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Hellow everyone! Today, I'll talk about my trip to india.

I'm going to see the Taj Mahal. It's so beautiful!

I heard that the write mable looks very nice in the sunlight.

I relly enjoyed taking pictures at the Taj Mahal.

I'm going to restaurant called Shivpen Ryouri. The food is delicious.

I want to try Indian curry and naan because they are very popular in India.

I'm looking forward to seeing the Taj Mahal again.

That's all! Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! I’m yejun Today, I’ll talk about my trip Boracay, the Philippines. I came here with my family.We spent the whole day shopping and walking around D’mall. It was so much fun. We also went snorkeling and drank juice on White Beach. I’m going to eat some delicious crab at the red crab in D’mall. I’m really looking forward to go on a hopping tour. That’s all! Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone I’m sol.

I’ll talk about my trip to Paris, France.

Paris has the Louvre museum

Many works are very nice.

I'm going to enjoy the art.

Everyone was taking pictures.

I ate steak and drank juice.

The steak was Delicious.

I had dinner and took a walk.

I'm looking forward to the Eiffel Tower.

Thank you for listening.

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hello everyone! Hi, i'm jungwoo! Today, I'l talk about my trip

London, U.K. The main attraction and landmark there is Big

Ben.I'm going to visit Sherlook Holmes museum,.and Im

looking forward to taking a pictures. next,I'm going to eat fish

and chips.That's all.Thank you for listening! I hope you

enjoyed my trip story

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Good afternoon everyone

I'm going to introduce Tokyo, capital of Japan. It is the city I want to visit

In Tokyo, there is famous landmark called Tower. It looks very beautifu I and grand

Tokyo Tower is red. so it stands out among the gray buidings. It gives a nice atmosphere

I want to see the night view at the observation deok of Tokyo Tower and take pictures with my family

sushi is Japan' s most popular food, so I want to eat sushi at a famous sushi restaur ant

I'm really looking forward to it

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Hello everyone!
My name is Im Nam Joo, and today I’ll talk about my trip.
Today, I arrived in Zurich, Switzerland.
I’m going to visit the old section of the city. It’s so beautiful!
I will walk by Lake Zurich and ride a boat on it.
I feel a little shaky, but I can do it!
I’m going to eat fondue—I’m so excited!
Cheese is my favorite food.
I’m really looking forward to this trip.
I’ll take lots of lovely pictures.
I hope you enjoyed hearing about my trip.
Maybe one day, you’ll visit Switzerland too!
Thank you again, and have a wonderful day!

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hello everyone! Hi, i'm jungwoo! Today,I'll take about my trip to London, U.K. The main attraction and landmark there is Big Ben.I'm going to visit Sherlook Holmes museum,and I'm looking forward to taking a pictures. next,I'm going to eat fish and chips.That's all.Thank you for listening! I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone! Today, I’ll talk about my trip to San Francisco.
My family and I came to San Francisco and the Golden Gate Bridge in the USA.
San Francisco is near the sea. The air is fresh and cool.
I’m going to take a picture and walk by the water. It is very relaxing and beautiful there.
After that, I’m going to eat bread at Boudin Bakery Cafe. Their sourdough bread is famous and delicious.
I’m really looking forward to eating the bread with my family.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone.  I'm Minseo. Today I'll talk about my trip to Paris in France. Hi I'm Minseo. I came to Paris in France. There are many beautiful buildings and the Eiffel Tower. I'm going to climb the Eiffel Tower and I'm looking forward to seeing the night view. I ate a macaroon. It was very sweet. but delicious.
You should visit Paris. That's all.
Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone! My name is Kim Hyeon Jun

I'll talk about my trip to Rome, Italy

I want see the Gianicolo Hills view, and the Trevi Fountain

I'm going to walk through the Spanish Steps, and the streets at night.

I'm going to eat pasta at Salumi-Eria.

I’m looking forward to visiting the Colosseum.

That's all! Thank you for listening

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Hello everyone!
I'm Jihee
Today, I'll talk about my trip to Japan
I'm going to do some fun things in Osaka!
First, I'm going to take a picture in front of the Glico sign, doing the same pose.
And,  I'm going to eat at a famous ramen shop.
I'm Tonkotsu ramen looks delicious.
And at night, I'm going to see the neon signs. They're so cool and bright!
I'm looking forward to Japan!!
That's all thak you for listening

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Hello everyone! I'm Dongho

Today I'll tallk about my trip

I'm on osaka in Japan l'm going to go Tsurenkaku Tower

Tsutenkaku Tower from a overlooking night street so beautiful

osaka gundam Expo come gundam figure look at favorite gundam figure buy

osaka hidden gem from eat a Gyukatsu

i'm looking forward to have gundam figures

That's all. Thank you for listening

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Hello everyone! I'm Juwon. Today i'll talk about my trip to New York, America.

I arrived in New York, America There is the Statue of Liberty here, and I’m very excited to see it. I can even go inside the Statue of Liberty’s head. I am going to do it! It looks beautiful. I can also eat a hamburger at the Crown Café, which is near the Statue of Liberty. I’m looking forward to seeing the Statue of Liberty after lunch.

I hope you enjoyed my trip story Thank you for listening

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Hello, everyone! I'm Jihun. Now, I'll talk about my trip to New zealand.

