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McCandless's characterization as a "Man of the Future" is demonstrated by his brazenness in "hurling death through" to the heavens and the sky.

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The quote, “perhaps he hurls death through the firmament” illustrates McCandless as a “Man of the Future”, or in other words, McCandless has cast the concept of death to the heavens.

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From the chapter "Of Man of the Future," McCandless is well labeled 'Man of the Future' from the line “Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament,” articulating the concept of death by casting it to the endless heavens.

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The quote, “Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament”, illustrates McCandless as a “Man of the Future” because he has cast the concept of death to the heavens, the meaning of ‘firmament’.

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Jon Krakauer illustrates that Chris McCandless is a "Man of the Future" through the quote, "Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament."

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Because the quote demonstrates he has cast the concept of death to the heavens,which is what ‘firmament’ refers to, I believe that the quote, “Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament,” illustrates McCandless is a 'Man of the Future'.

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Chris McCandless, being a "Man of the future," is illustrated as such because of his willingness to "Hurl death [to the heavens]

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The writer gets right to the point. However, I noticed that the writer needed a comma in some areas in his/her response.

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Jon Krakauer illustrates McCandless as a "Man of the Future" through his willingness to cast the concept of death away, "hurling" them through social fortresses, his own firmaments.

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This person answered the prompt, and I think he or she has an interesting point of view on the quote they chose to compare Chris McCandless with. There are some grammatical errors but easy to fix.

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The writer analyzes a specific word and that is the right way to go. The writer could have elaborated on what this shows us about the character and what it means to be a "Man of the Future."

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I really like how the writer puts the poem in the writing so he or she can explain what it means it he'' or her's precise language.

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Quotations need to be properly cited/used, with appropriate commas and etc.

This writer uses a mix of active verbs, which make the piece clearer, and interesting.

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I noticed how the writer did not add sources and quotes directly from the book. He also uses scholarly language, throughout the paragraph to make the piece more interesting.

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The writer of the prompt uses the evidence to specifically describe Chris. The way they described "firmament" makes the writing interesting, just like he picked apart the whole quote.

McCandless as a "Man of the Future" illustrates himself as the cast concept of death to the heavens saying "Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament"

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The paragraph well explains the evidence given. The last sentence was interesting and I wish I had more to read from this view. I would like to know how McCandless's journey is never ending.

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I appreciate the fact that the writer gets right into the quote, answering the prompt, and I also appreciate the language the writer decided to use, but art the same time, the word choice doesn't interfere with our understanding of what they are saying

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Like how the author is picking apart the quote word for word to analyze it. As an extension, the writer really strengthens the argument by centralizing the response around a single word. The added effect of doing this is a created motif in the argument.

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I notice that the writer analyzes one word and uses it as a base for the explanation of the quote.

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I noticed he uses scholarly language, but needs to go in depth to explain what some words mean. The writer makes an interesting choice by using dependent clauses to start his setences. He needs to use commas as needed when you just a conjuction for a sentence.

McCandless, 'a man of the future', has cast the concept of death to the heavens because he said "Perhaps he hurls death throught the firmament." Firmament is the stucture above the atmosphere.

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I believe that the quote “Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament” illustrates McCandless as a “Man of the Future” because the quote is saying he has cast the concept of death to the heavens. For more context, that’s what ‘firmament’ means.

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I really like how this writer chooses one word to base his writing around specifically from the poem. One thing that I did notice is that it did not use direct evidence from the book which makes it somewhat hard to believe the connections the writer is making.

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I believe that the quote “Perhaps he hurls death through the firmament” illustrates McCandless as a “Man of the Future” because the quote is saying he has cast the concept of death to the heavens. For more context, that’s what ‘firmament’ means. McCandless has now adopted a lifestyle in which it seems that he decides whether he lives or died. And to go even deeper with the word ‘firmament’, that line said that McCandless threw death itself towards the heavens. Conceptually, Heaven is an unimaginable distance away from the Earth so this line shows us that McCandless has cast away death to a journey of no end.