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idea 1: waste money
shopping malls have a range of advertisements WITH Vivid and attractive images imagines--> which has an NEGATIVE influence on young people such as compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions,...--> they can BEAR THE WEIGHT OF ALL HOUSEHOLD BILLS [E19]--> Youngsters have a bad --> detrimental quality of life --> yongsters are detrimental to the quality of life.

BE DETRIMENTAL TO THE QUALITY OF LIFE

idea 2: waste time
shopping malls PRESENT YOUNG PEOPLE WITH AN OVERWHELMING  NUMBER OF CHOICES [E41]--> This has lead to making them waste a great deal of time buying--> they have less time for physical activities ,their work and their study,...--> reduce the productivity of working or studying,...

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Idea 1: Waste money

There are a RICH VARIETY OF( E07) goods and ATTRACTIONS ( E28) in shopping malls--> Stimulate buying behaviors --> IT CAN TEMPT THEM TO BUY THINGS THEY DO NOT REALLY NEED (E28) -->  People can  WASTE a lot MONEY   in shopping malls  --> may CAUSE THEM INTO DEBT ( E28 )

SHOPPING MALLS = SHOPPING CENTERS

Idea 2: Waste time (SHOPPING MALL)

Young people want to STAY UP TO DATE WITH THE LATEST FASHIONS ( E48) in shopping malls because there are a variety of FASCINATING AND ABSORBING FASHION items--> So they can QUEUE TO BUY THE LATEST MODELS (E48)-->  IT LEAVES NO TIME FOR OTHER  DEVELOPMENT ACTIVITIES (E28) like reading books, expanding social skills --> RESTRICTED IN TERMS OF GENERAL KNOWLEDGE AND EXPERIENCE OF THE WORLD (E09)

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01: FINANCIAL PROBLEMS

FROM THE FINANCIAL POINT OF VIEW [E019], young people have to MANAGE HIS/HER BUDGET [E019] to PAY BILLS [E019] such as housing, health care, food or education [E027] -> However, due to the advantages of shopping in the shopping centers such as THE COMFORTABLE ENVIRONMENT, THE VARIETY OF GOODS AND ATTRACTIONS [E028]  (THIẾU V) -> It CAN TEMPT THEM TO BUY THINGS THEY DON’T REALLY NEEDS [E028] ->CAUSE THEM INTO DEBT [E028]

02: SHOPPERS ARE BEING PRESSURED OF “FOLLOWERS OF FASHION”

Some adverts often PUT PRESSURE ON YOUNG PEOPLE TO LOOK FASHIONABLE [E02] -> leads to shoppers are not able to SHOWS THEIR INDIVIDUAL CHARACTERS [E02] and they are IN AN ATTEMPT TO BE CONSIDERED FASHIONABLE [E02] in shopping malls WHERE it concludes  the truth of the  LATEST fashion TRENDS  such as WHICH styles or colors they should wear in the season ARE REPRESENTED and so on   -> CAUSE THEM INTO DEBT [E028] because they are influenced due to ADVERTISING AND THE AVAILABILITY OF CREDIT CARDS [E028] -> MAY BE GOOD FOR THE RETAILERS, BUT NOT FOR CONSUMERS [E028]

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shopping malls are the places where the young people STAY UP TO DATE WITH THE LATEST FASHIONS (E48).
-> They ARE SIMPLY PASSING TRENDS (E40).
-> They buy many FASHION ITEMS but maybe never use them once or twice.
-> That COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY (E37)

THE YOUNG
THE OLD

Idea 2:

shopping CAN BE HIGHLY ADDICTIVE (E14) because they ARE INCREASINGLY SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING (E48)
-> Lead to the young people could not MANAGE HIS OR HER BUDGET (E19)
-> Finally, their salary may not BE enough to PAY FOR HOUSING, FOOD, BILLS, HEALTH CARE,
AND EDUCATION(E27)

IDEA 3:

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shopping malls are the places where .... STAY UP TO DATE WITH THE LATEST FASHIONS (E48). -> The young people ARE SIMPLY PASSING TRENDS (E40). -> They buy many things (FASHION ITEMS) but maybe never use them once or twice. -> That COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY (E37)