Yesterday, I arrived in Auckland, New zealand.

I checked out Piha beach near the city, Piha beach was cool.

I went Crystal mountain. The museum was full of different ores. I bought something.

Later, I had lunch at a restaurant. Their dessert is Pavlova, It was delicious!

I'm looking forward to enjoying New zealand, I'm going to have lots of fun.

That's all. Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! I’m Sang Yul.

Today, my family and I are going to New York in the USA.

New York is very nice! The big Statue of Liberty and many tall buildings welcome us.

Among many activities, skating on the big ice rink in Central Park looks the most fun.

For food, there is New York bagel. Because I am curious about how it tastes and feels, I want to try it.

I’m looking forward to playing and trying many things in New York!

Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! Hi, I'm YuNa! Today I'll talk about my trip.

I'm in Barcelona,Spain.

The inside of Sagarada Familia,so view was fantasic.

I visited Sagrada Familia,Park Guell and Casa mila.

I'm going to have lunch restaurant.I like the Paella

So,I'm looking forward to visiting in spain.

That's all. Thank you for listening I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone I'm Kim Gippeum Today, I;ll talk about my trip yesterday. I went to Singapore There are many cool places and famous sights like the Merlion and Marina Bay Sands Hotel. I saw the Merlion and enjoyed the view of Marina Bay Sands. The food here is great-chili crab was especially delicious!

I'm going to visit Marina Bay Sands again soon because I really enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to exploring more places and trying different local foods while I'm here.

Thank you for listening

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Dear Elsa

I’m going to Bern, Switzerland, and I will visit Jungfraujoch.

The Alps are beautiful.

There are many places to ski and snowboard.

Swiss Roessti tastes great.

I’m looking forward to buying souvenirs.

From

Anna

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Hello everyone Hi I'm Chaeeun

Today, my friend and I are in Osaka, Japan. We are going to Tennoji Zoo. The animal pyramid is interesting. All the food here is great, but I especially like the kushikatsu. I’m looking forward to seeing such beautiful things. I wish to come again next time.

From, Chaeeun

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Hellow everyone! How are you? I’m fine . I’m minchae! Today, I’ll talk about my trip

I’m in Arizona, USA to see the Grand Canyon.

I enjoyed taking pictures of the canyon.

If you come here, you can walk through the canyon.

Oh, and I bought some souvenirs.

Now, I’m going to eat something! There’s a steakhouse!

I’m looking forward to eating steak.

So I have to go! That’s all. Thak you for listening! I hope you enjoyed my trip story

Bye!

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Dear Kevin,I arrived in Singapore yesterday. I saw the Merlion and enjoyed the view of Marina Bay Sands. The chili crab was delicious!I'm going to visit Marina Bay Sands again soon. I'm looking forward to seeing more sights and trying more local food.Your friend,Summer

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Hi yoad I'm going to take Tokyo capital of Japan. It is the city I want to visit In Tokyo, there is famous landmark called Tokyo Tower. It looks very beautiful and grand Tokyo Tower is red. so it stands out among the gray buildings. It gives a nice atmosphere I want to see the night view at the observation deok of Tokyo Tower and take pictures wirh my family sushi is Japan's most popular food, so I want to eat sushi at a famous sushi restaurant I'm really looking forward to it love Gabe.

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Hi, Soyun!

I'm going to do some fun things in Osaka!

First, I'm going to take a picture in front of the Glico sign, doing the same pose.

Then, I'm going to eat at a famous ramen shop.

I had tonkotsu ramen—it was so delicious!

And at night, I'm going to see the neon signs. They're so cool and bright!

I'm really enjoying Japan!

Bye!

Lim Jihee

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중1 수준에 맞게 다듬은 문장):I'm in Paris, France now. I saw the Eiffel Tower and ate some bread.I'm going to visit the Louvre Museum.I'm excited to explore it and try macarons and traditional French food.I’m really looking forward to seeing the Eiffel Tower for the first time!Bye!필요하면 한국어 해석도 드릴게요:지금 저는 프랑스 파리에 있어요. 에펠탑을 보고 빵을 먹었어요.이제 루브르 박물관에 갈 거예요.그곳을 구경하고 마카롱과 전통 프랑스 음식을 먹어볼 생각에 신나요.에펠탑을 처음으로 보게 돼서 정말 기대돼요!안녕!필요하면 더 다양한 표현이나 추가 설명도 도와줄게요.

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중1 수준에 맞게 다듬은 문장):I'm in Paris, France now. I saw the Eiffel Tower and ate some bread.I'm going to visit the Louvre Museum.I'm excited to explore it and try macarons and traditional French food.I’m really looking forward to seeing the Eiffel Tower for the first time!Bye!필요하면 한국어 해석도 드릴게요:지금 저는 프랑스 파리에 있어요. 에펠탑을 보고 빵을 먹었어요.이제 루브르 박물관에 갈 거예요.그곳을 구경하고 마카롱과 전통 프랑스 음식을 먹어볼 생각에 신나요.에펠탑을 처음으로 보게 돼서 정말 기대돼요!안녕!필요하면 더 다양한 표현이나 추가 설명도 도와줄게요.

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Hello Mom,

Today, I arrived in Zurich,  Switzerland.

