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Writing Goal - My writing goal is to use various author moves.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on the clarity of my ideas.

Link - https://docs.google.com/document/d/14pbs-Jf9W8E_wfHLZ-jkptvxm9ToLt73p11VTXeug1s/edit?usp=sharing

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The first post under your name should have the follow information:
1. Your Writing Goal
My writing goal is to....
2. Your Feedback Question
When you read my work, I would like your feedback on
3. A link to your WoW  shared with your group members and teacher ONLY!

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If you will be absent, leave a voice recording of you reading your WoW (click the three dots next to camera icon).

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Give feedback to your group members in their post.

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Give feedback to your group members in their post.

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Listen to all your group members, then leave a voice, video, or text response of positive and critical feedback in the comment section.

Use the placemat: Guidelines for Giving Kind, Specific, and Helpful Feedback

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Mia, Evelyn, Nelly, Mariah, Josh, Melika

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Mia, Evelyn, Nelly, Mariah, Josh, Melika

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Jasmine, Sofia, Andrew, Adara, Danna, Jovani

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Jasmine, Sofia, Andrew, Adara, Danna, Jovani

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Yellow

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Kritika, Marissa, Jewel, Jackie, Dylan, Diego T

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Kritika, Marissa, Jewel, Jackie, Dylan, Diego T

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Davin, Brianna, Hikaru, Diego G., Jomari, Emmanuel

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Davin, Brianna, Hikaru, Diego G., Jomari, Emmanuel

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Writing Goal- My writing goal is to remove unnecessary words in my piece of writing.
Feedback Question-When you read my work, I would like your feedback on how to smoothly transition a new paragraph.
Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/17Ezl7_sL75wHKw2eXjMcBDg2iMy43pQt3TemIkKvUzg/edit?usp=sharing

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writing goal - my writing goal is to use the author's moves, styles and devices to build connections between me and other things
feedback question - when you read my work, i would like your feedback on my use of devices and what i can improve in my writing of my reflection

link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N-ZZULf-1dAPKgGubiNYwo5iK4SfYyferAsd5ylsIgE/edit?usp=sharing

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My writing goal is to write more descriptively. Feedback Question - When you read my work, is it descriptive? Is there unnecessary words?

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Writing Goal - My Writing Goal is to have a clear and fluent essay.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on the clarity of my text.

Link -
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LnBjQo3GKckwx_ePQH7-qxaZC9KKfy3fVcHfochZS1o/edit?usp=sharing

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My writing goal is to write better figurative language. Feedback question-When you read my work does it have enough detail.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/119RAHRRuwqQ3Fof8Q-R6__0pgfIVg_RhUcuuISRR1H4/edit

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Writing Goal - My writing goal is to use different author moves.
Feedback Question - when you read my work I want you to see if I used the author moves correctly or how I can add more to my writing.

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My writing goal is to add more details and work on my transitions. I would like your feedback on the way my essay sounds
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wgKcPFZ5alcufRAG99HSBNEQntvcJRcgtT56DCx6VwU/edit?usp=sharing

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Sofia Figueroa - 9th Grade Review Template

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Writing goal- My writing goal is to make sure my writing makes sense
Feedback question- what can i do to make sure my writing makes sense

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My goal is to add more details to my writing to make it more descriptive and in depth for the people that read it so they can understand it.How can I improve my grammar?

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Writing Goal: My writing goal is to use a better vocabulary.
Feedback: I would like your feedback on how I can use a more advanced vocabulary and to remove unnecessary sentences

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sy9PxuJmZlaeyIl0zjR2WW0E5Niwfs5nyecr_eW_ebE/edit?usp=sharing

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Writing Goal: My writing goal is to add one more author move.
Feedback Question: When you read my work what is another author move that I can add?

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My writing goal is to effectively use writing goals and author moves and use less repititions of words in my phrases and sentences- when you read my work i would like feedback on transitions to paragraphs

Link thingy-

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BHYvq8TwyBNJr40vr3KPCsOD7BOuccpATek0rjUn8vk/edit

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writing goal - my writing goal is to write in a way that makes more sense - when you read my work i would like your feedback on how understandable the text was

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MY writing goal is to get rid of unnecessary sentences

https://docs.google.com/document/d/196a-iCOBtqe23niij8xFZ-q9o02Sw2Q0oWppfwEHsFs/edit

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my writing goal is to try to simplify my work , but mainly use a diverse of author moves
how can i improve on my author moves?
when you read my work , i would like your feedback on the clarity of my ideas
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tUHpfIokiAg6TRt-8xf6BG0Azn4Q0zSWQpBLi3ClDAQ/edit

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My writing goal is to use more figurative language

Feedback question - does mine have enough yapping?

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Diego T's writing Goal/ Feedback Question

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Diego T's writing Goal/ Feedback Question

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Writing goal: My writing goal is to write more because I suck at writing and maybe make less grammar mistakes

Feedback Question: How can I write longer and have less grammar
mistakes

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Writing goal- My writing goal is to remove unnecessary words and sentences in my essay
Feedback question- When you read my work, I would like your feedback on better wording in my sentences and my fluency

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My writing goal is making my work more entertaining, please give me feedback on how I should use the author moves to make my essays better.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lh05Addx4UxUNG-RzFxy8AxU3D2YWz4dSKNKk6j21bo/edit

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Thanh - Writing Goal & Feedback Question & Link 

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Thanh - Writing Goal & Feedback Question & Link 

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My writing goal is to use variety and correct author moves and literacy devices.
Feedback Question- When You read my work, please give me feedback on how can I improve, Am I providing at least four of them? What kinds of author moves that best fit and can improve my writing?
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12oXgdJM6hXWOtCdEUTwmNl4M15Au-8sROfE_iVGW9_8/edit

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Writing Goal - My writing goal is to write enough to get a good grade.
Feedback Question - when you read my work, I would like you to know that I really didn't do anything. it.https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gqqHGnEiQjmxhNKux-BUVtakceDrxisAYOFNKY3EvMo/edit?usp=sharing

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writing goal-My writing goal is to stop run on sentences.
Feedback question-How can I use better wording in my sentences?

Link-
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Learning goal - is to check if i have all the required things to get a (4) in the assessment.
Feedback Questions-
1)if the paragraphs are good,or if want to me to add more
2)errors
Link-https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bWOibxdY2-OAUPEOcffiyi3hJ081D9hG8J8JIcL9bng/edit

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Writing goal - My writing goal is to be able to write strongly and have good points in my writing.
Feedback question - When you read my work I would like your feedback on what I should either add or take away.

Link- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Yw6tWM7HNqx_Gzgg4e2l3BvuJp7Fj3XJ9TrBJANV_S0/edit?usp=sharing

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Writing goal - My goal is to use the author's move to make connections with the readers
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like you to give me feedback on how I can improve better in my piece of writing.
Link-https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wvapEWs54CPhWzsJSHcOSPvVgrM_N8Iq_irsm-bDG2s/edit

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Writing Goal - My writing goal is to make sure im using Author moves correctly in my writing.
Feedback Question - When you read my work, I would like your feedback on how to make sure i make smooth transitions in my writing.

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Writing Goal -  my writing goal is to keep my readers engaged
Feedback Question - how can i make my writing simple and interesting

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