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Optimus prime rise of the beast (CHECKED & REVISED)

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Optimus prime rise of the beast (CHECKED & REVISED)

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a few months ago I watched "optimus prime rise of the beast" movie it was a cool film, its about there is a boy want ro steal someone car the key is in that car! when he ride the car there are police want to catch him when he scared the car became a robot the run away. tomorrow they go to scoge headquarters. they fight so fierce when optimus prime want die bumblebee come and kill scoge and they go home.

its really an interesting movie an a cool movie. thats all from me thank you.

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A few months ago, I watched the movie "Optimus Prime: Rise of the Beasts." It was a cool film. The story follows a boy who tries to steal a car with the keys inside. While he's driving, the police start chasing him. Suddenly, the car transforms into a robot, and they escape. The next day, they go to the Scourge headquarters and engage in a fierce battle. Just when Optimus Prime is about to be defeated, Bumblebee arrives and defeats Scourge. They then return home safely.

It’s really an interesting and cool movie. That’s all from me. Thank you.

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Embrace Diversity, Make Friends with the Unexpected

Last week, I watched "How to Train Your Dragon" movie and it was awesome! It's about a boy named Hiccup who lives in a Viking village. Vikings usually don't like dragons, but Hiccup becomes friends with one named Toothless. Toothless is super cool because he's a dragon, but he's also nice and friendly.

The movie has lots of exciting parts, like when Hiccup learns to fly with Toothless and when they have to save their village from scary dragons. There's also a part where Hiccup learns that sometimes things we think are scary can be friends if we get to know them.

I recommend this movie because it's funny, exciting, and it teaches us that it's okay to be different and make friends with people (or dragons!) who are different too.

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4S-Bennett Putera Santosa (CHECKED & ALTERED)

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4S-Bennett Putera Santosa (CHECKED & ALTERED)

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The Clone wars

Last week, I watched "Star wars Clone wars" movie and it was amazing! It's about a war between the Republic and the Separatist with the main character Anakin Skywalker,Obi-wan kenobi and Ahsoka Tano . In the end they won with the Republic.

The movie has lots of cool parts, like how they set strategies to fight millions of battle droid. There's also a part when Anakin was having trouble with his new student, but in a few hours he was not having trouble with his new student. I recommend this movie because it's funny and it teach us the importance of friendship, the value of being patient, and the dangers of being afraid. That's all from me thank you.

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Last week, I watched the "Star Wars: The Clone Wars" movie, and it was amazing! It's about the war between the Republic and the Separatists, featuring main characters Anakin Skywalker, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and Ahsoka Tano. In the end, they achieve victory for the Republic.

The movie has lots of cool parts, like the strategic battles against millions of battle droids. There's also a part where Anakin initially struggles with his new student, Ahsoka, but quickly overcomes these difficulties. I recommend this movie because it's funny and teaches us the importance of friendship, the value of being patient, and the dangers of fear.

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4M - Jingga Fauline Faradishe (CHECKED & REVISED)

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4M - Jingga Fauline Faradishe (CHECKED & REVISED)

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I read a book name "Sahabat Pengingat Shalat". It's the story of Dona and her friend. One day, Dona has a best-friend, her best friend name is Sinta. At lunch, it's time for them to pray, but Sinta didn't want to pray. At night, Dona wrote a letter for Sinta, Dona came to Sinta home, Dona knocked the door and left the letter, and Dona went back to heran home, Sinta opened the door but no body was there, she read the letter, she didn't know who write the letter. The letter reminded Sinta to pray. I like this story, because the story let me know the importance of shalat.

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A great reminder of shalat. I read a book titled "Sahabat Pengingat Shalat." It tells the story of Dona and her friend. One day, Dona's best friend, Sinta, joined her for lunch. When it was time to pray, Sinta didn’t want to. That night, Dona wrote a letter to Sinta, then went to Sinta’s house, knocked on the door, left the letter, and went back home. When Sinta opened the door, she saw no one there but found the letter. She read it but didn’t know who had written it. The letter reminded Sinta to pray. I like this story because it taught me the importance of shalat.

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4M-Jennifer Caren Hung (CHECKED & REVISED)

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4M-Jennifer Caren Hung (CHECKED & REVISED)

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A Great Film for Everyone

Last month I watch a film name Grizzy and the lemmings.Grizzy is a big bear and lemmings is a lemming. The duration is 5 minutes until 2 hours. They have so many episode,the one that I watch is episode 124 the title of the film is Intensive Care. That episode is very funny,First the Grizzy want to throw the lemmings out but the lemmings are sick then the Grizzy give them some chocolate the second day the lemmings already healthy but the lemmings want to eat the chocolate again, so they paint their nose red the Grizzy wants to eat the chocolate but suddenly the lemmings come, the lemmings told the Grizzy they are sick so the Grizzy get some chocolate give them,then Grizzy tells them to blow their noses, suddenly Grizzy know their nose change colour to black, the Grizzy check the tissue their is a red paint.

