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I need to keep working on adding dialogue, specifically dialogue that reveals information about the speaker and the meaning in the moment.

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The activity that was most helpful for me was the "first, last, and times I realized something" activity. It helped me remember small meaningful moments I had forgotten!

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"The bus crawls to a stop, the worn down brakes screeching as the momentum slows. Grabbing my large backpack - the one that I’ll be living out of for the next month, filled to the brim with layers of clothes to protect my warm Texas skin from the harsh Scottish winter - I lumber down the aisle and step off the dusty steps of the airport transit bus."

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Adding small detail and small actions to my writing are some ways that I grew in my craft. By zooming in one the small details and movements, I'm able to help the reader picture the scene more.

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These are my plot story mountain and my emotion story mountain. I really enjoyed chunking up the events in my story and figuring out how I was feeling!

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It's all was good to put good detail in your story.because there is always a small details and the big ones too. It will make more sencie in the story.

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I learned what internal and external means and how the are important in your writing.

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"OMG" i ran all around the house

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I learned what  internal and external mean to help me be a better writer  and understand it more.

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Sometimes I don’t like them but I do at the bottom of my hart and we don’t only speak English I speak Korean and people think that I am Asian just by looking at me and they do even say anything but I am half Asian because South Korea is in asian

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with adding detail i feel as if i added a lot more detail than i do other story's

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with adding detail i feel as if i added a lot more detail than i do other story's

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grammer

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I want to keep working on adding to my first and last and adding more ways to helping my writing become better.

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is that what every i can do you can do it to