I'm going to go to Zurich's old section of the city.

It is so beautiful.

I will walk by Lake Zurich and ride a boat on Lake Zurich.

I feel shaky, but I can do it!

I'm going to eat fondue. I'm so excited!

Cheese is my favorite food.

I'm looking forward to my trip.

I will take lovely pictures.

See you next time~

Nam Joo Im

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Hello everyone! I'm Soyeon! today, I'll talk about my trip. Yesterday, my family and I went to Tokyo and Tokyo Tower, It Japan. It was very pretty. We also went to Sumida Park. I’m going to Tokyo Disneyland to ride some fun rides, so I’m excited! I’m eating yakitori and octopus balls. I’m looking forward to the rest of my trip in Tokyo. That's all I hope enjoyed my trip story Thank you for listening!

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Hello Jiho,

I arrived in New York, America, yesterday. There is the Statue of Liberty here, and I’m very excited to see it. I can even go inside the Statue of Liberty’s head. It looks beautiful. I can also eat a hamburger at the Crown Café, which is near the Statue of Liberty.

I’m looking forward to seeing the Statue of Liberty after lunch.

Goodbye,

Juwon

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Dear Mom,

I came to Rome, Italy.

The view from Gianicolo Hill is breathtaking, and the Trevi Fountain is wonderful.

I walked up the Spanish Steps, and I’m going to walk through the streets at night.

I ate pasta at Salumi-Eria.

I’m looking forward to visiting the Colosseum.

Your son,
Kim Hyeon Jun

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Hi Minji,

I’m going to see the Taj Mahal. It’s so beautiful!

I really enjoyed taking pictures at the Taj Mahal.

I’m going to a restaurant called Shivpen Ryouri. The food is delicious.

I’m looking forward to seeing the Taj Mahal again.

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Hi Somi,
Today, my friend and I are in Osaka, Japan. We are going to Tennoji Zoo. The animal pyramid is interesting. All the food here is great, but I especially like the kushikatsu. I’m looking forward to seeing such beautiful things. I wish to come again next time.

Goodbye, Somi.
Chaeeun

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Hi elsa

Im going to Swiss,Bern arrive is jungfraujoch capital

Alps mts is beautiful

Ski and snowboard is range

Swiss Roessti taste is great

I'm looking forwardto sourenir

Your friend

Anna

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Hi Minji

I'm going to see in Taj Mahal. So beautiful.

I enjoyed taking pictures in Taj Mahal.

I'm go to restaurant in shivpen Ryouri. So delicious.

I'm looking forward to seeing Taj Mahal

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Dear Kevin,

I arrived in Singapore yesterday. There are many cool places and famous sights like the Merlion and Marina Bay Sands Hotel. I saw the Merlion and enjoyed the view of Marina Bay Sands. The food here is great—chili crab was especially delicious!

I'm going to visit Marina Bay Sands again soon because I really enjoyed it.

I'm looking forward to exploring more places and trying different local foods while I'm here.

Your friend,

Summer

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Hi, Somi. Today, my friend and l'm on Osaka in Japan. I'm going to Tennoji Zoo. The animal pyramid interesting All the food here is great but I especially like the kushikatsu I'm looking forward to so beautiful. I wish to go again next time

Goodbye somi

chaeeun

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Hi grandmother, I’m Sang Yul.

Today, my family and I are going to New York in the USA.

New York is very nice! The big Statue of Liberty and many tall buildings welcome us.

Among many activities, skating on the big ice rink in Central Park looks the most fun.

For food, there is New York bagel. Because I am curious about how it tastes and feels, I want to try it.

I’m looking forward to playing and trying many things in New York!

Bye,

Sang Yul

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Hi Jay, I came to Munich, Germany.

The city is really beautiful and full of history. I saw an amazing building that looked like a magnificent cathedral.

I also visited Nymphenburg Palace, which was very large and impressive.

While walking through the streets, I enjoyed the atmosphere and ate a pretzel. It was so tasty!

Munich feels lively and exciting, and I can’t wait to explore more places and try more food here.

Best

은현

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Dear Kevin,I arrived in Singapore yesterday. There are many cool places and famous sights like the Merlion and Marina Bay Sands Hotel. I saw the Merlion and enjoyed the view of Marina Bay Sands.The food here is great—chili crab was especially delicious! I'm going to visit Marina Bay Sands again soon because I really enjoyed it.

Your friend

Summer

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Hi Heonjun, I came to Paris in France. There are many beautiful buildings and the Eiffel Tower. I'm going to climb the Eiffel Tower and I'm looking forward to seeing the night view. I ate a macaroon. It was very sweet. but delicious. You should visit Paris.

See you soon.

Your friend, Minseo.

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Hi mom!

I’m in Arizona, USA to see the Grand Canyon.

I enjoyed taking pictures of the canyon.

If you come here, you can walk through the canyon.

Oh, and I bought some souvenirs.

Now, I’m going to eat something! There’s a steakhouse!

I’m looking forward to eating steak.

So I have to go! Take care.

Minchae

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HI, I'm youngdo! Today, l'll talk about my trip

I came to Roma, Italy. I'm really looking forward to exploring Italy! This afternoon, I'm going to see the Colosseum. I want to jump into the Colosseum and shout inside it. Around the Colosseum, there's a restaurant called La Nuova Piazzetta where I plan to eat pizza.

