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1. Click on the Example below.
2. Click on the plus sign in the bottom right corner of the page.
3. Rate each exemplar according to the rubric.
4. Give two reasoing why you ranked the writing that score.

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1. Click on the Example below.
2. Click on the plus sign in the bottom right corner of the page.
3. Rate each exemplar according to the rubric.
4. Give two reasoing why you ranked the writing that score.

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3 ~ Gives good quotes from the passage, Groups the ideas into 1 paragraph instead of putting random facts into 1 paragraph.

Example 2
2 ~ Could use a better intro, has a few grammar errors. Needs to state topic

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3: Has a good introduction,  Gives  reasons why that type of wind turbines
2: Spelt some things wrong,

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1: The person does should have stated what side he or she is on in the introduction.

2: This text could use more quotes from the passage to give more evidence to support what side they are on.
I would give this text a 2.

Exemplar 1

1: This person clearly introduces what side they are on in the introduction.

2: This person also gives many good quotes that support their point.

I would give this text a 4.

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It has a good conclusion and it has text evedence.

Exemplar 2
It puts the quotes in the wrong section and does not finish them.

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4: It has a good conclusion and it has text evedence.

Exemplar 2
It puts the quotes in the wrong section and does not finish them.

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It has a good conclusion and it has text evedence.

Exemplar 2

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good intro, uses text and good con

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3:  Introduces the topic with an opinion
and gives reasons about the opinion.

Exemplar 2

4:  gives good and bad  information and also uses a lot of transitional words  , gives evidence to support the opinion

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I think that Exemplar 1 is a 3 because the story was introduced clearly and because it has a little bit of a rebuttal in it to show the story in a different P.O.V.

Exemplar 2
I think exemplar 2 is a 4 because it has good reasons for their opinion and it has transition words that move the story.

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I think that the example is a 3, because it introduces a topic, and  it has a great conclusion, and has the opinion, and has the rebuttal
Exemplar 2: I would rate this pass

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3 introduces a topic with an opinion and also gives reasons  about the opinion
Exemplar 2
4 has transition words that move the story and has good quotes

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Exemplar 1:
Has a good introduction but could use a better conclusion. Very good quotes.
I would rate it a 3

Exemplar 2:
It had a good introduction and conclusion. The story unfolded naturally and it was a bit more detailed than exemplar 1.
I would rate it a 4

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Good amount of description and conclusion is ok.Could state the topic a bit more clearly.
Rating:3

Exemplar 2:
Very detailed. Gives a good intro and conclusion, and states opinion clearly.

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I think that exemplar 1 is a 3 because it introduces the opinion and topic, and the conclusion supports the opinion
Exemplar 2:
I think that exemplar 2 is a 4 because the conclusion is very strong, and it supports the opinion with details.