bigger than themselves or more than just an athlete. Kobe Bryant is (was) more than Just an athlete. He proved that by opening up this foundation

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Mubarek  (I reposted this to make commenting easier, Mubarek)                                                                          I think I am going to use pathos and ethos because I am talking about women of WWII in America. Before WWII women’s roles were as housewives and mothers, taking care of the children was their job. But all men sent to the war and all kinds of jobs were vacant because men went to war. Therefore, to keep the country going smoothly, women were required to replace the men in the factories. They took a different kind of roles such as teachers and nurses. Also, they spent their time for their families, children and they spent more time and more energy for work.

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Matthew Hardy. 1) "Starting in 2021, James, his foundation and supporting sponsors will provide possibly 2,000 full scholarships to the University of Akron for students who participate in James’ “I Promise Program

Matthew Hardy. 2)  This quote provides enough content to support my claim because it tells you what Lebron does off the court. Is it positive or negative? Lebron is bigger than basketball and most people wouldn't expect that from a NBA player

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Claim- women are being exposed to an image of an ideal and are being mentally harmed by this idea.

I’m going to connect my claim to my primary source and show how The idea of how women are supposed to look like is still there even if commercials show that you can be ‘yourself’ and I will eventually use my secondary sources to explain the harm that’s caused to women and how they can fall into a deep depression.

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In my into I’ll be using mostly logos to help readers/audience on what immigrants mean to America and the stereotypes/and myths Americans have towards immigrants. Also I’ll be mentioning how immigrants help America in numerous ways. Big overall idea they help out in is Economy.

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Money doesn’t have any effect of elections.
I’m going to put this with some of the evidence in collected with my secondary sourceS.

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the image of this ‘ideal’ has always been out there for women from the moment they are born to the moment they die. The image of how to be perfect or how you should look has always been there since the beginning. This idea of how a women should look has various affects in women like it was described in one of D, Heidi piece that stated “-body image disturbance include lowered self-esteem and elevated depression. In addition, body image disturbance may be a causal factor in the development of eating disorders”

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An interesting element in the poster is a man yelling “Lock her up, Lock her up”, at a little girl who has the word “immigrant” written on her shirt.

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This is my quote from my source "over 10 million were already working outside the home in 1941. By 1944, according to the New York Times, women represented 4,000 of the 65,000 workers at the Brooklyn Naval Yard, not counting office workers. While women represented just 6% of the industrial labor force at the Brooklyn Naval Yard, women represented 11.5% of all shipyard workers in 1944, according to the United States Department of Labor."

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My argument will be logos im going to use specific facts found in my sources.

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“Researchers have concluded that females’ concern with weight and body image has reached epidemic proportions and such concern is now considered a normal part of the female experience”

This quote will help me to explain in depth why women have had to deal with these kinds of problems from the moment they are born and how it’s so normalized these issues are. That people seem to just look past it .

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“I am surprised by how many times i have gone to a rally and they forget how much it costs” this is going to help to other side argument of my paper and it will give lots of credibility.

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“Mike Bloomberg has spent the most money out of any candidate and has dropped out of the race”

This is a big peace of evidence that will help support not only my thesis but a lot of my claims too

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“-body image disturbance include lowered self-esteem and elevated depression. In addition, body image disturbance may be a causal factor in the development of eating disorders”this are some issues that need to be taken seriously women are always being pushed by society to be something that is nearly impossible to be since most models that are showed cased in a commercial have done plastic surgery and go through extreme diets to look the way the corporation wants them to look like. But since that ‘ideal’ image is out there women get mentally stressed because of the pressure. The pressure is so bad that eventually it can lead to the worst circumstances out there.

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“Immigrants who have lived in the United States for nearly their whole lives lose their jobs, their homes, and their livelihood while locked up in immigration and customs enforcement jails, trying to fight deportation to a country they don’t even remember” (Black)

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Individuals who see immigrants as people who are more detrimental rather than helpful is grasping at straws. Statistics show..........

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“We as leaders are responsible for changes in our workplace, communities and homes beyond ourselves. We shouldn't just look at the bigger picture, as leaders we should also CREATE the bigger picture” in the game changers its main focus is to create something new in the fitness industry and to show that any goal can be accomplish if you can let others see your vision. It connects in weight training because plant based foods has become a new way in weight training that has not been done. It is more of a trend because of a lot of famous athletes that are in on the whole plant based diet gives some sort of credibility to their audience. The credibility being that it works and since well known athletes are great at what they do it must be because of the diet improving their training.