That's all! Thank you for listening.

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Hello Jiho,

I arrived in New York, America, yesterday. There is the Statue of Liberty here, and I’m very excited to see it. I can even go inside the Statue of Liberty’s head. It looks beautiful. I can also eat a hamburger at the Crown Café, which is near the Statue of Liberty.

I’m looking forward to seeing the Statue of Liberty after lunch.

Goodbye,

Juwon

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I'm traveling in Osaka now Hi young-to

I'm on osaka in Japan l'm going to go Tsurenkaku Tower

Tsutenkaku Tower from a overlooking night street so beautiful

osaka gundam Expo come gundam figure look at favorite gundam figure buy

osaka hidden gem from eat a Gyukatsu

i'm looking forward to have gundam figures

See you later your friend 한동호

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Hi, Hyeonseo,

Today, my family and I arrived in Boracay, the Philippines.

We spent the whole day shopping and walking around D’Mall — it was so much fun!

We also went snorkeling and drank juice on White Beach.

Now, I’m going to eat some delicious crab at The Red Crab in D’Mall.

All the food here is amazing, but I especially love the seafood.

I’m really looking forward to go on a hopping tour tomorrow!

This trip has been fantastic so far.

Your friend,

Yejun

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Dear Kevin,

I arrived in Singapore yesterday. There are many cool places and famous sights like the Merlion and Marina Bay Sands Hotel. I saw the Merlion and enjoyed the view of Marina Bay Sands.

The food here is great—chili crab was especially delicious! I’m looking forward to visiting Marina Bay Sands again.

Your friend,

Summer

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Hi Sammy,
I'm in Kathmandu, Nepal.
There are so many things to see.
I'm going to visit Durbar Square and some temples.
I want to try momo, which is like mandu.
I'm looking forward to tasting momo and seeing the temples.

Bye,
Yoonyujun

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came to Madagascar with my friends.

In Morondava, I saw the tall and beautiful Baobab trees.

I will go snorkeling and see colorful fish.

I ate sweet bananas and mangoes.

The weather is hot, but the sea is cool.

I look forward to seeing turtles.

This trip is very special.

Bye!

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Hello Jiho I arrived New York in America yesterday. There is Statue of Liberty. I am going to watch it so i am very excited. I can enter Statue of Liberty's head. It looks beautiful. I can eat hambuger in Crown cafe.

It is near Statue of Liberty. I'm looking forward to watching Statue of Liberty after lunch.

Good bye

juwon

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Dear Kevin,

Yesterday, I arrived in Singapore. Most places here are really cool, and there are many interesting sights to see. Since Singapore is a city, it has a lot of famous landmarks. The most well-known ones are the Merlion and Marina Bay Sands Hotel.

I visited the Merlion statue and also saw the Marina Bay Sands Hotel—both were amazing! Singapore also has a lot of delicious food. I especially enjoyed chili crab; it was really tasty.

I'm really looking forward to visiting the Marina Bay Sands Hotel again soon!

Your friend,

Summer

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Hi Jay, I came to Munich, Germany.

The city is beautiful and full of history. I saw a really cool building — it looked like a magnificent cathedral.

I also visited Nymphenburg Palace, which was very big and impressive.

While walking around the streets, I enjoyed the atmosphere and tried a pretzel. It was delicious!

Munich feels lively and interesting, and I’m looking forward to eating more pretzels and exploring more places here.

Best

은현

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Hello everyone,

I’m in Barcelona, Spain.

I’m going to spain square and see the Prado Museum in Madrid.

The museum is really beautiful, and I want to see many paintings.

In Spain, the famous foods are paella and Spanish omelet.

They are very delicious, and I’m looking forward to eating them soon.

Thank you for listening

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Hi mom

Im in Tokyo, Japan

Looking forward to seeing Observation looking down city and looking highscape

Eating crepe

bye

daeun

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Hi elsa

Im going to Swiss,Bern arrive is jungfraujoch capitql

Alps mts is beautiful

Ski and snowboard is range

Swiss Roessti taste is great

I'm looking forwardto sourenir

Your friend

Anna

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좋은 시도야 👍 네가 영어로 글을 쓰면서 여행 경험을 표현하려고 한 게 느껴져!

다만 문법, 표현, 단어 선택 부분에서 조금만 다듬으면 훨씬 더 자연스럽게 들릴 거야. 내가 피드백을 정리해줄게:

네 문장 & 피드백

1. “Hi jay l came to Munich in Germany”
→ “Hi Jay, I came to Munich, Germany.”
👉 “l”은 “I”로 고치고, 도시와 나라 연결할 때는 콤마를 넣어주는 게 자연스러워.

2. “I’m going to Munich building so cool! like amugnificent catnedral”
→ “I saw a building in Munich, it was so cool — like a magnificent cathedral.”
👉 “going to”보다는 “saw/visited”가 맞아. “amugnificent catnedral”은 오타 → “a magnificent cathedral.”

3. “look around nymphenburg palae”
→ “I looked around Nymphenburg Palace.”
👉 시제를 맞춰 “looked”로. “palae”는 “palace”로 수정.

