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Pakistan is among the countries with the second-highest number of out-of-school children. On top of that, those in schools are taught by untrained teachers with poor qualification and grip on their subjects. Schools which are the foundation of children personality are doing just the opposite. This is a heart wrenching reflection of our state's neglected policy that the future of our country is being wasted through outdated curricula.

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The Pakistani education system faces numerous challenges, including a lack of proper teacher training, an outdated syllabus, and limited opportunities for students. The rigidity of the curriculum inhibits creativity from blooming. This idea is thoroughly explored in Hard Times by Charles Dickens. These pieces help us to understand the detrimental impact of such rigidity and how it impairs students' critical thinking. Moreover, in Pakistan, the insufficient professional training for teachers contributes to this issue. These systemic issues weaken our education system and prevent the youth from being able to provide for themselves and the society they inhabit.

-Wania Tariq

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The suburbs of Pakistan have immense number of clever and sharp minds, that climb trees like monkeys and run like deers. All they need are buffers that shape their charcoals into diamonds, for they can shine as bright as any student in any part of the world; but, the outdated syllabus, teaching styles, and the poor quality of education, not only hinder their capabilities, but also their morales. For decades old established means cannot sharpen the personalities of every era.

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It's a weak claim first of all. It's claiming "education system is weak" without proving why. The structure is poor it reads like a rant rather an argument and there's no data, example or authority.

I'd rewrite it as: The education system in Pakistan faces serious challenges. Many teachers enter classrooms without proper training, leaving students without the guidance they deserve. Outdated syllabi fail to prepare young people for a rapidly changing world, and opportunities for growth outside textbooks are rare. Unless reforms are made, the system risks holding back the very generation it is meant to empower.

Fizza Waseem.

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Beyond the undeniable fact that our education system lacks structure, we cannot ignore how it is due to collective neglect in various aspects.

Can add all the reasons with stats and testimonies.

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pakistan's education system has some weaknesses, where aprox. 22.8 million children aged b\w 5-16 are not attending school. weak education limits economic developments.

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The paragraph uses a lot of simple sentences where it can benefit from the use of complex and compound sentences.

Samia

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The education system of Pakistan is not up to the mark, not only because the teachers are not properly trained but because the students are forced to just remember syllabus but not the skills, critical thinking, or even the scenerio based learnings. In the same way opportunities been provided to students are not adequate.

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The Pakistani Education system have become outdated. The students are being affected by the inadequace of the teachers; the cramming system is what destroying the students competence and demotivating them into putting their ideas.

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Forcefully Uneducated or Inability to Learn?

Pakistan's education system is declining due to various reasons. Be it untrained educators unable to provide students with proper teaching, a lack of opportunities to better a student's abilities, or outdated syllabi that do not progress with society, something needs to be done.

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The education system in Pakistan faces serious challenges that weaken its effectiveness. Many teachers are not properly trained, which lowers the quality of instruction, while students often lack opportunities to reach their potential. In addition, the syllabus remains outdated and fails to meet modern needs. If these problems are not addressed, the overall standard of education will continue to decline. As Nelson Mandela once said, “Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.”

~Unzila

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The education infrastructure in Pakistan has weakened over the years due to lack of proper training and opportunities to the faculty and students, alike.

In addition to that, the syllabus taught is outdated, negatively impacting the future of education in Pakistan.

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The education system of Pakistan has been outdated for many years, students face outdated courses, for example that, in hyderabad sindh board, grades are brought, teachers are not paid enough and not appreciated properly

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The education system in Pakistan is very weak. The main reasons behind this are the following:

i- Our teachers aren’t trained properly.

ii- We don’t give enough opportunities to the students.

iii- The courses are outdated.

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The education system in Pakistan is considered weak primarily because of the lack of opportunities for students. Moreover, the teachers are not well trained and the syllabus is mostly outdated, especially in public schools.

-konain

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The lack of opportunities for students isn't just a challenge for the labor market, it is emblematic of an education system failing to prepare the students for the jobs of today. Still marred by outdated syllabus and teachers lacking proper pegagogical training, the system needs serious reform if it is to serve the needs of the Information Age.

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The paragraph seems like a collection of topic sentences from all the paragraphs of the article. It should be break down into 4 paragraphs containing more data.

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The Education system in Pakistan is full of promise, but it is not utilized properly and not given the focus it deserves, because it is a crucial part of society

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In a country with more than 60% of the population falling under the age of 30, a weak education system could be the straw that breaks the camel's back.

The sentences need to be more substantial and not just fluff about what is wrong.

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Out dated education system and untrained teachers are ingredients to a stagnant educational growth. The said dilemma plaguing Pakistani society.

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The irony of our education system lies in the fact that the teachers themselves lack the abilities that are essential in a good educator.

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We can start with a hook, 'Are our children students? Or just polished robots bent to the will of our weak education system? From untrained teachers to minimal opportunities, we are doing nothing but wasting the potential of Pakistan's youth.' We can elaborate the syllabus point. We can make it satire. We can add transitional devices in between. (Hajrah Ajaz)

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Schools are where minds are nutured and future generations are raised and shaped. However, in Pakistan this haven of institution is threatened by weak education system, improper teacher training, and lack of oppurtunities.

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Pakistan’s education system suffers because the focus is not on quality. Teachers often lack proper training, which means students are left behind in developing critical skills. On top of that, the outdated syllabus prevents students from competing globally. Unless these issues are addressed, Pakistan will struggle to make progress.