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Both of you cleanly executed your moves.But both of you had a number of hesitations throughout the routine and that needs improving on.Also,you need to be more creative when moving around because the routine looks a bit plain when you just walk from place to place.

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I like that both of you synchronized your moves and you tried to time your cartwheels and side flanks together.However,Esleen could have done something else while waiting for Jasmine to jump on the springboard to get the momentum.It looks a bit plain for Esleen to be standing there doing nothing.But in overall,great performance!

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I like both of your skills. You are able to do some amazing moves.
I wish that both of you would not have and awkward pause

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I like that Esleen and Jasmine did the cartwheel together. I think it looked really cool.
When Esleen and Jasmine were doing the cartwheel, Esleen lost her balance and fell while Jasmine legs were not straight.
I wish that Esleen did not fell and Jasmine kept her legs straight.
Nice job Jasmine and Esleen!

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Zechariah you fell down mildly while doing side flank on the 2 layer box I think you can improve that.

There was lots of smooth transitions in between the stations

The two of you were a little stuck and were queuing up for the springboard at 0:40 but over all it was very good, keep up the good work

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You did it well even though you are the only one. The transition is smooth

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You transitioned well between the gymnastics skills but could improve on both side flank and star. Ashton was sitting on the box while Ryan's legs were connected.

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It was quite impressive you managed to do well even on your own! The sequence was great and the transition was very smooth.

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The timing was slow, but I think your patience to wait for your teammate is very honorable. This is still very good besides that though.

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i like the way you both are doing different things at the same time. I wish you could hold the candle stick a little longer.

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Your pair counter tension was creative. The transitions were ok, but one thing you can improve on is that you were discussing what to do during the recording. You could have discussed before.

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I like how the both of you coordinate. You both do so well in pair work! You know when is the time to finish. You treat time in your assessment very importantly! Teamwork is great! Timing is too!

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You kind of messed up at 0:26 and 0:14 and had some coordination so I think it is quite a good effort even though there was a lot of walking here and there

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I like how both of you did the pair counter balance and pair counter tension they were indeed very creative. I also like how both of you did a smooth transition and it was a nice performance by both of you overall.
The only thing that I think that both of you can improve on is your cooperation.

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I like how the girl in purple did a handstand without using the box(I think).I wish the girl in yellow could do more stunts and the transition can be better. But GOOD JOB!

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I like how the first few thing you were doing the same thing at the same time.

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I like how the first few thing you were doing the same thing at the same time.

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I am impressed!

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I like it that Jobelle climbed up the tallest tower with agility! One thing you can improve  on is that you can be more synchronized.

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i think they should make their transitions more interesting by skipping or hopping

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i think they should make their transitions more interesting by skipping or hopping

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Ashrith u could have done the supported handstand for 5 secs or more. What i liked about your performance is that you knew what to do and it was organised.

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While doing the side flank, you should try to not touch the box as it is not vaulting anymore. It is considered as mounting. But overall good Job.

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I LIKE HOW YOU AL START BY ROLLING FORWARD AND THEN BACKWARD IT WAS SO creative
i think u can do better in pair balance and balance longer but overall your performance is the best i have yet to see lol

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I like it that you did everything in synchronise. The paul-house girl could have stretched her star a bit more.

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I really liked how in the beginning where you guy rolled synchronized

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I really liked how in the beginning where you guy rolled synchronized

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I like how you did the pair counter- balance for more than 5 secs. I think you can improve on your star as u did not stretch and end off with a motorbike.

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I really liked the way they moved from one equipment to another. Their coordinated forward roll looked very synchronised. The sequence will be better if they could hold the balance.

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WHAT I LIKE: they tried the what it seem to them the 'impossible' [at least Rhyan did when he is doing with springboard side flank but it didn't work out but he still tried doing it which I am very impressed.]
.very ''synchronized''.[LOL]
WHAT THEY COULD DO BETTER:THEY COULD LESS QUARREL AND COOPERATE WITH EACH OTHER.
.SKIP INSTEAD OF WALKING FROM ONE POINT TO ANOTHER

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1) Upload the video of your gymnastic sequence and include both partners names.
2) Look through the videos of your peers and choose one video to comment one.
3) Each of you need to comment on 1 thing you thought the pair did well (execution of skills/ smooth transition/ timing of the pair/etc), and 1 thing you thought they can improve on.
4) Leave your name at the end of the comment so that I know you have completed all aspects of the assignment.

Remember to provide constructive criticism and be respectful at all times!

Mrs Nesh

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I like how you did the supported handstand. They can improve on not stopping too much

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I like how you did the things together. You can improve on doing things further away from each other.

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I like how you did the two pair counterbalances. The side flank vault with the springboard was executed well and the transition was relatively smooth besides a few pauses before and after the candlestand balance. I also liked how Adel did the supported handstand the other way round. I would have liked it even more if you added a final step to end the sequence. But great job anyways!