4. “in the street eat that pretzel”
→ “I ate a pretzel on the street.”
👉 문법적으로 주어+동사 형태로 써야 자연스러워.

5. “I’m looking forward to eat pretzel”
→ “I’m looking forward to eating a pretzel.”
👉 “looking forward to + 동명사(-ing)” 형태가 맞아.

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Hi ChaeWon.

I'm in Barcelona,Spain.

The inside of Sagarada Familia,so views was fantasic.

I visited Sagrada Familia,Park Guell and Casa mila.

I'm going to have lunch restaurant.I like the Paella

So,I'm looking forward to visiting in spain.

Your friend,CYN.

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문장들이 몇 군데에서 오타나 문법 오류가 있어서 조금 더 자연스럽고 정확하게 고칠 수 있을 것 같아요. 아래는 피드백을 바탕으로 수정한 버전이에요:

첫인상: Hi, I'm Subin.

받는 사람: Sister

여행지 및 도착 표현: I'm in Paris, France, now.

볼거리: Eiffel Tower (watch it), and eat bread.

할거리: I'm going to the Louvre to watch (or "visit" if you're just talking about exploring) it.

먹거리: Macarons and traditional French food.

기대 표현: I'm looking forward to seeing the Eiffel Tower for the first time!

끝인사: Bye!

피드백:

Hi, lm 수빈 → "lm"은 오타예요. "I'm"으로 수정해야 합니다.

여행지 및 도착했단 표현: "be here" 보다는 "I'm in Paris, France, now." 또는 "I just arrived in Paris."가 자연스럽습니다.

볼거리: "Fiffel Towr" → "Eiffel Tower"로 고쳐야 해요.

할거리: "l'm goins to Louvre Waich" → "I'm going to the Louvre to watch it" 또는 "I'm going to visit the Louvre"가 더 자연스러워요.

먹거리: "France traitional" → "French traditional food"로 수정이 필요합니다.

기대 표현: "filrt" → "first"로 고쳐야 합니다.

이렇게 수정해봤는데, 혹시 다른 부분이나 표현에서 더 도움이 필요하면 말해 주세요!

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Hi Mom.

I'm in Paris, France.

Paris has the Louvre.

Many works are very nice.

I'm going to enjoy the art.

I ate steak and drank juice.

The steak was very good.

I'm looking forward to the Eiffel Tower.

Love,

Sol

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Kevin yesterday I came to Singapore in Singapore Most places is very cool and many kind of spectacle,Singapore is a city so it has many sights and it is the most famous landmark is Merlion and Marina Bay sands Hotel,something to do Merlion statue and see the Marina Bay sands Hotel,Singapore is a lot of food most of all eating chili crab it's very delicious,I'm looking forward to visiting the Marina Bay sands Hotel

your friend

summer

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첫인상 Hi, lm 수빈

받는 사람 sister

여행지 및 도착했단 표현 France palis be here

볼거리 Fiffel Towr watcn, eat bread

할거리 l'm goins to Louvre Waich

먹거리 Macaron and France traitional

기대표현 l'm looking forward to Fiftel Towr for tor the filrt time

끝인사 bye

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Hi jay l came to Munich in Germany

I’m going to Munich building so cool! like amugnificent catnedral

look around nymphenburg palae

in the street eat that pretzel

I’m looking forward to eat pretzel

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아주 좋아요! 간단하고 따뜻한 여행 편지를 잘 써주셨어요 😊
이제 요청하신 대로 힌트만 드릴게요:

1) 문법·철자 힌트

시제 확인: "i'm arrive" → 현재완료나 과거 시제를 확인해보세요.

대문자: 도시 이름(예: Zurich, Europe), I는 항상 대문자예요.

관사 사용: "in an old section of a city" → “the city”일 가능성이 높아요.

동사 형태: "I will walking" → ‘will’ 다음엔 동사 원형을 써야 해요.

단어 철자: "favorit" → 스펠링 다시 확인해보세요.

전치사: "walking in Zurich Lake" → 자연스럽게 들리도록 전치사를 다시 생각해보세요.

2) 글 구조 힌트 (시작-중간-끝)

시작: 인사와 함께 현재 어디에 있는지 말해줘서 좋아요.

중간: 볼거리, 할거리, 먹거리가 잘 들어가 있어요.

끝: 마무리도 간단하고 좋아요.
👉 힌트: 여행이 어떻게 시작되었는지(도착 과정이나 첫인상) 간단히 더 써보면 중간 부분이 더 풍부해질 수 있어요.

3) 표현 반복 힌트

Zurich Lake가 두 번 나왔어요. 아래 표현을 섞어 써보면 자연스러워요:

the lake

the water

this beautiful place

beautiful도 두 번 이상 등장해요. 비슷한 표현 예시:

lovely

stunning

amazing

4) 체크리스트 확인

항목 체크 여부 힌트 나라 ✅ (Europe) 도시 ✅ (Zurich) 랜드마크 ❌ 👉 Zurich Lake 외에도 유명한 장소(예: Old Town, Bahnhofstrasse)를 하나 더 써보세요. 볼거리 ⭕️ 할거리 ✅ (걷기, 보트 타기) 먹거리 ✅ (치즈 퐁듀) ‘I'm going to’ 사용 ✅ (2회) ‘I'm looking forward to’ 사용 ✅ and/but/because/so 중 하나 이상 ✅ (but 사용함) 첫인사 ✅ (Hello mom) 끝인사 ✅ (See you next time~) 받는 사람 ✅ (mom) 보내는 사람 ✅ (Nam joo im)

필요하면 이 힌트 바탕으로 다시 고쳐보고, 제가 한번 더 체크해드릴 수 있어요! 😊
고쳐 쓰고 싶으시면 편하게 올려주세요.