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“They work at high rates and make up more than a third of the workforce in some industries. Their geographic mobility helps local economies respond to worker shortages, smoothing out bumps that could otherwise weaken the economy.”

“And children born to immigrant families are upwardly mobile, promising future benefits not only to their families, but to the U.S. economy overall.”

These quotes are some quotes that support the idea of having immigrants in America helps the country. In the first quote it talks about how many immigrants make up the workforce and how having them working is keeping the economy from shortening. Also having kids as an immigrant it usually motivates your kids to live a better life than the parent so they can do a lot for their parents for giving them the opportunity to go to School and etc.

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In American during WWII women played important roles both home and at work. Women were at work in greater numbers than ever before. By this point on ideas about the American woman will be changed forever.

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“Wonder Woman was a symbol of power and independence for women and this has helped change society by pushing women into roles other than just a house wife. She symbolized many things such as: the values of women culture strength, self-reliance, sister hood and mutual support among women.”

This quote has enough content to support the claim because Wonder Woman has impacted society by being a symbol of power and independence for women.

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"There is no mention that the gladiators ate no meat, they just ate a high proportion of carbohydrates (plants) to help with performance and because they needed to be a little… fat. Fat gladiators were harder to kill."
This would help shows the source they had used was not valid enough to prove that plant based diets has been going on for a while. Creating something new can also come with setbacks and this can be shown on how some of the sources it is using to prove its efficiency of the diet can't be trace back from the gladiators time.

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“To allow Captain America to speak with a relevant voice the authors continuously changed his values, ideals and even moral codes to connect and meet the standards of society since these have and still do constantly change throughout the history of the U.S.” Captain America has impacted society as a role model. Many values, ideals and morals have changed since he was first created in the 1940’s. So the writers constantly changed those for Captain America so that he could always be looked at as a role model for people.

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Farah- This was the reality for 117,000 thousand Japanese people living in America after Pearl. After the bombing, people of Japanese descent were forced to leave their homes, belongings, businesses and jobs. Even though ⅔ of them were American citizens they were still treated as a threat to their nation. This is part of what I’ve already written and it further proves how America was mistreating people

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“The Japanese race is an enemy race and while many second and third generation Japanese born on United States soil, possessed of United States citizenship have become ‘Americanized,’ the racial strains are undiluted.”  This is a quote from someone during WW2 I’m using this quote as a transition from writing about racist imagery to real accounts of what people said and saw.

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Farah- For my intro I’m using pathos and logos because if I can draw people in with emotional facts the reader would be more interested. My intro is a good mesh between the first section and what I’m working on now.

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I think my intro will be using logos and ethos i feel like i focused enough on pathos and just focus on the facts and evidence without giving too much information

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The Topic of animals testing divides many people and majority supports it, but there are some who are against it, but do both sides really know goes on in those animal testing labs. I have the evidence to prove want goes on.

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This the reality animal testing is killing animals, and these big organizations are trying to show the majority the good side, or the benefits of animal testing, but the people that are against it are trying to see through the cracks to exposed the big organizations. This is a connection from my secondary source that i will go deeper into.

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“AALAS is an association of professionals that advances responsible laboratory animal care and use to benefit people and animals.” (AALAS) A quote from the big animal testing organizations trying to show their good side, but can’t hide the facts that animal testing, or the way the experiment on these animals is wrong.

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Pitch-  is how smoking affects you in a long term way.
Complaint- weather people are ready to enforce more on how smoking really is harmful to you and has the potential to kill you over time.
Moment- how times have changed and the appearance on smoking as time went on and they started to see the affects of it everyone started to change their thoughts about it. And now how the age is raised to 21 to be able to buy nicotine just goes to show how they are trying to get people to stop smoking or prevent them from starting so early or at all.

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I’m going to elaborate more on my topic because it is the main point is that smoking kills you.

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Each body paragraph needs to include both a claim and a closing sentence.

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Each body paragraph needs to include both a claim and a closing sentence.

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A.  Is there a clear claim related to and in support of your thesis?
B. Does it set up the connection between primary and secondary source material?
C. Can you identify whether the claims are often focused on
1) the pitch: (what the source or sources want you to believe or the tactics of persuasion)
2) the complaint: (the larger argument or debate that surrounds the material
3) the moment: the larger historical context(s) that lend meaning to the material?