The film is so funny I recommend this film for everyone.

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A Great Film for Everyone

Last month, I watched a film called "Grizzy and the Lemmings." Grizzy is a big bear, and the Lemmings are small lemmings. The episodes range from 5 minutes to 2 hours. There are many episodes, and the one I watched was episode 124, titled "Intensive Care."

This episode is very funny. First, Grizzy wants to throw the Lemmings out, but they are sick. Grizzy gives them some chocolate. The next day, the Lemmings are healthy again, but they want more chocolate. To trick Grizzy, they paint their noses red to look sick. When Grizzy wants to eat the chocolate, the Lemmings show up, pretending to be sick again. Grizzy gives them more chocolate and tells them to blow their noses. Suddenly, Grizzy notices that their noses have turned back to their normal color. Checking the tissue, he discovers the red paint.

The film is very funny, and I recommend it for everyone.

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Have Fun with Friends in The Game.

Today I want to review Mobile Legends Game. Six months ago I started play Mobile Legends game. It's a popular multiplayer online game. All the players choose a hero that they want to be.The game have a variety type of heroes.There are Marksman, Mage, Fighter, Assassin, Tank and Support hero. Each hero have special abilities. My favourite hero is Martis. He is fighter hero. Then you choose classic mode, rank mode, or brawl mode to play. You have to make strategy with your friends and play together to reach the target to destroy the enemy team's base. In the end of the game you will get score to reach the higher level. The game is so interesting and you can have fun with your friends in this game. I want you to join play with me. Thank you.

REVISION:Today I want to review the Mobile Legends game. Six months ago, I started playing Mobile Legends, a popular multiplayer online game. All players choose a hero they want to be. The game features a variety of hero types, including Marksman, Mage, Fighter, Assassin, Tank, and Support. Each hero has special abilities. My favorite hero is Martis, a Fighter.

You can choose to play in classic mode, rank mode, or brawl mode. To win, you need to strategize with your friends and work together to destroy the enemy team's base. At the end of each game, you earn a score that helps you reach higher levels. The game is very interesting, and you can have a lot of fun playing with your friends. I invite you to join me in playing Mobile Legends. Thank you.

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Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

Hello everyone.

Today, I want to tell you about a movie I watched sometimes ago. The title is Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

The movie is about a boy, called Charlie, and his Grandpa Joe. They join a small group of other young children, who get golden tickets, to tour the magical and mysterious factory of an eccentric candy maker Willy Wonka. Willy Wonka has a hidden motivation for the tour, one that he will reveal only after the children in the group show their true colors.

The moral of the story is: “Be Good”. Be like Charlie who is true to himself, and you will be rewarded. In the movie, Willy Wonka inherits his chocolate factory to Charlie because he passes all the test while touring the factory.

Thank you for listening.

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Charlie and the Chocolate Factory

Hello everyone,

Today, I want to tell you about a movie I watched some time ago. The title is "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory."

The movie is about a boy named Charlie and his Grandpa Joe. They join a small group of other children who have won golden tickets to tour the magical and mysterious factory of the eccentric candy maker Willy Wonka. Willy Wonka has a hidden motivation for the tour, one that he will reveal only after the children in the group show their true colors.

The moral of the story is: “Be good.” Be like Charlie, who is true to himself, and you will be rewarded. In the movie, Willy Wonka inherits his chocolate factory to Charlie because he passes all the tests while touring the factory.

Thank you for listening.

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Hello Everyone, Today I want to tell you how I can join a pokemon championship.

First, I tried to play pokemon card with my brother, and I found it so interesting.

Then, I asked my father to join the championship last year.

This year, I am so excited to join it again, as this June I am going to compete again.

That's all from me. Thankyou everyone for listening.

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Hello everyone,

Today, I want to tell you how I joined a Pokémon championship.

First, I started playing Pokémon cards with my brother and found it very interesting.

Then, I asked my father to let me join the championship last year.

This year, I am excited to join it again, as I will be competing this June.

That's all from me. Thank you, everyone, for listening.

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A Great film for everyone

Last year, my sister and I watched a film called Gravity halls the film was very interesting and funny. There was a 12 years old boy name Dipper. He likes to learn magic and find strange things for his uncle's museum, and his sister Mabel doesn't like her uncle's collection that Dipper chose for his uncle's collection. So Mabel replace it with cute stuff like cute doll's,stuffed animals & others.Dipper always mad at Mabel whenever she changed Her uncle's collection in the museum with her cute things.

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Last year, my sister and I watched a film called Gravity Halls. The film was very interesting and funny. It features a 12-year-old boy named Dipper who loves to learn magic and discover strange artifacts for his uncle's museum. However, his sister Mabel doesn’t appreciate the unusual items Dipper selects. Instead, she replaces them with cute things like dolls, stuffed animals, and other adorable items. Dipper always gets mad at Mabel whenever she changes their uncle's collection in the museum with her cute things.