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Hello mom

Today, i'm arrive zurich in europe

I'm going to go zurich in an old section of a city

It so beautiful

I will walking in zurich lake,and riding a boat in zurich lake

I feel shaky, but i can do it!

I'm going to eat fondue,i'm so excited

Cheese is my favorit food

I'm looking forward to my travel

I will take a beautiful picture

See you next time~

Nam joo im

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나의 말:

내가 쓴 영어 글을 붙여넣을게.  직접 고치지 말고, 힌트만 주세요. 1) 문법·철자: 틀린 부분이 있으면 어떤 점을 고쳐야 하는지 힌트 주세요. (예: 시제 확인, 복수형 확인)  2) 글 구조: 시작-중간-끝이 잘 되어 있는지 알려주고, 부족한 부분이 있으면 힌트 주세요.  3) 표현: 같은 표현을 너무 반복했다면, 대신 쓸 수 있는 간단한 표현을 2~3개 알려 주세요.  4) 체크리스트: 내 글에 아래 항목이 다 들어갔는지 확인해 주세요. 빠진 게 있으면 "○○ 부분을 추가하세요"라고 힌트 주세요.  - 나라, 도시, 랜드마크  - 볼거리  - 할거리  - 먹거리  - 'I'm going to' 1번 이상  - 'I'm looking forward to' 1번 이상 -and, but, because, so 중 한개 이상 -첫인사,끝인사,받는사람,보내는 사람 Hi Heonjun. I came to Paris in France . They are so beautiful buildigs and Eiffel Tower. I going to climb Eiffel Tower. I eat macaroon. It is very sweet. But taste is great. You going to visit the Paris. Your frends Minseo

ChatGPT의 말:

좋습니다 👍 글을 직접 고치지는 않고, 요청한 방식대로 힌트만 드릴게요.

1) 문법·철자 힌트

시제 확인: 여행기를 쓰는 거라면 과거 시제(ate, was)를 쓰는 부분과 미래 시제(I’m going to)를 쓰는 부분이 섞여 있어요. 시제를 통일하거나 상황에 맞게 조정하세요.

be동사 확인: “I going to” → be동사가 빠져 있어요. (am/is/are + going to)

복수형 확인: “buildigs” → 철자와 복수형 다시 확인해 보세요.

冠詞(the): “the Paris”는 어색해요. 일반적으로 “Paris”라고만 써요.

철자: “frends” → spelling 다시 확인 필요.

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작: 인사와 장소 소개가 들어가 있어서 괜찮음.

중간: 볼거리(건물, 에펠탑), 할거리(등산?), 먹거리(마카롱)도 언급돼 있어 좋아요.

끝: “You going to visit...” → 권유 느낌은 좋은데, 맺음말이 조금 짧아요. “See you soon” 같은 마무리 인사 추가하면 더 자연스러워요.

3) 표현 힌트 (반복 줄이기)

“beautiful” 대신 → amazing, wonderful, pretty

“very sweet” 대신 → tasty, delicious, yummy

“visit” 대신 → come to, travel to, go to

4) 체크리스트 확인

나라: France ✅

도시: Paris ✅

랜드마크: Eiffel Tower ✅

볼거리: buildings, Eiffel Tower ✅

할거리: climb Eiffel Tower ✅

먹거리: macaroon ✅

I'm going to: 있음, 하지만 문법 확인 필요 ✅

I'm looking forward to: ❌ 빠짐 → 추가하세요

and/but/because/so: but 사용 ✅

첫인사: Hi Heonjun ✅

끝인사: 짧음, 추가 필요 → "Bye"나 "See you soon" 넣으세요 ❌

받는사람: Heonjun ✅

보내는사람: Minseo ✅

👉 정리하면: 시제·be동사 확인, ‘I'm looking forward to’ 문장 추가, 끝인사 조금 더 보강이 필요해요.

원한다면 제가 이 힌트대로 예시 문장을 보여드릴 수도 있는데, 힌트만 계속 드릴까요, 아니면 예시 문장도 보고 싶나요?

ChatGPT는 실수를 할 수 있습니다. 중요한 정보는 재차 확인하세요.

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Hi Sammy,
I'm in Kathmandu, Nepal.
There are so many things to see here.
I'm going to visit Durbar Square and explore some temples.
I also plan to take a temple tour.
For food, I'm excited to try momo, which looks like mandu.
I'm really looking forward to tasting momo and enjoying the temple visits.

Bye,
Yoonyujun

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Hi mom!

I’m in Arizona in the USA to see the Grand Canyon.

I enjoyed taking pictures of the canyon.

If you come here, you can walk in the canyon.

Oh , and I bought some souvenirs.

Now, I’m going to eat something! There’s a steak house!

I’m looking forward to eating steak.

