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Introduction: contains the problem preview to solution and thesis statement.

Conculsion: Summary of the essay

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Are you sure no personal opinions? Do salesmen give you their personal opinions? How do they make it sound convincing?

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Are you sure no personal opinions? Do salesmen give you their personal opinions? How do they make it sound convincing?

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1)introduction

2)current problem and examples with statistics and stuff...

3) the impact of the situation

4) why should it be solved.

5) what are thedifferent type solutions that are able to be implemented

6) conclusion

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What do you think about the use of emotive language?

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What do you think about the use of emotive language?

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- Clear, concise words that states confirmation

- No biased opinions, all factual and straight to the point.

- Formal language to address the matter. No narrative descriptions

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1. Statistics

2. Expert opinions

3. Credible information, information has been certified by a recognized society, published papers, by people who are renowned around the world.

4. Preface

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1) Introduction of the background behind the problem

2) Current problem and examples/statistics

3) Impacts

4) Why it should be solved

5) How it can be solved

6) Conclusion [restate the problem and the urgency of it]

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1. Relevant opinions and evidence

2. Expertise in relevant fields

3. Good breakdown of evidence and links/mainpoints

4. Certified information provided by

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• No "I think...", "I feel..." or anything that suggests a personal opinion. Use strong terms such as "There is a need....." , "We must..."

• Descriptive language which is paraphrased several times to aid the reader in understanding the proposal

• No ambiguous terms

• Use of formal language

• Emotive language should not be used because it reduces reliability.