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I need to focus on finding better fitting quotes from the text.

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I need to introduce my quotes in different ways.

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Using better diction because I repeat words

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I need to revise my word choice after I write

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I need to mostly focus on clarity, introducing my quotes, and making sure my quotes relate to the topic sentence.

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I will need to choose fewer words while still being able to convey my thoughts.

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I need to use better transition words and try making my paragraphs shorter by focusing on the important information more.

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I need to work on having a better word choice   

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I need to work on having a better word choice   

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I need to work on eliminating words that are not needed, and transitions. Also, I need to work on explaining my quotations more.

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I need to work on transitioning my sentences and quotes better.

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To revise your piece, you need to choose good quotations that represent your topic.

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I need to learn how to "cut the fat" off of my essay, and use better word choice.

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I need to use better word choices and transitions.

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I need to focus on using better transition words after my quotes

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What do you need to work on as you revise your piece?