So I have to go! Take care

Minchae

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To mom,

I arrived in London,U.K. and I'm very excited.

The main attraction is Big Ben.

First, I'm going to visit the Sherlock Holmes Museum.

Then, I plan to eat fish and chips.

I'm looking forward to eating that food.

bye,

From Jung Woo

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Hi Minseo.My family and I come to San Francisco and the Golden Gate Bridge in the USA. San Francisco is near the sea. I'm going to take a picture and go for a walk, and I’m going to eat the bread at Boudin Bakery Cafe. I’m looking forward to the bread.Your friend, Yunju

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좋습니다! 요청하신 기준에 맞춰서 힌트만 드릴게요 ✨

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좋습니다! 요청하신 기준에 맞춰서 힌트만 드릴게요 ✨

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1) 문법·철자

Kathmandu,Nepal → 나라와 도시 사이에는 쉼표 뒤에 띄어쓰기 필요.

Temple → 보통 특정 사원이 아니라면 소문자 temple 사용.

I'm going to go to Temple and I'm going to do Temple tours → 같은 동사(go, do)가 반복되므로 다른 표현으로 바꾸면 자연스러움.

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2) 글 구조

시작(Hi Sammy) → 있음

중간(내용: 도시, 볼거리, 할거리, 먹거리) → 있음

끝(Bye / Yoonyujun) → 있음

👉 구조는 잘 갖춰져 있지만, **중간 부분에서 연결어(and, but, because, so)**가 거의 없어서 문장들이 나열처럼 보임. 연결어 1개 이상 넣으면 흐름이 매끄러워짐.

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3) 표현

I'm going to가 반복됨 → 다른 표현 예시:

I plan to ~

I want to ~

I hope to ~

Temple tours가 반복됨 → 다른 표현 예시:

visiting temples

exploring temples

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4) 체크리스트

나라: ✅ (Nepal)

도시: ✅ (Kathmandu)

랜드마크: ✅ (Durbar Square)

볼거리: △ (Durbar Square만 있음 → 다른 장소 한두 개 더 쓰면 풍부해짐)

할거리: ✅ (Temple tours)

먹거리: ✅ (Momo)

'I'm going to' 1번 이상: ✅ (여러 번)

'I'm looking forward to' 1번 이상: ✅ (있음)

and, but, because, so 중 한 개 이상: ❌ (없음 → 추가 필요)

첫인사: ✅

끝인사: ✅

받는 사람: ✅ (Sammy)

보내는 사람: ✅ (Yoonyujun)

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👉 정리하면:

띄어쓰기랑 대소문자만 조금 확인!

중간에 연결어(and, so 같은 것) 넣으면 글이 더 자연스러움

볼거리를 1~2개 더 추가하면 내용이 풍성해짐

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원해요? 제가 위 힌트 기반으로 자연스럽게 고쳐진 버전 예시도 보여드릴까요?

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Hi Minseo,

Yesterday, my family and I came to the Tokyo Tower arrive beautiful the sumida park I'm going to Tokyo Disneyland I'm drinking yakitori and octopus looking forward to Tokyo

friend, soyeon

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좋아요! 글 잘 써주셨어요 😊요청

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좋아요! 글 잘 써주셨어요 😊
요청하신 형식대로 힌트만 드릴게요.

🔍 1) 문법·철자 힌트

시제 확인: "Yesterday, I'm in Japan" → 과거 시제와 현재 시제가 섞였어요. 시제를 맞추는 게 중요해요.

전치사 확인: "in Osake arrived" → "arrived"는 어디에 도착했다는 의미이니, 전치사 위치와 어순을 확인해 보세요.

정관사 사용: "the Glico man"처럼 특정한 대상을 말할 때는 정관사 the 사용이 필요할 수 있어요.

스펠링 확인: "fomous" → 유명하다는 단어의 철자를 다시 확인해 보세요. / "plece" → 장소라는 뜻의 단어 철자도요.

문장 구성: "same pose on the sign and take a picture" → 두 개의 동사가 연결되었을 때 동사 형태를 어떻게 써야 하는지 확인해 보세요 (예: 병렬 구조).

🧱 2) 글 구조 힌트

도입: 인사는 짧지만 잘 되어 있어요! 다만 "어디에서 누구에게 보내는지" 더 명확히 해주면 좋아요 (예: "Hi Soyun, I'm writing to you from Osaka, Japan!")

중간: 여행 중 했던 일들을 나열하고 있는데요, 활동 하나하나를 좀 더 연결하거나 설명하는 문장이 있으면 더 자연스러워요 (예: 왜 그 장소가 인상 깊었는지).

마무리: "Bye"도 괜찮지만, 받는 사람에게 작별 인사를 조금 더 정중하게 마무리하면 글 전체가 더 매끄러워져요 (예: "See you soon!" 또는 "Take care!").

💬 3) 표현 힌트

"I'm going to" 너무 많이 반복됐어요. 대신 쓸 수 있는 표현:

I plan to...

I'm planning to...

I want to...

