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I would respond to my teacher with either a new draft or explain to her how i have taken her advise and edited my work.

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Jarrod, I can see here that you have tried hard to manipulate images for effect. By doing this to all the images though, it doesn't help to promote the band at all as we can't see them?!

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The feedback I recorded allowed me to get responses on what audiences liked about the video and what they disliked, I asked for criticisms and ways I could improve.

This meant I was able to make changes to my products such as design on Digipak and also on my music video mainly I was able to make lip syncing a lot closer and try remove grainy scenes.

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I believe that audience feedback is one of the most keep successions to a profitable or well like media product. As we researched our audiences and got information off them it was easy then to change the designs and what went into my media products. The audience is key when finding what gets good demand and what works well so having multiple discussions and asking for feedback from my teachers is extremely helpful.

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Must download to watch

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Must download to watch

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Here is another piece of feedback received, it's good to see positive comments about the finale video, as said lip syncing was off in the video in some scenes and this would be easy to combat with extra time as we will be able to re film to get lip syncing on time, the only problem which i felt played a major role was the fact each time we moved a clip on Finale Cut pro all the clips would move out of place.

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Here I got some feedback on my music video, he criticized the use of lighting, i think as we used natural lighting throughout the scenes this left us unable to get a good clear cut of the scenes, if we had more time and possible more equipment to help with lighting then we will be able to fix this problem.

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Here is another use of technology to get feedback, i asked for texts off my friends and people in my school, i received on telling me about how he liked my music video and the genre was portrayed very well which is always goo to hear but they did criticized the quality of the video. The reason for this is because of time constrictions uploading a HD clip requires a few hours and having other children coming in to use the computers every lesson we had to upload in a lower quality which effected the overall video. Next time I will upload from a home computer able to upload high quality.