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When I'm was small I love to watch Upin and Ipin film about the animation children from Malaysia. Upin and Ipin they are nice kids they live with their sister call kak rose and also their grandma. They always play together also have many friends to play with even at home or at school. they are difference races but they can be a good friends. Upin and Ipin if they did wrong things they will say sorry to their sister or grandma. Upin and Ipin film is nice to watch they teach me how to be kind people we can make friends with everyone even we are different and be good friends. I recommend this film because it's exciting

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A Childhood Favorite: Upin and Ipin

When I was small, I loved watching the animated series Upin and Ipin, which is about two children from Malaysia. Upin and Ipin are nice kids who live with their sister, Kak Ros, and their grandmother. They always play together and have many friends, both at home and at school. Despite being from different races, they all manage to be good friends.

Whenever Upin and Ipin do something wrong, they always apologize to their sister or grandmother. Upin and Ipin is a wonderful show that teaches valuable lessons about kindness and the importance of making friends with everyone, regardless of our differences. I highly recommend this film because it's exciting and heartwarming.

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A great game for everyone!

Roblox is a good game. I played it last night and i had a great time.There were no ads in the app and it's free, too!.

You can also make friends in Roblox, I recomend Roblox with friends,

There is thousands of games in side of Roblox that you can play with your friends!. You can also make games in Roblox.

Roblox is a good game for everyone!!

You should try it too!

That is all from me

Thank You :D

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Many Experiences to Explore!

Roblox is a fun and interesting game. I played it since a few months ago, it's a very good game! In Roblox, there are many experiences to try with a lot of categories. Such as adventures, cooking, simulator, battles and many more. There, we can also create our own experience, we can create everything we want. We can also create our own character, some of the items are free, but some others we have to pay. How to pay items? Well, we need to top up our e-money first, the money in the game is called robux. Sometimes, experiences need robux to play, like Bloxburg, it costs 20 robux to play. My one of favourite game in Roblox is Generic Cooking Game. In the game, we need to serve costumers, sweep the floor, and keep the kitchen nice and neat. You should try and download it too!

Roblox is a fun game where we can create, play, explore and I recommend it to everyone!

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Many Experiences to Explore!

Roblox is a fun and interesting game that I started playing a few months ago. It's a fantastic game with a wide variety of experiences to try, including adventures, cooking, simulators, battles, and much more. One of the best features of Roblox is that you can create your own experiences and characters. Some items for character customization are free, while others require payment.

To purchase items, you need to top up your in-game currency called Robux. Some experiences also require Robux to play. For example, Bloxburg costs 20 Robux to access. One of my favorite games in Roblox is Generic Cooking Game. In this game, you serve customers, sweep the floor, and keep the kitchen neat and tidy.

Roblox offers endless opportunities for creation, play, and exploration, and I highly recommend it to everyone!

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Last weekend, I watched a movie called "The Lion King". The film tells the story of a male lion named Mufasa and a female lion named Sarabi. They were blessed with a lion cub named Simba. Mufasa's older brother is jealous of Mufasa because Mufasa is a king. He, who was jealous, killed Mufasa and slandered Simba. I recommend this film because it really excited us. Thanks for listening.

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A Classic Tale: The Lion King

Last weekend, I watched a movie called The Lion King. The film tells the story of a lion named Mufasa and his mate, Sarabi, who are blessed with a cub named Simba. Mufasa's older brother, Scar, is jealous because Mufasa is the king. Driven by envy, Scar kills Mufasa and frames Simba. I recommend this film because it is truly captivating and exciting. Thanks for listening.

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3 weeks ago, I watched a horror film with Iling. We watched the film Siksa Kubur, It's a long film, the film was probaly 2 hours. The film was about a woman and her brother who didn't believe that Siksa Kubur is real, she thought that Siksa Kubur is not real. There was a very scary scene, and my mother said "If you are scared, close your eyes" and I closed my eyes. Bcause the film is too long I can't tell you much, you should watch it.

But I didn't very recommend that movie, because this is a scary movie.

THANK YOU !

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A Chilling Experience: Siksa Kubur

Three weeks ago, I watched a horror film with Iling. We watched Siksa Kubur, which is a long movie, probably around two hours. The film is about a woman and her brother who don't believe that Siksa Kubur is real. There was a very scary scene, and my mother advised, "If you are scared, close your eyes," so I did.

Since the film is quite long, I can't share too many details, but you should watch it to see for yourself. However, I don't highly recommend it because it is very scary.

Thank you!

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Hello everyone today i want to tell you about upin ipin. Yesterday, i watch upin ipin and it was so fun! In this competition. I like this episode because Atok wins in the competition. It is fun and surprising. It is my favourite episode because it is fun and reaches good lesson about family and community. Thank you for listening!