WHERE/WHEN (RELATIVE CLAUSES) + MỆNH ĐỀ HOÀN CHỈNH

Idea 2:

shopping CAN BE HIGHLY ADDICTIVE (E14) because they ARE INCREASINGLY SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING (E48) -> Lead to the young people could not MANAGE HIS OR HER BUDGET (E19) -> Finally, their salary couldn't PAY FOR HOUSING, FOOD, BILLS, HEALTH CARE,
AND EDUCATION(E27)

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Idea 1:

..(shopping malls). -> The young people ARE SIMPLY PASSING TRENDS (E40). -> They buy many things but maybe never use them once or twice. -> That COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY (E37)

Idea 2:

.. -> shopping CAN BE HIGHLY ADDICTIVE (E14) because they ARE INCREASINGLY SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING (E48) ->  from shopping malls. lead to the young people could not MANAGE HIS OR HER BUDGET (E19) -> ....

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Idea 1: Waste money

Shopping centers provide a rich variety of [E07] items and gather a bunch of many different brands -> be likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before purchase [E39] -> could be seen as a waste of money [E37].

MANY= NUMEROUS = A LARGE NUMBER OF

Idea 2: Waste time

Provide a diversity of interesting leisure activities -> young people can be addicted to those activities -> Lack of time funding for improving valuable life skills through [E14] reading books, researching new cultures, and experiencing working...  -> fewer chances of job opportunities, career progression, better salary [E04].

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Idea 1 financial
Mall sell very in cheap -> young people NEED TO PAY FOR THINGS[E022] -> they can't buy things in shop.

Malls sell very expensive -> young people NEED TO PAY FOR THINGS in shop-> they can't buy things in shop -> they will buy fake things , unknow origin

CHEAP = AFFORDABLE = REASONABLY PRICED
Idea 2 health
Young people spend much time for mall ->...-> they can THE INFLUNCE OF THEIR HEALTH [E048] -> they can be fat because they always think buy things WHICH ARE very reasonably priced in
Malls.

SẮP XẾP LẠI MẠCH IDEA

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Idea1: Wasted
The mall has many discountED items->Go to shopping mall frequently->Made me buy a lot of useless UNNCESSARY  things->Could be seen as a waste of money and time[37]->Not enough money TO Pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education[27]->This will Becomes an expensive and stressful part of daily life[42]
Idea2: Missed
Young people today may have a lot of free time ->Young people spend time wandering in the centers-> miss important time like playing sports or leisure activities ->harm the prospects [05]  ...

Idea3: Social
Young people are increasingly surrounded by advertising[48] promote the desire to buy and consume-> create an consumer attitudes towards life -> The number of products increas-> waste energy and resources ->have negative consequences[23] to the environment

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The negative effects of many young people going to shopping malls.

IDEA1: WASTE TOO MUCH MONEY

Shopping malls are filled with big sales as well as marketing strategies about all products → the youngsters can spend a great deal of money buying a large number of unrewarding clothes, cosmetics,... which they may not utilize on a daily basis → FROM THE FINANCIAL POINT OF VIEW [E19], IT COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY [E37]→ can contribute to personal debt and financial difficulties in the long term.

IDEA2: Environmental effects

Shopping malls are resource-intensive environments BECAUSE of consuming significant amounts of energy, water, and other resources--> THE BIGGEST THREAT TO THE ENVIRONMENT [E11] including: the pollution, environmental degradation and climate change→ lead to GLOBAL WARMING which may HAVE A DEVASTATING EFFECT ON THE PLANET in the near future [E11]

IDEA 3: A SEDENTARY LIFESTYLE
Shopping malls are designed for a variety of purposes (entertainment, purchase, ...) --> spend the huge number of time buying them--> lead to a lack of physical activities--> THE RISE IN OBESITY IN RECENT YEARS HAS ALSO BEEN LINKED IN PART TO THE SEDENTARY LIFESTYLE AND LACK OF EXERCISE[E14]

A NUMBER OF + N(cOUNTABLE)