"famous"도 자주 쓰는 표현이에요. 비슷한 표현으로는:

well-known

popular

iconic

✅ 4) 체크리스트

항목 확인 결과 힌트 나라 ✅ Japan 언급 도시 ✅ Osaka 언급 (철자: Osake → Osaka로 수정 필요) 랜드마크 ✅ Glico Man, Dotonbori 볼거리 ✅ Dotonbori의 네온사인 할거리 ✅ 사진 찍기, 거리 걷기 등 먹거리 ✅ 라멘 (donkotsu ramen) 'I'm going to' 1번 이상 ✅ 여러 번 사용 'I'm looking forward to' 1번 이상 ✅ 있음 ("I'm looking forward to Japen!" → 철자 확인) and, but, because, so 중 하나 이상 ❌ 없음 → 예: "I was tired, but it was fun!" 같은 문장 추가해 보세요. 첫인사 ✅ Hi! 끝인사 ✅ Bye 받는 사람 ✅ Soyun 보내는 사람 ✅ Limjihee (마지막에 이름 다시 써준 점 좋아요!)

필요하면 제가 예시 문장도 따로 만들어 드릴게요.
원하시면 알려주세요! 😊

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Hello, mom.

Today, I arrived in Auckland, New Zealand.

I checked out Piha Beach near th city, It was fantastic.

I went 'Crystal mountain'. the museum was full of different ores. I bought something.

Later, I had lunch at a restaurant. Their dessert is 'Pavlova', It was delicious!

I'm looking forward to enjoying New Zealand. I'm going to have lots of fun.

Goodbye mom.

Jihun

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좋습니다! 😊 초안 잘 써주셨어요. 약속대로 직접 고치지 않고, 힌트만 드릴게요.

1) 문법·철자 힌트

문장 "I'm going to take Tokyo" → take 대신 다른 동사를 확인하세요. (여행지에 "간다"라는 의미에 맞는 동사가 필요해요.)

"observationdeok" → 철자가 잘못된 부분이에요. '전망대'라는 단어를 영어로 정확히 써야 해요.

"Japan s" → 소유격 표기 다시 확인하세요. (’s 위치 문제)

"an take" → 관사와 동사의 연결이 어색하니 다시 확인하세요.

2) 글 구조 피드백

시작(인사) → 중간(여행 설명) → 끝(마무리 인사) 구조는 잘 잡혔어요.

다만 중간 부분이 조금 짧아서 연결이 끊기는 느낌이 있어요. 예를 들어 “볼거리→할거리→먹거리”를 조금 더 자연스럽게 이어주는 접속사(and, but, so 등)를 넣어보세요.

3) 표현 피드백

반복된 표현: "I want to"가 여러 번 나올 수 있어요. 대신 쓸 수 있는 표현:

I'd like to

My plan is to

I'm excited to

4) 체크리스트 확인

✔ 나라: Japan
✔ 도시: Tokyo
✔ 랜드마크: Tokyo Tower
✔ 볼거리: O
✔ 할거리: O
✔ 먹거리: O
✔ 'I'm going to': O
✔ 'I'm looking forward to': O
✔ and/but/because/so 중 1개: ❌ → "and" 같은 연결어 추가하세요.
✔ 첫인사: O
✔ 끝인사: O
✔ 받는 사람, 보내는 사람: O

👉 빠진 것: and/but/because/so 중 하나 꼭 넣어주세요!

제가 힌트 드린 거 참고해서 다시 써보실래요? ✍️

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1) 문법·철자 힌트

대소문자: 지명은 Grand Canyon처럼 첫 글자를 대문자로 써야 해요.

전치사: 보통 “in Grand Canyon”보다 “at the Grand Canyon”이나 “in the Grand Canyon”이라고 해요.

복수형: “taking a pictures” → 단수/복수 맞추기 확인.

동사 형태: “I’m looking forward to eat” → to + 동명사 확인.

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작(인사 → 어디 있는지 소개) → 중간(볼거리·할거리·먹거리) → 끝(마무리 인사) 흐름은 잘 있어요 👍

다만 도시 이름이 빠져 있어요. 예: “USA”는 있지만 “Arizona”나 “Las Vegas” 같은 도시가 있으면 더 자연스러워요.

3) 표현 힌트

너무 반복된 표현 대신 쓸 수 있는 간단한 표현들:

“I enjoyed” → “I had fun”, “I liked”

“some food” → “a meal”, “something to eat”

“I bought some souvenirs” → “I got some souvenirs”, “I picked up some souvenirs”

4) 체크리스트

나라: ✅ (USA 있음)

도시: ❌ (추가 필요)

랜드마크: ✅ (Grand Canyon 있음)

볼거리: ✅ (nice canyon)

할거리: ✅ (walk a canyon)

먹거리: ✅ (steak house, steak)

“I’m going to”: ✅ (eat some food)

“I’m looking forward to”: ✅ (있음)

and/but/because/so: ✅ (Oh, and / so 있음)

첫인사: ✅ (Hi mom!)

끝인사: ✅ (Take care)

받는사람: ✅ (mom)

보내는사람: ✅ (Minchae)

👉 정리하면, 문법에서 시제·복수형·to 동명사 주의, 구조는 도시 이름 보강, 표현은 enjoyed/food 같은 반복 피하기 정도만 다듬으면 완벽해질 거예요!

원한다면 제가 틀린 부분을 정답으로 고쳐 쓴 버전도 보여드릴까요, 아니면 계속 힌트만 드릴까요?