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Hi everyone, having looked at all our presentations I was thinking if we all add some parts in on the local attractions, local transport and the beaches that the presentations will be more informative and the viewer will get all the information with links that they need to help them learn and plan their trip to Pembrokeshire.  Thank you all for your help 

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Hi everyone, having looked at all our presentations I was thinking if we all add some parts in on the local attractions, local transport and the beaches that the presentations will be more informative and the viewer will get all the information with links that they need to help them learn and plan their trip to Pembrokeshire.  Thank you all for your help 

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Hi Will, thanks for looking at my presentation, I have looked at yours and was thinking it maybe good for yourself to also follow Laura's advice and add some info on local transport so people know how to get around and what is available to them, other than that yours is very eye catching

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Hi Will, thanks for looking at my presentation, I have looked at yours and was thinking it maybe good for yourself to also follow Laura's advice and add some info on local transport so people know how to get around and what is available to them, other than that yours is very eye catching

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Cheers

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Hi Jamie, I have received your document and found it very informative, but I think it may be a good idea to add some more info on the local beaches as it is a big thing in the local area and a great beauty spot.

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Hi Jamie, I have received your document and found it very informative, but I think it may be a good idea to add some more info on the local beaches as it is a big thing in the local area and a great beauty spot.

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Hi Emma, I have taken a look at your PowerPoint and I find it to be a very good overview on the area and a nice range of activities. I thought that it would be valuable to the reader for you to add local transport information along with the map of the area, also maybe some contact details or website addresses for the accommodation to make it easier for the reader to access information or bookings, other than that, very attractive and easy to read. Laura

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Hi Emma, I have taken a look at your PowerPoint and I find it to be a very good overview on the area and a nice range of activities. I thought that it would be valuable to the reader for you to add local transport information along with the map of the area, also maybe some contact details or website addresses for the accommodation to make it easier for the reader to access information or bookings, other than that, very attractive and easy to read. Laura

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Thank you for your help girls! I will take your feedback on board and will make some changes.  

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Thank you for your help girls! I will take your feedback on board and will make some changes.  

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Diolch !!

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Thank you so much for all of your help guys!! Was invaluable.

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Thank you so much for all of your help guys!! Was invaluable.

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Many thanks,

Laura

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Thank you for all your feedback, was very helpful 

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Thank you for all your feedback, was very helpful 

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Thanks
Emma T

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I have read everyone's feedback and i think we should all add travel information, attractions and also information on camping to our power points and websites. 

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I have read everyone's feedback and i think we should all add travel information, attractions and also information on camping to our power points and websites. 

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Hi Emma R, I have recieved your powerpoint via email and it has a variety of information on there which is brilliant. I was thinking maybe you could add more beaches to your powerpoint as this is a major part to why people come to pembrokeshire

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Hi Emma R, I have recieved your powerpoint via email and it has a variety of information on there which is brilliant. I was thinking maybe you could add more beaches to your powerpoint as this is a major part to why people come to pembrokeshire

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Hi Emma, I've looked at your Powerpoint and I really like some of the information you have included. Including information about the blue flags on the beaches is a really good idea and a great selling point for tourists. Check your capital letter on place names.  

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Hi Emma, I've looked at your Powerpoint and I really like some of the information you have included. Including information about the blue flags on the beaches is a really good idea and a great selling point for tourists. Check your capital letter on place names.  

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Hi Joanne, I love the layout of your website, it is so eye catching!! It has bright and cheerful pictures, making the area seem really attractive. There is also lots of choice. The only improvements I can think of are that on the first and activities pages, there is foreign writing at the bottom and the pictures on places to go don't tell you where they are in the area? Other than that, it's amazing!! Love it!!

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Hi Joanne, I love the layout of your website, it is so eye catching!! It has bright and cheerful pictures, making the area seem really attractive. There is also lots of choice. The only improvements I can think of are that on the first and activities pages, there is foreign writing at the bottom and the pictures on places to go don't tell you where they are in the area? Other than that, it's amazing!! Love it!!

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Hi Laura, i have just received your email for your website, i think its very informative and professional, however i have noticed that your attractions list on your page isnt working and also there is no contact details available. 

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Hi Laura, i have just received your email for your website, i think its very informative and professional, however i have noticed that your attractions list on your page isnt working and also there is no contact details available. 

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Hi Laura, your website looks great. It looks very professional and you have included lots of detail about places to stay in Manorbier. Have you thought about including information about transport with Manorbier Village, such as the train station or bus? 

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Hi Laura, your website looks great. It looks very professional and you have included lots of detail about places to stay in Manorbier. Have you thought about including information about transport with Manorbier Village, such as the train station or bus? 

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Jo, iv just received your email with the link for your website, it looks brilliant and very professional. I was thinking to make the website more informative you could add a list of the attractions around with a age range there suitable for.

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Jo, iv just received your email with the link for your website, it looks brilliant and very professional. I was thinking to make the website more informative you could add a list of the attractions around with a age range there suitable for.

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Hi Emma T! I have just received your email, It looks great! It's very informative and attractive to look at, promoting the area's achievements. the only improvement I can think of is maybe adding travel information for the area as this may be a surprise to some visitors. Other than that, brilliant!

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Hi Emma T! I have just received your email, It looks great! It's very informative and attractive to look at, promoting the area's achievements. the only improvement I can think of is maybe adding travel information for the area as this may be a surprise to some visitors. Other than that, brilliant!

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Laura

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As soon as we are all up to speed I will let you know.

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As soon as we are all up to speed I will let you know.